Reviewer: KentaRyu Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09 2017 3:34 AM Title: Comfort in tragedy...

......... Dammit, you made me cry a bit ;_;

The first part was really sad, the whole being displayed alive thing sounds completely horrifying. And just thinking her mother might still be like this to this day is even worse. I'm not sure if I want to know what happened to her body. Since some time has passed since then I'm sure Casey has accepted what happened to some extend but still.... Damn.

Then Abby's past which was also really sad, her mom doing that to save her... It's also a wonder what happened to her father. I think the whole thing hasn't been told yet? For a second I thought the figure she saw might be actually a human but since he walked through the fire he should be from a different species.

The girls finally could find comfort in each other. It was a touching moment, they finally left their differences as species aside and embraced each other as live beings that care about the other. I really liked the way Abby tried to hold the Casey to console her, even at that size. She couldn't do much but I want to believe Casey appreciates that, and Abby too when the dullahan did the same for her. Abby might have felt relatively safe with Kari or Nya but I'm sure she just got to a deeper level of trust with Casey.

And for the second part, I'm note sure if it's because she took off her head, or because she could finally take a bit of a load off her shoulders after telling her story or for sharing an intimate moment with Abby, or maybe all of them, but was Casey acting a bit different after that. More playful, happier. The way she acted was really cute.

And of course, the grand finale. I was wondering how far you would go with the monster girls, as in if you were going to use regular interactions for those parts or make use of their characteristics as monster girls. I'm happy it was the second. Separating her head and using it in that way with Abby in the middle was great, I really enjoyed that. And well, this chapter as a whole.

I have some doubts though, for curiosity. Casey said that humans are mostly attacked because of their energy. Those that means that all the victims are raped or do they "settle" with other fluids like blood? And because of the thin with Ebon in the chapter before I suppose her species does eat, so maybe they also get some energy like that? I mean, Casey seems to be able to eat but don't get anything from it. Ebon seemed to be doing that as a necessity. I also forgot to mention this last chapter but I think she's either to young to be able to fly correctly (or well, land) or injured somehow. I lean more to the second option.

See ya.

Author's Response:

Then, I guess I did my job. I don't want my stories, any of them to be read from point A to B with happy endings. Throwing reality in, as dark as it may be shows more for what the world really is to them. Sorry for making you cry. ;-;

On regards to Abby's past, for now it's on hold. We don't need to delve into it just yet, but don't think it's over. As for it being a human whom came, I wouldn't say that either.

As for Casey acting differently, you can attribute that to her head no longer being attached. When it's off, expect her to be a different girl entirely. Almost like a split personality. Also, I do plan on using the Monster aspect of Monster Girls if thats what you meant. Don't think i'd limit the potential for each girl to act accodingly towards their own kind. You'll see soon what I mean.

In this world. from the context I used, energy, is the essence in any form from a human. Sweat, blood, other... fluids. But that doesn't rule out other parts as well. Bone, meat, flesh, e.t.c. Pretty much all Monster's need some type of energy to maintain themselves and it comes down to which ones they want. Some can be harmful to humans, other, not as much if they lose them. Make sense? That being said, only some Monsters need to go that far. For the more beastial type monsters, energy is needed, but so is food. Ebon as you'll find out will have some more explained towards her actions later. And about her sudden... landing. Wait and find out. ;)

Thank you for the inquisitve review Kenta, I love how you go into detail about what you think. :D

See ya.