Date: May 10 2017 10:21 AM Title: Who to trust...
I won't lie, I found some satisfaction in Kari telling Casey to shut up lol. I don't have anything against Casey really it's just she's so foul-mouthed and hotheaded that I can't take it sometimes but that's just my opinion. The debate about Eve had my head spinning. The way Kari and Casey made Eve out really didn't sound like the Eve Abby met. I'm thinking Eve has a multiple split personality or something like Moka from Rosario Vampire or Lucy from Elfen Lied (Yup, I am a huge anime nerd 😿). I'm still excited about Poppy as well as to who this mystery girl is who could take on Eve and Ebon. I'm also looking forward to Naija finally waking up as to how her dialogue is and her reaction to Abby plus... There's the fact that she's really busty 😍. I wonder what's going to happen too now that the girls have to face Ebon... As always, awesome work, Sterben and KentaRyu, I had no idea you were a girl! That. Is. Awesome! 🙌
Author's Response:
I to am an Anime nerd :D
As to whom is right you'll just have to wait and see...
I'm glad your intrested in the girls to come. I'm sure some will apreciate the new appearence when she makes her first entrace ;)
Also about Najia... yeah <3_<3
But to my knowledge neither me or Kenta are girls so that confuses me :?
[Report This]Date: May 09 2017 1:50 AM Title: Who to trust...
Hi hi
Abby seems to be taking her changes better than expected, she ain't 100% into it but at least she isn't freaking out. The little bits in which Casey notices some closeness with Abby and how she kept pondering about her liking them now were adorable! And of course, the kiss! >.< Though the idea of them separating at dome point indeed saddens me a bit but that doesn't seem close for now so I don't think there's any need to worry. Casey of course doesn't know that...
Abby got a bit of a hint of how to get into "Kari's route" so I'm waiting to see what she does with that. I'm also happy that Nya's misunderstanding was cleared up, at least the kitty doesn't seem to mind much.
I think I got more clear the extend of Eve's powers but I'm not completely sure about seeing exactly 100% of everything, for the reasons I mentioned before, maybe there's still some more to it? There seems to be a lot more surrounding her. The other girls do have some powerful reasons to doubt her, if she even fought Najia, so it'll be up to Abby what to do about her approach to the vampire. Also I wonder if Abby's calling was enough or Casey with have to handle things for now. They don't have that many options from here on. And the chande she did to Abby is something else to thing about, rather than just "releasing" her libido it seem to go further, maybe as removing limiters on her attitude? Like self consciousness os something similar.
I'm not really sure about the change you mentioned... If I've to guess, is it the way things are developing? Usually Abby's encounters with the others had been 1-on-1 at least for the most part but here goes more for a group encounter, specailly in this chapter. If it is that I think it has shown little by little since the start of the story. Is something I noticed before, this one seems feels more of a group story than PLD. In here it isn't weird to be more than two important characters at the scene and I like that, I like the way they interact with each other and you can get either the fondness they got from one another or the friction between them. I'm not saying a "group" story is better than a "close encounter" one, they're just different, they get handled in different way, but I really like the way this one is going. Then again it could be you were talking abput something else and I totally missed the point ;_;
Just and extra thought, that monster ranking from before, does it include eastern species? Or maybe is just the ones found at Ireland.
Also, “Of all the girls that Najia looks after, there’s only three who could actually hold a candle to Eve if it came to a fight, and that’s just a theory.", Ebon, the one "they don't talk about" and... Did Abby just overlooked something? I wonder if it's one of the other A ranked species, or maybe the one Ebon is taking care of...
Anyway, as always, I'm eager to see more of this, but take your time to have it done in a way you're pleased with.
See ya.
Author's Response:
On regards to Eve, all I can say is you've only seen the tip of the iceberg. I have big plans for here don't you worry. :P
I'm glad you liked how Casey is handling Abby's sudden changes. I figured it would be a good way to show where they stand now compared to say chapter 5 or 6.
Also for the changes to Abby, you are correct. She wasn't just changes in one way, and to the extent of which will be shown as the story progresses. As for the change to the story, thats pretty close but don't worry about it. ;)
I had some stuff I needed to add in which is for my own entertainment later on. The pay off will take some time, but I expect a certain individual to appreciate it very much. :3
As for the ranking system, it was developed in Ireland, not in another country. While it could be known there because of how acute it is, it certainly doesn't go over other unknown species. Hope that helps.
And, also in regards to your last question, Ebon is one, Najia is the other. She never said the third.
Thank you as always for the review Kenta, you're astute as always! :D