Date: October 29 2018 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 23
I'm so happy to see you're still continuing this story. All these months between chapters makes me worry another great story is going to be left unfinished.
Anyway, some casual fun this chapter. Apparently, the giant world has girl versions of humans stuff like resteraunts. Teasing Gwen was cute and is Jeremy going to be a giant? It sounds like he is. Poor tiffany. Her backstory shows why she's so shy around others her own size and likely rampages to feel better about herself. But it seems like she's coming out of her shell in a big way if she's wiling to stand up to those bigger girls.
I eagerly await your next chapter. I just hope it won't be too long a wait!
Thanks for the review, lightwing! I know, sorry about the huge delay. I thought I could manage frequent updates like I did a long time ago but life has a way of making things difficult, distracting and depressing. There seems to be a speculation from reviewers that Jeremy is a male giant. We'll just have to see if he's one or not :)
Yeah, they do seem to have their own version of stuff. It basically like taking another culture and adding a bit of your own spice to it. The best of friends tease each other so Gwen's torment must be a good sign? We'll see if Tiff keeps breaking out of her shell or will she regress back to her rampaging ways.
Thanks again for your constant reviews.
Date: October 28 2018 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 23
Yay! Tiffanys helping tinies! Probably for friend points with Thomas but that was still very brave of her! Glad youre still updating this every now and then, I love this.
Thanks, geeman :) and sorry about the lag in updates. Hopefully we'll see Tiffany do even more shocking things!
Date: October 26 2018 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow. Feels like I haven't written one of these in a while. Well, anyway. I'm really tired whilst writing this - I've had a hectic week *~*. So excuse me if I seem a bit... disjointed in this review.
Just to start. Tiffany! Aha! My suspicions were correct. I am a genuis! >:3 Jk jk. But yeah, that flashback was very fitting for her character. I would love to see more of those building up her backstory and how she transformed her dissatisfaction around other giants into escapism through rampages. What'd be really cool is if there's more flashbacks exploring her first rampage - perhaps being caused by an especially tragic childhood event hmmmm????? ;)
The anime aspects of this chapter are probably the most prevalent that they've been so far. I'm surprised Bree didn't yell "HENTAI!!" before karate-chopping Gwen lol. With Tiffany being a prime tsundere I thought she'd be more selfish - definitively say she wasn't going and storm out of the diner clutching Thomas. Though I really like how she acts in this chapter, showing how she's evolved. How instead of snatching up Thomas like she would've before, she decides she's going to try and fight for him. Perhaps cause she realised that she herself needs to breach out more after seeing how she isn't the only one wanting attention from Thomas - and that she needs to step up and get it from him by going along with his plans more and taking chances. Which is paralleled by Thomas thinking maybe he's being too harsh - but in reality it encourages her to listen to him and develop herself into a better person. I like ittt! ^.^
The little resolution at the end was cute. That got me. I like how it comes from her overcoming her shyness and not being intimidated by groups of other girls, that was shown in the traumatic memory from earlier, by standing up for her friends and not letting them get the best of her. I'm rooting for Tiffany - she seems like she's trying.
As always I'm overanalysing so I'm gonna go now. Sorry for not leaving a review in June or whenever the last chapter came out. I remember writing, or at the very least drafting, a review for chapter 22 but I seems I didn't post it whoops :P
Soz for the messy review, I can't wait for the next chapter :D
I'm gonna go sleeepppp!!!!!!
Hey MarsyMan! First off, don't be sorry for not leaving a review. If anything, I should be the one apologizing to you and every other reader for the consecutive delays in updating chapters. Yeah, Tiffany is definitely branching out. A bit of reminiscing of that birthday had that effect on her shooting those girls with that water gun. Honestly, I had intented for Bree to say "Baka!" but your "Hentai!" reference makes much more sense. Thanks for the review! :)
Date: June 04 2018 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 22
YES! YOU'RE BACK! More worldbuilding! More character development! More lewd!
