[Report This]Date: February 25 2018 1:24 AM Title: The Cycle Continues...
The weekend is here and that means free time!
Cute act between the twins, Casey and Abby. Nice to have more background about Amy, I wonder when we'll get to hear what happened that night since that info seems quite limited. Also, who would have thought that Amy wasn't on the dumb side and actually was pretty intelligent for her species standard lol.
I didn't expect Ebon here at all, to be honest. It was a nice action scene, is pretty cool that Casey now was more useful when facing off the dragon, hopefully, she's not too hurt... Same with the twins, they had quite nice moments to shine on this one. Though, Ebon keeps showing she's a beast. Hope Emma gets better soon...
Now, I wonder if Eve knows Abby is safe. Ebon's health might depend on that. Also, what measures will take the vampire about Ebon. The option to kill her is there of course and she should be really mad right now but she knows that would upset her little Abby. Maybe she'll hurt her to a point she can move? Shrinking her doesn't really seem to be an option but I have to say it would be funny to have a tiny Ebon, maybe being captive by Poppy.
About the next girl, I'm unsure about her species but her powers seem pretty cool. I feel a bit frustrated that I forgot about her previous appearance in chapter 8... For the one in chapter 13, I have to agree that it might be when Abby was saved from the flames. I wouldn't have noticed if I didn't read your comments though. Eager to see what happens to her.
Also, very cute how Casey kept calling Abby her storeen.
See ya~
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed it Kenta :D
Sorry for not replying until now. I got caught up in my next chapter and with school. :(
I was wondering if anyone ever noticed her hands in this but it didn't look like it so I wanted others to have a little hint. I plan on the next chapter coming out soon enough so I hope your patient and will enjoy.
Also, don't worry too much about Ebon. More will be explained later~
Date: February 20 2018 1:33 PM Title: The Cycle Continues...
Okay, I checked again ad again, and the only thing I saw that wasn't really explained was when Abby got burnt, but only the legs were actually burned and when the portal with the hands tried to get her.
Chapter 8
Turning her head slowly, the brunette lower jaw trembled as her eyes tried to process what it was she was seeing. Behind her where the cave wall had once been… was a large murky black spiral of… something. B-But… but it was the two hands coming out of it that rendered her speechless…
Extending through the grim, black portal, both petite pale hands reached forward deliberately slow as they began to lower towards her. They were trying to grab her! Falling backward's, Abby screamed, screamed louder than she thought she ever had. This… this was a nightmare. She had never witnessed anything as horrifying as this! Shrieking in terror, the brunette crawled on her back as she tried to get away from the two seemingly floating severed hands.
Chapter 13
Screaming in pain, Abby cried in agony as she cradled her legs, burns riddling them up to her thighs… but, that’s where it ended. From there up, she was perfectly fine. She should have been a pile of ash after her breath! Dragon fire was the hottest kind of fire the world! She couldn’t have gotten that weak yet!
Did I get any of them correct?
By the way, if you haven't still figured out, I love to make theories about everything and discovering things nobody does. :3
Author's Response:
I did notice and I do enjoy when you make them. It means my stories doing its job. :3
And as for if you got them right... you'll just have to wait and see~. I'll have my next chapter up soon enough~
:p
[Report This]Date: February 19 2018 4:01 PM Title: The Cycle Continues...
OH WAIT!!!!!!! Was the appereance in the nighmares? Is she the one of the dreams?????? As far as I know she had TWO nightmares in which the mystery monster appears, and has blood red eyes, and fangs. But what I'm wondering is.... Was the one in the dreams trying to help her, or did she do the fire?
P.s, it seems like I'm writting too many comments, but I cant help it! xD
Author's Response:
I'll respond to this comment for all since It might be confusing to jump to them all. xD
first off, I love all the comments so enough is never enough, this honestly made my night and is probably going to make me eager to write faster now so thank you for this motivation.
As for your theories, I love them. There's a lot of interesting ideas you came up with but I will say clearly, it is none of the above. ^(*-*)^ - This is supposed to be a hand up shrug person, not a cheering guy... so yeah...
