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Reviewer: KentaRyu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04 2017 3:49 AM Title: Twice shy,

Hey, nice to see a new chapter.

Eve's effect on Abby seems to be quite strong, though if is any similar to the imp's magic, her own desires might also have to do with it. I'm also unsure whether the teenager was hearing Eve directly or just the effect of the order she got. Anyway, Abby is going through a lot of changes now which might come as a shook when she rcovers her composure but maybe she'll be better than before if she overcomes this? At least Eve didn't seem like she tried to do any harm on her.

I fangirled a with when I read how worried Casey was for her tiny companion, I just like seeing their relationship progress. It'll be interesting to see how she and Kari will react to seeing Abby like this, as it obviously isn't a normal situation. Also, poor Nya, hope that the misunderstanding gets fixed soon.

I'm interested in knowing more about Poppy.

See ya.



Author's Response:

Well... thats to be seen I'm afraid ;)

I like my secrets and what Eve does with Abby is definitely a secret I shall keep to myself... mostly. xP

And you're right on that, Abby will be changing quite a bit. We'll just have to see wether its for good or bad. Who knows, she might not take to this *gift* at all and becomes even more fearful of Monsters... or not. :P

Also, I'm glad you like Casey, I got a hunch she was your favorite and can confirm from seperate occations this to be true to. Expect her to have more to play as well. I plan on all the girls to have a role so look foward to that.

As for Poppy, I see people requesting and guessing her to be next but i'll keep that to myself as well. You'll enjoy her though, I know I do. :D

 

Thank you for the review Kenta, I always love 'em!

 

P.S. Don't feel bad for the little Neko, she'll be petted again soon!

Reviewer: Nothingness Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02 2017 8:36 AM Title: Twice shy,

I like the way Abby reacted when Kari told her Casey went to see Ebon to get her back which was a great way to show us both how potentionally dangerous Ebon is and how much Abby is starting to like the girls more, even being ecstatic to see Nya again. You left us with a awkward and funny cliffhanger there too which also made Nya all the more lovable lol. I find it actually nice that Abby is starting embracing the pleasure she's getting from the girls. Poppy is also going to be introduced next chapter I'm guessing (No need to tell though lol) so that's another monster girl for us. I'm curious about her dialogue too, she's really cute! :3 Btw I owe you a rating but this is the best I can do: 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Author's Response:

Hmm, intresting guess, you'll have to wait and see ;)

Thank you for the review Nothingness, you know how I love them so~ :D

I'm glad you liked seeing how progression is going with Abby. Expect more things to go in that way as the chapters come out. I'll be doing more with Eve as well in the future, her hand has yet to be revealed. See you soon. :D

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