In all seriousness, this was a good chapter. Each of the giants having their own reactions to Justin's story was nice and now I'm even more curious about Blair. What happened that made her want to give up rampaging and what sort of stuff did she do? Also is she rich or something? Gwen seems due for a metaphorical wake up slap with they way she's going. Tiffany, dear god, what else have you done that we don't know about? Cecilia, I'm guessing, has some trauma in her past and that's why she's so protective of tinies and had that reaction. Maybe her mother used to be a rampager or a valkyrie? And nice lore about the giantesses's world and their technology, that really explained some things like why doesn't the army ever show up.
I eagerly await the next chapter. Don't keep us waiting too long!
Wow! Thanks a ton for the review, lightwing! I honestly didn't think I'd get another review for this chapter but you proved me wrong. I plan on delivering more world building but I'm glad I was able to shed more light on the giant's history. Whatever Blair's reason for given up her rampages must have been something huge and as for her wealth, who knows? Perhaps it will be explained in future chapters. Gwen's a bit of a wild one alright and the thought of Tiffany dismembering people is definitely not a pleasant thought. As for Cecilia, hopefully we'll see what made our "Tiny Lover" so shaken.
Much thanks again for the review and I definitely need to make a schedule for writing so I can post more frequently lol.
Date: June 03 2018 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 22
Hey buddy! I'm SO HAPPY to see the next chaptetr of this amazing story! And it was worth the wait! The perfect capper to a good day (due to me just getting home from seeing Deadpool 2) and the perfect lead-in for a week that's going to be quite hectic. Anyway, onto the chapter itself.
I was wondering how you would handle the Indian girls being taken from Tiffany, and I'm quite pleased with the result. She hasn't been excatly eager to be around them. So her happily agreeing to give them up was beleivable and funny.
I'm intersted in what kind of backstory Celly has. I look forward to seeing the answer.
Also, nice detail having Blair being reformed from the rampaging ways but still kinda longing for the life. And on the opposite side of the coin, nice job having Tiffany kinda start to change (just barely) by wishing Thomas to keep his legs! lol.
Good world building by addressing how the giantesses have amazing future tech like the portals but seem at more or less the same techonological level as humans. On another level, this also helps address why despite their being giantesses for all of human history how the humans hadn't already been conquered by the giant women. Civil war and rebuilding themselves afterwards goes a long way to explaining that. Nice job.
I like the idea that Tiffany doesn't many friends or desire to make them. Makes her feel more, for lack fo a better word, human. And it gives justifaction for why she cares about Thomas so much.
Sorry for being so obvious but of course my favorite parts of this chapter were Gwen and Trisha. Gwen's thoughts on herself when hearing Justin's story were great. But even more so was the reveal that despite not meaning too, she kinda goes against it by taking things too far by shoving Trisha into Bree's chest. Speaking of which, that scene was...SO HOT! The fact that Trisha didn't want it and was sobbing while being powerless to stop it only made it hotter! ;) Uh...is that messed up? lol.
Either way, I look forward to seeing how Trisha reacts to that and how Gwen in turns handles that. I'm unsure how it will go. There will likely be some drama and bad blood but I hope they get past that...maybe with Gwen "making it up" to her pet girl later? ;)
So, all in all, this was a GREAT chapter and I'll eager look forward to the next one! :)
Author's Response: Yeah! That update finally came! Thanks so much for the well thought out review and giving me the motivation to get this chapter up through our chat. The girls were expendable to Tiffany anyways and Thomas knew that so he played it in their favor. I also like the nickname you gave Cecilia there, too. Hopefully the next chapter shines some light on her past. Whether Tiffany reforms or not is up for debate but we can see a few hints that she might change. You need to be more clear about how much you like Gwen and Trisha because I had no clue ;p I don't think it's messed up that Trisha's humiliation at the hands (or hand) of Gwen and Bree's tit was one the sexy part. I don't speak for everyone but the humiliation of the smaller being and the hands of the giantess is the most appealing aspect of this fetish. I admit being a fan of it myself but hey, at least it's just fiction. Thanks again for the review.
