Nice story man, just finished it, a bit late but nevertheless it was good. Anyways, is it going to continue or na lol 🤔💭😆

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IMO, this story is THE best in the site. I love the characters, story, lore, everything! So, it's quite a shame to see it be in a long hiatus.

Although, I do understand if you're busy with stuff in real life. I've read your reply to a review from a few months ago and it seems that you are. So, I can at least say that I hope that you're doing well right now, man. Have a nice day! Would love to have you back writing, but do take your time if you need it!

I want to say I've followed this story a while and finally felt I should review. It's one of my favorites and I enjoy your style of writing. It's a random comment but I love how moments like when Tiffany tosses the car over her shoulder in the first chapter, or the vending machine later on. Or Beverly poking fun of the girl's breast size. Attitude and what is said are things I really enjoy with stories like these.

I like how you have made a wide range of unique characters, I feel the general theme of the story is the movement toward ending rampages. Something tells me Bev is one rampage away from Zeke breaking down on her. I could totally buy into the idea of her crossing her fingers and telling him she is done, only to sneak out at night or something. Tiffany on the other hand, I halfway expected her mom to make her join her on a rampage, which she would discover Thomas was influencing her daughter, but maybe she doesn't care so long as Tiffany is happy. Tiffany could by her own go back to rampaging if the next meeting ends in disaster I feel. Lastly I think there is no giants because the giantesses need the tiny men to have children, but they can only give birth to girls. It would explain why the cultures are basically the same.

Author's Response:

Thanks for taking your time to leave a review, Gtslover. Glad to hear you like the little things in the story. I feel like thye character's attitudes and a few arguments here and there gives a story some spice so I make it an effort to add those things when it's appropriate.

Chapter 14 and Chapter 15 are the same, and I think the real Chapter 15 is missing.

Still alive? Maybe not...

Besides some spelling mistakes here and there, this story is the shit. I really like the interactions between the characters for instance. Not to mention, the way thick/curvy women are portrayed as well. Honestly I really like Blair and Sophie. I guess thick milfs for the win. Anyway, keep up the good work my dude :)

I have to make this quick but I really really wanted to leave a review for you because this is one of my favorite stories coming out of Giantessworld right now. I'm more invested in the actual story than just the giantess stuff which for me is pretty rare. The character interactions are nuanced moments you have are beautiful. You really have a way of writing small character moments well as while I really want to see Beverely eat as many people as possible I still mourn every victim (like poor Kate from Chapter 17 who was revealed this chapter to have been devoured :'( rest in peace, in Beverly's bowels). That being said I truly am rooting for most of the characters, good and bad. I want Cecilia to be liked by Samuel Smith, I want Tiffany to be kind hearted, I want Abraham to admit his feelings to Lia, I want Mildred and Anika to get home safe, I want Zeke to keep loving Beverly, but I also want Beverly to wreck house. I really want Thomas and Tiffany to never fight and stay friends. I am more invested in these characters as actual people then for a majority of people in regular series I watch, and yu have actual conflicts in between making everything not pitch perfect, like Sophie not being upstanding by tiny standards or Tiffany getting jealous.

Your chapters are also really long, which is great because it's so much more to read, so much more content I have to look forward to. I can't wait for the next chapter to drop!

And one last plus, this world. If this story ever comes to a close I would definetly want to see the stories of more Rampagers. The world you've set up is rich and lively with different interactions between the giantess and tinies, between different cities attracting different company, different kinds of giantess that invade for different reasons, there are so many possibilities! You've done a good job of presenting them very well rounded with the different kinds of giantesses and as such it makes me really want to see more from within this universe.

Final thoughts, this chapter was light on giantess, well, Beverly style giantess rampaging which I usually come around these stories for. As such it says a lot that I didn't zoom through to look for any rampaging but read through the entire story, and have been since the beginning chapters. Not only that but have been completely invested with each character and their struggle, even the one off side characters. You've done really well and I hope to see this continue soon!

Yeah... That's sort of what I was expecting 😂 It's completely fine if you're waiting to reveal these things later on. At least you know the answers to begin with ;) Oh BTW, it's 'MarsyMan', but dont sweat it. Although, now that you mention it, 'MarshyMan' might've been a better choice of name xD Anyway, thanks for the reply! If you want to know if I like the story... Look at my favourites and all the reviews I've written on my profile ;)

terrific, pkease develop the ideology struggle here and dont go back to the gore too much. great so far though, cant wait to see how Tiff develops