[Report This]Date: February 05 2018 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 20
I gotta give you massive props for the Beverly nightmare sequence. Probably the smuttiest sexiest thing you've done felt like it could be real and in her character, but finding out it was a dream made it even better because it goes to show the huge effect her actions are having on Zeke's mental state while she's never meant to hurt him and in fact has been a rather sweet and loving girlfriend to him. The fact that its indirect makes it seem that much more sinister and powerful.
Author's Response:
You can always count on nightmares to show the disturbed mental state of a character. You couldn't have broke down the unintentional pain Beverly is inflicting on Zeke any better. Thanks for another one of your reviews, combine45.
[Report This]Date: February 01 2018 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 20
Hey buddy! Its so good to finally see this story be updated! I'vew been looking forward to this. Also, thanks for the shout out to my story! That really made my day to see. :) Anyway, onto the chapter itself.
This starts out on a good place with Zeke's nightmare. The hotness of the early part clashes nicely with the horror of the later part. I may have mentioned this before but I also enjoy that you are exploring the toll that Bev's nature plays on Zeke, as well as Bev really loving Zeke. It adds some nice depth where they easily couldn't have been any.
Moving on, let's talk about Anika and Mildred. It appears that they may be leaving this story soon. I have mixed feelings on that. On the one hand, it would be the best option for them. But on the other, I kinda like them suffering at the hands of Tiffany and Sophie because its hot! lol. I'll just have to wait and see how things go at the meeting.
On a side note, if Anika and Tiffany are taken out of the story, I would like to offer a suggestioin that I know likely won't be used. lol. Here it is anyway. What if as a way to help slate Tiffany's desire to kill and domiate tinies, Thomas asks Gwen how she found Trisha so Tiffany can find a petist who would willingly be owned by them? And of course, if you did this, the tiny woman in question should be a lesbain, so Tiffany wouldn't get worried that the new little lady might steal Thomas away. Let me know what you think of this idea. Like I said, I'm all but ceratin that this won't be used in anyway! lol
Also, I was a little shocked to see Tiffanty actually kiss Thomas. Has she done that before? And does that mean that her feelings for Thomas are developing more maturely?
The copcept of the giantesses basically copying tiny culture for their own is interesting. I like it! lol
But as you shouldn't be shocked to learn, the scene with Gwen and Trisha was my favorite! I LOVE those two! Also, I like how Gwen was lusting after the Indian cuties! Gwen's mentality in general is my favorite in this story, kind and humane but unthinking and treating tinies like beloved objects or pets. I always hope there is more of them in this story, and I eagerly await the arrival of Gwen's birthday party.
This chapter was a delight and I hope you keep up the good work! :)
Also, sorry about not reaching out to you in a while, I've been distracted too. Want to respond talking via email?
Author's Response:
Glad to know the shout out made your day, man. :) Hopefully if you have the time or if you plan on continuing your story, we can see more of Anaya's amorous antics AND your other ideas ;)
Yeah, the affect Beverly is having on Zeke's mentality is very apparent. Let's just hope it turns out good for him. As for Anika and Mildred leaving, anything could happen.
Now there's an idea. Tiffany getting a petifist, (ideally a hot lesbian because hell yeah!) to cope with her tendencies sounds awesome. You know me too well, IamtheWalrus, how I don't usually use the sexy ideas (shame on me) you give me but who's to say I won't surprise you and everyone else. This idea of yours does give me an idea though so I might consider it.
I can't say Tiffany sees Thomas romantically. The way she kissed him could probably be compared to a little girl giving her puppy a kiss. I think one could say although Tiffany has some respect for Thomas, she still sees him as something that's hers like for example she picks him up without his permission sometimes.
How did I not know Gwen and Trisha were your favorite? ;p Gwen being at that age where she's just horny is probably why she's like that lol and soon we will see her birthday :D
We can talk via email whenever you like. Thanks for the review as always.
[Report This]Date: January 31 2018 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 20
WHOO! I thought you'd abandoned this story! I'm super happy to see it back! The dream sequence with Zeke was probably my favorite part of the chapter just because of how plausible it was. I'll give her credit tho, Beverly isn't really a good person imo but she DOES care about Zeke. Anyway the rest of the chapter was okay, I liked the bit with Cecillia where she talks about how they use things invented by tinies and enjoy their culture but still kill them. REALLY powerful words she gave there! It's really funny seeing her contrast in how she treats other giantesses vs how she treats tinies. She's all cutesy, nice girl with tinies but is a snobby prick to any giantess, even those that don't kill tinies! It makes for funny moments imo!
As for Tiffany, well she's attached to Thomas and basically will do almost anything to keep him happy at this point. I can see this backfiring if he pushes his luck but the fact that he came back to her even tho he had a way out speaks volumes, he definitely won alot of points with Tiff methinks. I'm glad this is back, I'm hoping for more updates soon!
Author's Response: Haha! Yeah. It really has been a long time. Don't worry though, I had no intentions of abandoning the story. Life got in the way at one point and when I actually did get free time again, it was serious writer's block and a sense of insecurities about my writing. Still, not a day past when I couldn't help but think about the story and what I wanted to happen. Looking back at you and everyone else's reviews gave me courage to keep writing. Cecilia is a unique character. It's night and day with her when it comes to giantesses and tinies, respectively. I guess what makes it interesting is how she's not only huge, at least compared to the smaller folks, but has an seemingly infinite amount of money yet is ridiculously loving to the smaller population. Her words about the hypocrisy her kind displays is pretty much like an activist. The concept of her treating the smaller race better than her own kind is pretty funny now that you mentioned it. ;p Beverly is a lost cause as far as I'm concern. Her sadist nature though has been dragging Zeke down which as we can see is playing on his mental state. You're right about Thomas. Let's hope he doesn't overly use the influence he's been having on Tiffany. As for Tiffany, I do have some ideas to make her stand out more. One of those ideas might shock you all but who knows what the future tells, how the story might unfold and what is expected next. As for updates, I will tell you all if there will be another hiatus. I had my work schedule managed to be more reasonable so I don't believe there will be another delay, at least not as big as this one. Thank you for your reviews as always, geeman. I always look forward to your thoughts and opinions :)
[Report This]Date: January 30 2018 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 20
Glad to see this story is back! I remember reading it a long while back and thought it was fun. I like how all the different characters have moral compasses that point to how they should treat tinies!
Def giving this a follow since I hadn't already!
Author's Response:
Thank you, johnrussi. Your praise is much appreciated. I look forward, like so many others, to more chapters of Puberty as well.