Date: February 18 2018 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 21
Let me first say that I like how much detail you go into what the girls are wearing, the colors, etc. you could have easily said Beverly walked in wearing shorts and a top. But the detail in what color and type of shirt it was, also even mentioning what color the jeans were, all that is great. Not only that but the hairstyles and jewelry you describe is nicely down too.
I appreciated more Blair and hope to see more of her, she is so big I figure the tremors she would cause, could alone flip cars and cause buildings to fall.
As you can tell with my own story, I enjoy my gts couple stories and I see that you are maybe laying the foundation for Thomas X Bree? Its nice to see Bree is on the busty side, I would imagine not counting Blair, Beverly, or Sophie, she has the largest breast in the story so far? Also how tall is Bree? I'm trying to paint a picture of how even though she is peaceful and gentle, she could still be intimidating and powerful. I remember you commenting on my use of having a gentle giantess still display power over a tiny, I'm eager to see if you will take a approach to this as well with maybe Bree.
Maybe Thomas will get the treatment from other tinies that Zeke got once people found out he was dating a giantess. It would be funny to see him coping with all the attention and special treatment he gets just from dating a giantess, except him telling everyone that his girlfriend won't hurt you would be legit, unlike Zeke's statement about Beverly. Maybe Thomas tries to get Bree to make his hometown her turf to stop Beverly from causing trouble when she visits Zeke.
I'm having fun brainstorming all the possibilies of Thomas X Bree! Maybe down the road she will shake her insecurities and show him what's under the hoodie lol!
Author's Response: Thanks man. As you can see, I take going into the details of clothing seriously lol. Also, I like the hoodie joke you made about Bree XD. Took me a bit to understand it. Yeah, it does seem likely Bree and Thomas would be a thing, huh? And yeah, Bree does have a large rack. Let's just say they're really BIG. I'd say Bree is a bit tall for a girl. If she had a normal height, I'd put her at 5'7 at most. You could say your story has giving me some ideas on how powerful a gentle giantess can display her power without trying and as gor Blair getting more time... I can only say you might enjoy the future chapters that are yet to come. A stand off against Bree and Beverly over City Block Y, now there's an idea... Thanks for the thought out review, dude. It's always nice to see people point out the subtle things in the story like clothing description oh and good luck witb your stories if you do plan on finishing them. ;)
Date: February 14 2018 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 21
Yo, longtime lurker here. First off, I want to say you've made an interesting world with a lot of possibilities. The characters are interesting and your descriptions of them, including their clothes and thoughts, is phenominal and makes it easy to visualize what they look like and how they behave.
Second, I particularly love stories that keep me hungry for what happens next, for more info on the world, lore if you will. The way you casually drop little worldbuilding details here and there is one of my favorite methods of storytelling since it keeps me guessing and trying to fill in the blanks with my imagination. Fetish fuel is great and all, but a good story as the meat with the fetish as seasoning and sauce is best in my opinion. Reeeally looking forward to future parts.
Thanks a bunch, Lightwing! I appreciate how much you appreciate descriptions and possibilities of the story. I'm glad someone enjoys the little worldbuilding here and there.
I'll admit, with previous reviews pointing out the blanks that I've made, I've become some what insecure about how long I can carry out the story without ruining it completely but your review gives me some hope I can give everyone the explanations they deserve. Thank you dearly for coming out and giving your time to leave a review. :)
Date: February 13 2018 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 21
Hey buddy! This chapter was a god-send to me! For reasons I won't get into, today sucked hard! But seeing this newest chapter certainly breifly lifted my spirits. lol. Also, the reason I haven't responded much since the last chapter is because of my mother having the flu. Anyway, let's move onto the review. One last note, I'm pretty tired so forgive me if this review isn't up to my usual standard. lol. We can always talk later.
Maybe its just my current state of mind but Celcila struck me as a little nasty this chapter. Granded, most of the times it was understandable or even somewhat warranted, but still. Perphas part of the reason for this opinion is because she was giving my favorite charatcers a hard time? lol.
Speaking of which, as usual, Gwen and Trisha were the highlights of this chapter for me. Trisha was great with her admiring Celcila, with the feeling appearing to be mutual. lol. I'm not shocked that Trisha is into woman who look like girls, given her relationship with Gwen. And speaking of Gwen, I loved her blunt and nasty quipping with Celcila! lol.
