[Report This]Date: June 16 2017 5:00 AM Title: Drowning in pleasure...
Hey, it's been a while! This has been a rough week os I'm glad to read a new chapter to comfort a bit. I actually read it yesterday but didn't have enough time to write a review, so here's it now.
I really like Brook carefree attitude and her lack of recpecto to personal space, she's a fun character and seems to have brought relief to Abby in more ways than one. The human's allies are increasing and thins bring more acceptance of the situation to the teenager. She deserved a break after all that happened. I wonder which girls know about her, since she mentioned not meeting Kari before. Though since she does the cooking maybe the other do know about her?
Abby suviving the fire is still a mystery and I suppose it'll stay like that for a bit more. If I had to throw a wild guess, maybe it has to do with the fire she experienced as a kid or something but in general I'm out of clues.
Goomies was a nice surprise. She seems really cute. For a minuto I though that maybe Abby was going to be happy of meeting someone around her size... The I was scared while wondering whether slimes would set down for energy or also wanted something more material... But hey, everything ended up being fine so is okay. I guess... At least Abby doesn't seem to really blame Goomie, this ir really a change compared to the start of the story. Also, the slime girl does work as a proof for Eve's kindness.
Brook does has an interesting way for "catering". I was confused as to where this was leading when she mentioned cold water but it seems the result was delectable for Abby. I wonder if Eve knows about this, doesn't seem to be the case.
And now Eve is back. The chemistry she's developing with Abby is quite fun. I'm unsure as who stuttered "she's not my mate" and who yelled. Maybe Abby was the first one? Anyway Brook does seem to know how to tease the vampire, that's a new one. Also, by the mermaid's reaction I suppose the energy she got from Abby is way less than what Eve gave her? If so, is impressive she could collect that much. How she did is another question that remains.
See ya.
Author's Response:
Yeah... sorry about that. I may or may not have been a little down because of the lack of responces to my last chapter. I can't tell if its because people don't like it or not and it made me sad. But, I'm better now, >:)
So I'll be posting sooner this time around. I'm working on the next chapter as we speak!
On regards to Brooks character, all the girls know about her, it's more that each of them don't tend to stick close to one another so they don't really get friendly to them. Some are the exception, Kari and Casey, Kari and Nya, Eve and Brook, etc. With Goomie, It was kind of a all in type of thing. I wanted to use another character I've been dabbling with and at the time it fit in well with what was going on, so I tried it out. It looks like it worked out so I'm happy about that. With Abby, there's still a few things that haven't been revealed yet with her, so what happened with her and Ebon will be shown in time, it wasn't just a fluke. Good idea though on her past tragedy being the reason she survived, I like that idea a little. XD
On regards to both Eve and Abby being caught off guard at the same time, it was Eve who stuttered, not Abby. :P
Eve has a lot of secrets I can't wait to show you all, but don't worry, more will be revealed in the upcoming chapter.
Thank you for your analysis. Its one of the things that make my writing worth while to me. :3