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Reviewer: KentaRyu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 12 2017 2:43 AM Title: Double trouble...

No need to apologize for publishing a new chapter, it's not like you're forcing them to read or something. Though the interesting plot is indeed making me read it ASAP xD

The relationship Casey has with Abby is so sweet, I like a to their excahnge at the beginning and how the dullahan worked so hard to keep her out of danger, even if she failed at the end... Hopefully she can get back to the tiny before something bad happens.

This was more of a show of strenghts. Certainly the humans have a lot to fear if thoe species can do so much while being that young, even if they standards they're teenagers, I guess the only advantage humans have is numbers? And I suppose those are the twins that Casey mentioned before, maybe devil girls or succubus going by the pics. I actually thought that the twins might be harpies so I guess I was wrong on this one. I'm eager to see what they might do. Maybe in other scenario Abby wouldn't be as intimidated by them, since they're relatively short. Though after that display of power there're not two ways about it... I wonder if Casey would've been able to easily handle one of them? Maybe the reveal of their rank might clarify that, I'm a bit curious about under which criteria the rank is choosen.

And there's also the question as to who is her mistress. I'm a bit confused about what they were looking for. I thought it might be Casey but since they were curious about her in the end it might not be? Or maybe they just didin't get enought information from their boss.

Anyway, this is looking really interesting. Good job as always.

See ya.



Author's Response:

Wasn't really apologizing for my chapter lol, It was more that I was posting them to fast since some people might not visit the site a few days at a time. The chapters might get backed up and I know sometime's people don't have the time to read them. :(

I'm glad you like where this stories headed and don't worry, a lot of the questions you have will be answered in the near future. As for the two girls where it left off, that will also become clear next chapter. I'll try to post it soon. :D

Thank you for the review Kenta, I'll be leaving you one soon~

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