Tiffany singing "Let it go" was really adorable, and I also liked Anika and Mildred being in awe of how someone who has been quite brutal to them can sing so innocently. Nice little contrast there. lol.
So, Celcila finally knows that Ankia and Mildred were taken. Barring something shocking happening in the next chapter or so, it appears that they will be leaving this story. As I've said before, I'm conflicted on that idea. But, as I've said before, the opening this leaves for Tiffanty to get a hot 30-something lesbian petist is quite fitting! lol. If you are thinking of going with this idea and would like help with devleoping it, just say so, okay?
Loved the forced nature of Bev's apology and the fact she had a guy up her backside.
I had kinda of forgotten abnout how imposing Blair was, but I was pleased with that. lol. By the way, roughly how much taller is Blair than most giantesses, like how many feet would you say she has on them? I ask because I'm thinking Anaya should be a simialr height. Also, Blair unknowingly sitting on Ankia and Milderd seems like a fitting last trail.
Interesting developing having Justin come in to share his sad story. The highlight of that scetion was seeing that Tiffany was pretty much unfazed by it, showing how far she has to go. lol. I'm glad that's the case. Means we get to see her develop a lot more.
So, great chapter and I'm looking forward to the next one! :)
Hey man. Sorry to hear about the bad day. My life isn't so peachy right now so I feel for you. I recommend your mom gets a glu shot, pronto!
I figured you'd call out Cecilia since she was arguing with Gwen lol I felt it was necessary seeing as they have opposite personalities and opposite beliefs of tinies. Again, I might consider your idea and if I do, I"ll be sure to ask more about it via email.
I figured Beverly would definitely be the type to give a insincere apology to a tiny she tried to kill and to do it with a tiny up her butt ;) and as for Blair, I'd put her at a 2 feet taller than most giantesses. She's abnormally tall like if you want to use regular height for a giantess who's 5'4, Blair would be 6'11. Yeah, Tiffany still has a lot of work and her callousness to Justin's impairment proved that.
Thanks again for your reviews as always, IamtheWalrus
Date: February 13 2018 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 21
Been a long while, but it's here! I'm so glad that this story has finally returned :D And I have this huge review to spout my thoughts I guess. Sit down, grab your popcorn, and prepare to be bored senseless! ^.^
So, what I really loved about these chapters was the further push of the supporting characters towards the spotlight. I really like the progression in how they've been edged in and even though they were abruptly introduced, this time to breathe has definitely been great in developing them all and helping to differentiate them.
Furthermore, Cecilia has 100% revealed what I thought about her with the whole argument over whether or not she has any real friends. That showed a lot of cracks in her very hard persona towards other giants - showing her insecurities with connecting/conversing with people her own size.
Tiffany seems to be sort of getting along with the other group members, and her interactions with Cecilia really put into perspective how much of just a shy and nervous child she really is - especially in situations where she is non-dominant. (Ironically, exactly like how Cecilia puts forward dominance in order to mask her own insecurities). Additionally, the hook at the end is quite enticing - makes me really hope that there are more chapters on the way soon!
Now, before all this I just want to clarify that none of this ruins the story for me, and I hate to be the guy nailing the 'No Fun Allowed' sign on your lawn. But I see you finally explained the whole distribution of media thing.
I initially thought you were teasing me with Brooke wearing a Nirvana shirt and Adventure Time merch. But I'm glad you fully explained how the media of tinies is so heavily incorporated into the giants lives.
But, like, have you seen that Simpsons episode where Homer goes back in time and has to make sure he doesn't touch anything in case he alters the future - how any miniscule alteration can minorly or drastically change the course of history.
Basically the concept it uses is that if someone were to go back to, say, the year 1990 and bump into someone on their way to work - it may lead to that person missing their train, leading them to be late for work that day, meaning they promise to stay overtime for their boss, meaning they don't go out with co workers that evening which would've been the evening he met his soul mate - so he doesn't have any children or the specific children that would've been born. From that one little bump into someone, there's a huge chain reaction that leads to someone not being born that would've had a huge impact on the people around them. Do you get that theory? Any change not matter how insignificant can completely change the course of history unknowingly.
