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Reviewer: foreignkanto Signed [Report This]
Date: April 15 2017 3:42 PM Title: Impatience is a virtue...

Hey man, loved the chapter. It's a cool thing you're doing with Abby, as she's slowly starting to enjoy being used for her energy. And those imps were so fun. Their energy was such a cool thing in the orgy scene. And this new mistress seems i teresti g. She doesn't appear to harbor I'll will towards Abby. I'll love to see what she does.

Author's Response:

Did you review me twice?

Reviewer: foreignkanto Signed [Report This]
Date: April 15 2017 3:42 PM Title: Impatience is a virtue...

Hey man, loved the chapter. It's a cool thing you're doing with Abby, as she's slowly starting to enjoy being used for her energy. And those imps were so fun. Their energy was such a cool thing in the orgy scene. And this new mistress seems i teresti g. She doesn't appear to harbor I'll will towards Abby. I'll love to see what she does.

Author's Response:

You'll find out shortly Foreignkanto. Preperations are already underway for the next chapter >:)

Thank you for the review :D

Reviewer: KentaRyu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 15 2017 12:06 AM Title: Impatience is a virtue...

Hi.

So the twins ended up being imps, I suppose their size was a good enough clue. They were adorable, specially their personality. It seems even Abby wasn't totally able to resist, maybe a sign of more change in her way of seeing the world? Though what happened next must have been a huge impact too, I wonder how she will react to that after waking up... I'm unsure whether something just awakened in teenager or is some skill the imps aren't aware they have. I'll go for the latter option for now, it would make sense with why they thought the other humans gave them their energy willingly.

The mistress raises some questions with her arrival to the story. For now I'm supposing she's a the vampire. The biggest wonder for me thought is how she got to know Abby's name, since knowing she's in the cave was already quite impressive. I can think of some possibilities such as using bats as familiars or another powers attributed to vampires like transformation to get the info but since vampire legends change a lot I can't really tell what she might be or not be able to do. Then again I can't be totally sure she's a vampire either... And finally I'm curious as the reason why the imps follow her. For now since she seem to want to talk Abby might be out of danger. Hopefully.

As for the draining time, it was really well written. I like it a lot. The imps seem really experienced in this and they sure showed it to Abby. The part about pressing her agains her navel was a little nice bonus for me, because of personal taste.

See ya.



Author's Response:

I thought their sizes would have given it away before but I'm glad it didn't. It made the surprise all the more exciting lol. As for what befell Abby, more to come in the upcoming chapters. :3

 

Their Mistress as well will be revealed in whats to come so I won't spoil anything. I'm glad your getting into it Kenta, and I'm glad i fullfilled a personal prefference. I'll note that down for the future :P

 

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