Date: November 13 2016 7:55 AM Title: The Storm
I like it. Please continue and finish the story.
Date: October 29 2016 7:49 AM Title: A hand job
Cool doing great
[Report This]Date: October 29 2016 4:46 AM Title: A hand job
Sadistic and erotic. I like it, lol
Date: October 28 2016 10:58 AM Title: The Storm
I like what you set up here. Seems like very good potential.
I agree with Tigernach, insertion is a fun tag, but since it's your story, you decide what you want.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: October 26 2016 9:03 PM Title: The Storm
Like how this is going keep up the good work!!!!!
Date: October 26 2016 4:48 PM Title: The Storm
Seems like a pretty good start. Interesting how you used the second person.
Here's hoping that the rest of your story follows through.
Date: October 26 2016 11:47 AM Title: The Storm
Great start! But unlike the previous reviewer, his interests are not mine: I like the adventure, body exploration, mouth play and insertion tags best. Looking forward to future chapters.
Date: October 26 2016 10:58 AM Title: The Storm
Hola,me ha gustado mucho tu relato,ojala fuese a tener un personaje bbw,un saludo y enhorabuena
[Report This]Date: October 26 2016 10:55 AM Title: The Storm
That was a brilliant opening. Perfect ratio of dialogue and description. You've built it up quite well. I choose to believe that she's a total nymphomaniac, which explains her behaviour.
Just to me a favour please.
Do the 'Butt' tag justice! :)
Thornton