Reviewer: KentaRyu Signed [Report This]
Date: December 04 2017 12:58 AM Title: Something Lost - Part 3

Work kept me away from this longer than expected, but finally I could read it!

It was really sad to see Eve denying she's not human anymore. The method to test it was effective sure, but really harsh. I suppose it was the only way to make it clear to her, I guess...

The naga attack, wow, seems like the tales about Najia weren't exaggerations. Good thing, since Eve was very close on that one. I wonder if that's when Eve started changing her mindset about the kitsune or maybe it was a thing coming forward since she was found by her?

Anyway, time keeps passing. Najia and Eve had a nice and fun relationship until more people got in the picture. I hope Najia picked up Eve's true feelings... Or even if she didn't right there, hope she got to know how she actually feels about her before she got to her current state. And well, I guess Eve was always the jealous kind.

Ebon's apparition but I don't think there're many clues about her past in there, or at least I didn't really notice them. Impressive she was able to fight Eve though. I remember the vampire mentioned that about their first encounter but being it after part of Najia's training does say a lot about it. Also, wonder if she also trained the others.

Feel uneasy about what is to come, since Eve said it was the thing she regrets the most. We've seen Brook is safe already so things couldn't have ended up totally bad, hopefully... Looking forward to the conclusion!

See ya~

Author's Response:

Thanks, Kenta, I really appreciate your review. Things will be finished up soon with Eve's past but once they're done, I expect everyone to see her in a new light. Either way, plans are on the way, but, production for the next chapter might take awhile. Hopefully, I'll have something to show everyone since I got back over to the US. :D

Either way, thanks again and don't worry about not reviewing for a while. Better late than never. it shows you still care about my story after all this time. :3