[Report This]Date: July 23 2017 3:49 AM Title: Shaking hands,
No need to apologize for the wait. I hope everything gets better on your side.
Well, that's a nice start. I always appreciate more of Cas. Is fun and charming seeing her jealous and trying her best for Abby. Though, I don't think I would mind some of that "rancid breath". Quite cute, pouting when the teenager got distracted.
And he rivality still goes on. I guess Eve got the upper hand in this round, she seem to be able to mess with Abby easily and the teenager seems to be more conscious around her. Though maybe the tiny feels more at ease with Casey? Anyway, whatever Eve has to do now seem intriguing. I'm at blank in this one, it might have to do with the way she gets energy but she said she would tell Abby about it later so that might not be that secretive. Also, since they're far from Casey by now, that means Abby is naked at this moment? By the way, typo with "ladder", I think.
So, Poppy. Since there's someone else that can shake Eve out of her usual behaviour. It was fun seeing her getting that frustrated while trying to give her message, even sending her flying. Good thing she's okay. Though, Abby might need some time before seeing that act again. And the little speech she gave about going against her if anything happens to Abby was amusing in many ways, showing her passion towards Abby, another aspect of her personality and simply the way she said it made me smile. Though, again, Abby might need some time to process what happened.
And about Poppy herself, I like her already. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter, got high expectations for her. The personality she seems to have just looks quite fun, same with her speech pattern. And finally, I would like to remark, I want to believe that Abby fell face first into Poppy's navel :)
See ya.
Author's Response: Well, first off Eve doesn't have rancid breath, lol. Casey might disagree however. On regards to Abby's presence she feels very comfortable around Casey, and for the most part Eve as well. More on that will come with time as well.I wouldn't see it as a rivalry as much as two mating Hominal who both want the same mate. ;) Don't worry about Abby's clothes I didn't forget about that piece. XD and ladder might have been... I still struggle with certain phrases. :( I look forward to continue writing for Poppy as well. This will be a fun challenge no doubt. Thanks for the review, your insight is always the greatest. :3