Eve does not have a split personality. Her emotions are simply that. Emotions. They can be refined but even an individual pushed will lash out from time to time no matter how calm they may be. And as for her sister, she is Human, fully. She has a large impact on Eve's character but not with Abby. And lastly, the nightmares. Don't think they are what they appear to be. they hold a strong significance, I promise. But, not to this new girl...
I will say though that the two chapters this new girl appears in, are chapter 8, which is probably an easy guess once you see it. And, chapter 13, which is a much harder one to figure out. If you do however get both I applaud you. This character will have some interesting interactions, I assure you.
I'm actually already starting the new chapter now. I wasn't kidding, all these reviews today have been giving me a lot of confidence and happiness to read. :D
I'll hopefully have it up by the end of the week but I can't promise anything. Life takes precedence regretfully.
Thank you so much for all the reviews and speculations, they were wonderful to read. :3
[Report This]Date: February 19 2018 3:54 PM Title: The Cycle Continues...
Can you give us a hint on the which chapters are the two apperances? Or just a small hint about what happened in the moment? *Insert puppy eyes*
[Report This]Date: February 19 2018 3:48 PM Title: The Cycle Continues...
Wait, wait, wait. I'm having a theory. Is 'Eve' the monster that everyone fears? I mean, like a split personality or something. It would explain how Eve said that the other monster that hated humans was 'sleeping' and would be for a long time. And it would explain the change in behaviour that Even had in the 'Date'. ORRRRRRR, maybe Eve's sister? That would explain why she looks like her, but it wouldnt make sense since Eve was writting the letters to her and she said she was still a kid AND human. ORRRRRR maybe its a monster that can change the appearance, and maybe showed herself before in other's bodies and thats why you said she appeared twice already? Im getting out of ideas xD
Next chapter when? Please tell me its soon, because the cliffchanger you just did, was cruel T-T
Date: February 19 2018 1:02 PM Title: The Cycle Continues...
That was an intense chapter. I got a new found respect for the imps. That was really badass how they protected Abby from Ebon. I know Eve isn't just pissed about Abby getting hurt, either. I found myself laughing when Casey mentioned Amy's obsession with "shiny shit." XD
I'm kinda glad Ebon showed up again but not happy the Twins and probably Casey, got hurt by her. I swear, everytime I read this, I think of it like a manga. I'm curious about this new girl, too.
Awesome work as always, you two. ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot, Nothingness! Hearing you say it's like a manga is a compliment of high regard to me. :3
I'll be going into what occurred there after both with Abby and with Eve and Ebon soon but probably not at the same time. There's a timeline in my head and certain scenarios need be filled first so please be patient with me. ;)
Date: February 19 2018 12:20 PM Title: The Cycle Continues...
That was a good chapter. We got a really nice moment with Casey, Emma, and Ella at the the start. It's nice to know ho wmuch all of them care abut Abby. The relationships between all of them have really grown.
But when Ebon shows up, oh boy. I hope Casey is ok after we didn't see the outcome of the fight. And I was seriously worried that Ebon might end up killing one of the imps. I sure hope they're both alright.
But I really have no clue who this new girl might be, or when her previous cameos were. She save Abby just in the knick of time though. I'm guessing this new girl must know Eve in some way, but their response saving Abby was too coordinated for them to not be working together it seems.
But Ebon is in real trouble now, boy. Eve is angry, really angry. I do hope she doesn't kill her though. I was hoping that they might be able to get her see the lght at some point, and that she could eventually learned to live with Abby as well.
I'm always excited when I see updates for this story. No matter how long it takes to put chapters out, keep it up!
Author's Response:
Does she know Eve? Hmm, possibly~
Or, maybe she just has impeccable timing~
You'll have to wait and see! >:3
I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter Foreignkanto, I wanted to show more of the growing relationships that Abby has with each of the girls and even with the girls who once hated each other. There's an effect of sorts I'm trying to relay and I'm glad you caught onto it.
And I wouldn't worry about Ebon. I have plans for her. Big, plans.
Thank you so much for the review, it honestly makes my day and fuels my thoughts and words to keep writing for everyone. :)