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Reviewer: jessebona Signed [Report This]
Date: March 12 2017 1:31 PM Title: Prologue

Honestly, as good as these stories are, I feel like this one has been dragging on a bit. I get you were going for a plot heavy story but I've caught myself thinking that it's just taking too long to get anywhere.

Reviewer: Js23 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 08 2016 6:08 PM Title: Prologue

Keep at it, I really hope this turns out to be Ryan's takedown

Reviewer: adamnight Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 06 2016 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 4- The Rebellion

maybe try to add some tags to better find this story. really enjoyed it.

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: October 23 2016 6:33 PM Title: Prologue

I can hardly wait to see what happens.

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