Reviewer: IamtheWalrus Signed [Report This]
Date: June 03 2018 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 22

Hey buddy! I'm SO HAPPY to see the next chaptetr of this amazing story! And it was worth the wait! The perfect capper to a good day (due to me just getting home from seeing Deadpool 2) and the perfect lead-in for a week that's going to be quite hectic. Anyway, onto the chapter itself. 

I was wondering how you would handle the Indian girls being taken from Tiffany, and I'm quite pleased with the result. She hasn't been excatly eager to be around them. So her happily agreeing to give them up was beleivable and funny. 

I'm intersted in what kind of backstory Celly has. I look forward to seeing the answer.

Also, nice detail having Blair being reformed from the rampaging ways but still kinda longing for the life. And on the opposite side of the coin, nice job having Tiffany kinda start to change (just barely) by wishing Thomas to keep his legs! lol. 

Good world building by addressing how the giantesses have amazing future tech like the portals but seem at more or less the same techonological level as humans. On another level, this also helps address why despite their being giantesses for all of human history how the humans hadn't already been conquered by the giant women. Civil war and rebuilding themselves afterwards goes a long way to explaining that. Nice job. 

I like the idea that Tiffany doesn't many friends or desire to make them. Makes her feel more, for lack fo a better word, human. And it gives justifaction for why she cares about Thomas so much. 

Sorry for being so obvious but of course my favorite parts of this chapter were Gwen and Trisha. Gwen's thoughts on herself when hearing Justin's story were great. But even more so was the reveal that despite not meaning too, she kinda goes against it by taking things too far by shoving Trisha into Bree's chest. Speaking of which, that scene was...SO HOT! The fact that Trisha didn't want it and was sobbing while being powerless to stop it only made it hotter! ;) Uh...is that messed up? lol.

Either way, I look forward to seeing how Trisha reacts to that and how Gwen in turns handles that. I'm unsure how it will go. There will likely be some drama and bad blood but I hope they get past that...maybe with Gwen "making it up" to her pet girl later? ;)

So, all in all, this was a GREAT chapter and I'll eager look forward to the next one! :)

Author's Response: Yeah! That update finally came! Thanks so much for the well thought out review and giving me the motivation to get this chapter up through our chat. The girls were expendable to Tiffany anyways and Thomas knew that so he played it in their favor. I also like the nickname you gave Cecilia there, too. Hopefully the next chapter shines some light on her past. Whether Tiffany reforms or not is up for debate but we can see a few hints that she might change. You need to be more clear about how much you like Gwen and Trisha because I had no clue ;p I don't think it's messed up that Trisha's humiliation at the hands (or hand) of Gwen and Bree's tit was one the sexy part. I don't speak for everyone but the humiliation of the smaller being and the hands of the giantess is the most appealing aspect of this fetish. I admit being a fan of it myself but hey, at least it's just fiction. Thanks again for the review.