So, personally, I can't really get behind the thought that bands like Nirvana, shows like Adventure Time or comics like Deadpool existing identically to how they do in real life. With a gigantic alteration in this universe being of an alternate dimension of giant women going in and out, rampaging through cities would cause more than a few alterations in time.
Like, wouldn't it be extremely possible that Kurt Cobain or Pendleton Ward were living in major cities before their success and were killed in rampages - or any of the people who would've influenced them to make their art.
And also what the giant world would have had significant influence on tiny media considering all the catastrophic attacks.
Like in this universe did catastrophic events like WW2 or other wars happen? With all the giantess rampaging in cities around many countries probably would've had enough on their plate/they might not have been able to go to war with all the costs of damages.
Though, it's pretty obvious that both have had influence on American media within the last 70+ years - meaning many things have been created or not created due to all those people dying and the cultural/economical changes to many countries in the world. Like its safe to say a lot of anime wouldn't exist nor would a lot of comic books/cartoons that where created in the wartime effort during WW2. (Meaning Disney would be a lot different - possibly no Kingdom Hearts. And Captian America wouldn't have been such an icon - meaning no Deadpool)
So say those events did happen, if there were rampages in cities every other day, wouldn't the impact of them not occur?
And the vast increase of people dying and lives being drastically affected increase exponentially? (Meaning huge changes to culture and entertainment)
God... sorry about all this. I can live with the inconsistencies - they don't ruin the story or anything for me, it's just... are there any other explanations that are coming? Like, are the giants a recent thing? They don't really seem to be with the boy at the end being saved quite a few years ago. But maybe? I don't know, I'm just confused *~* Perhaps I'm just over-analysing this to the extreme.
If they are a recent thing then the Deadpool movie probably wouldn't have been made cos the world would be in such shambles. That would suck :P
Anyway, glad you're back either way, I will always ultimately love this story - even if a few things bother me. Keep on doing your thing! ;>
Author's Response: Hello, MarsyMan. First off, thank you again for leaving another one of your reviews. It was very clever of you to point out a comparison between Tiffany and Cecilia. I don't think anyone has pointed out Tiffany's shyness around other giantesses. You've also made an incredible observation about how the rampages should have made some serious altercations in the normal world. I'm sorry if some things bother you in the story. I know it could be a real pain reading something you might enjoy only for there to be possible plot holes or things in the story that don't add up. Initially, I didn't think Giantess Bully was going to be a story that would be this long and in all honesty when first started writing this, I didn't really have a big plot thought out. Eventually, I started coming up with some ideas that I thought would be really fun but sadly, that was my flaw: Coming up with fun ideas. I didn't really think through the more realistic, non-whimsical things that would explain this and that which is a huge dent in a story I would like to believe, became more elaborate. However, I think I can still give you and other readers some explanations. For one, to give you a hint on your question, noticed how I haven't actually mentioned any real cities. It's usually City Block Y or O. I did also think beforehand about how the giantesses could wipe out the population of normal sized people completely to the point of extinctions. There is also the warp holes that have been brought up in the story. Who is to say there are not other dimensions out there besides the one Thomas, Zeke, Anika and Mildred live in and the one the Giantesses live in? How did the warp holes come into existences? Were they manmade or dare I say, "giantess-made?" ;) Again, I appreciate your concerns about how there are some questionable things in the story. It helps me to know what needs to be address and shows you are involved in the story. :)
Date: February 12 2018 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 21
Whoa! I read the first chapter to this a while back and had seen you updating it pretty consistently, but i had never brought myself to continue reading it for some reason and boy do i feel like a fool. This story is amazing! One of the best on here in my honest opinion. I love how you write the violent scenes so vividly! And while the violet parts are definitely my favorites (and i hope there are many more to come), i still enjoy the story you have woven into it. Can’t wait to continue reading!
Thank you! ^^ That means a lot. As you already know, I've also enjoyed your Teenager's Plaything story as well.
