Date: July 09 2017 4:24 PM Title: A minute of peace,
Did I offend you, somehow? Just curious as to why your not answering my reviews.
Author's Response:
Not mad, really not mad. ;-;
Date: July 08 2017 9:31 AM Title: A minute of peace,
Yes! The return of Em and Ella! I love how quickly Abby excepted her role as "Little Big Sis" so quickly. She's really getting use to the girls. The scene when her and Casey got it going on was what really got me laughing. Kari being able to manipulate time makes me think a witch might actually have the potentail to be rank an A-class hominal but I could be wrong. So I guess Casey is starting to develop a crush on Abby, makes me think there might be a scene very later on in the story when Abby will choose who she wants to be her plus one ;) Excellent work as always!
Author's Response:
Sorry for the delayed responce Nothingness, you didn't offend me or anything so please don't think that. D:
Your last review had some kind of a bug on my end so I never wanted to mess with it because I didn't want to have it do it again. For this one, I just haven't logged back in in a couple days. >.<
I really appreciate your reviews, so please forigve me for not writing back, I really do try to do it as soon as I can.
I'm glad you enjoyed Emma and Ella, lol. They're always a fun pair to write for, especially when Casey is involved. The thing about the ranking system by the way, is there more of guidelines. D - A isn't set in stone. Some from one ranking can be more powerful then others of their kind. Em and El are examples of that since they're Eve's familiars making them stronger then normal Imps who are generally slower and frailer. Witches can be just as dangerious as any other Hominal, but you need to figure out how their Energy is being used. If they use it to quickly, they're basically just Humans then making them rather weak in contrast. I hope that helps clear that up.
As for Casey's, hehe, attachment to Abby... Yeah, that one kind of snuck up on me actually. But, I plotted it in and I like what I've made so you'll see what unfolds in time. I hope to have the next chapter up soon so stay tuned. :D
Once more, I'm really sorry for not responding back till now. I absolutely don't want you to think I'm neglecting you or mad for some reason. Thats not really my nature to be. :(
See you soon
[Report This]Date: July 07 2017 3:31 AM Title: A minute of peace,
No problem with your updates being a bit slow or a bit fast, just take your time and release the cahpter when you think is the best to do so.
Anyway, going into the chapter. The mystery of Abby's past just get deeper. I think the howl might be a clue but there's a lot of species that could do that. Certainly there're way less that can manipulate or survive on fire but I can't think of any right now. Also, Casey comforting Abby! >.<
I love to see how their relationship keeps growing, they seem closer each time. The imp are still very cute and Casey is getting better and handing them. Felt a bit bad about how she fooled them but they won't be too disappointed I think, if they ever realize what happened... H-hopefully they'll get something to make up for that.
A bit more into the different species' physiology is alaways interesting, I liked that bit of information about witches. And hopefully that's the only tax for using the time turning spell...
Wonder what is it that Abby's have to be able to command them. Though of course it isn't that powerful, everything would be easier that way. Maybe is just her aura as an older looking girl? Though it could easily have to do with the mysteries surrounding them.
I've also been wondering a lot what'll Abby choose to do when she "gains her freedom". Of course I would be glad if she decided to stay with the other girls but her thoughts should be in total disarray now. Sadly Casey misunderstood her intentions, hope that they can get clear with each other.
And well, clear or not they did got a nice moment together. Different from their first time, it made me happy to see they're both enjoying it his time. Great advance between Casey and her storeen (L)
See ya.
Author's Response:
It could be a clue, who know's. :3
I'm glad you enjoyed the dynamics of the girls in this chapter. I wanted certain scenes to help line up for more to follow like I have with others in the past. Expect more to this extent in the future as well. As for Emma and Ella getting back at her, there might be something coming along the way. >;3
As for her *Aura* it isn't something like a hidden power from Abby's past, I'll say that much. More will go into this later don't worry. On regards to her thoughts, they are quite in disarray. I'm glad you like how its shaped up so far with her and Casey. But, Eve will get her back soon don't worry. She's her Amore after all. :P
Thank you for your review Kenta, as I've said I always enjoy the insight you give me from what you've read. I'll try to update soon. See ya!
Date: July 05 2017 8:26 PM Title: A minute of peace,
Loving the story man. Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thank you... again? xD
Date: July 05 2017 8:26 PM Title: A minute of peace,
Loving the story man. Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thanks man, :D