Date: February 05 2018 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 20
I gotta give you massive props for the Beverly nightmare sequence. Probably the smuttiest sexiest thing you've done felt like it could be real and in her character, but finding out it was a dream made it even better because it goes to show the huge effect her actions are having on Zeke's mental state while she's never meant to hurt him and in fact has been a rather sweet and loving girlfriend to him. The fact that its indirect makes it seem that much more sinister and powerful.
You can always count on nightmares to show the disturbed mental state of a character. You couldn't have broke down the unintentional pain Beverly is inflicting on Zeke any better. Thanks for another one of your reviews, combine45.
Date: February 01 2018 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 20
Hey buddy! Its so good to finally see this story be updated! I'vew been looking forward to this. Also, thanks for the shout out to my story! That really made my day to see. :) Anyway, onto the chapter itself.
This starts out on a good place with Zeke's nightmare. The hotness of the early part clashes nicely with the horror of the later part. I may have mentioned this before but I also enjoy that you are exploring the toll that Bev's nature plays on Zeke, as well as Bev really loving Zeke. It adds some nice depth where they easily couldn't have been any.
Moving on, let's talk about Anika and Mildred. It appears that they may be leaving this story soon. I have mixed feelings on that. On the one hand, it would be the best option for them. But on the other, I kinda like them suffering at the hands of Tiffany and Sophie because its hot! lol. I'll just have to wait and see how things go at the meeting.
On a side note, if Anika and Tiffany are taken out of the story, I would like to offer a suggestioin that I know likely won't be used. lol. Here it is anyway. What if as a way to help slate Tiffany's desire to kill and domiate tinies, Thomas asks Gwen how she found Trisha so Tiffany can find a petist who would willingly be owned by them? And of course, if you did this, the tiny woman in question should be a lesbain, so Tiffany wouldn't get worried that the new little lady might steal Thomas away. Let me know what you think of this idea. Like I said, I'm all but ceratin that this won't be used in anyway! lol
Also, I was a little shocked to see Tiffanty actually kiss Thomas. Has she done that before? And does that mean that her feelings for Thomas are developing more maturely?
The copcept of the giantesses basically copying tiny culture for their own is interesting. I like it! lol
But as you shouldn't be shocked to learn, the scene with Gwen and Trisha was my favorite! I LOVE those two! Also, I like how Gwen was lusting after the Indian cuties! Gwen's mentality in general is my favorite in this story, kind and humane but unthinking and treating tinies like beloved objects or pets. I always hope there is more of them in this story, and I eagerly await the arrival of Gwen's birthday party.
This chapter was a delight and I hope you keep up the good work! :)
Also, sorry about not reaching out to you in a while, I've been distracted too. Want to respond talking via email?
Glad to know the shout out made your day, man. :) Hopefully if you have the time or if you plan on continuing your story, we can see more of Anaya's amorous antics AND your other ideas ;)
Yeah, the affect Beverly is having on Zeke's mentality is very apparent. Let's just hope it turns out good for him. As for Anika and Mildred leaving, anything could happen.
Now there's an idea. Tiffany getting a petifist, (ideally a hot lesbian because hell yeah!) to cope with her tendencies sounds awesome. You know me too well, IamtheWalrus, how I don't usually use the sexy ideas (shame on me) you give me but who's to say I won't surprise you and everyone else. This idea of yours does give me an idea though so I might consider it.
I can't say Tiffany sees Thomas romantically. The way she kissed him could probably be compared to a little girl giving her puppy a kiss. I think one could say although Tiffany has some respect for Thomas, she still sees him as something that's hers like for example she picks him up without his permission sometimes.
How did I not know Gwen and Trisha were your favorite? ;p Gwen being at that age where she's just horny is probably why she's like that lol and soon we will see her birthday :D
We can talk via email whenever you like. Thanks for the review as always.
Date: January 31 2018 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
I want to say I've followed this story a while and finally felt I should review. It's one of my favorites and I enjoy your style of writing. It's a random comment but I love how moments like when Tiffany tosses the car over her shoulder in the first chapter, or the vending machine later on. Or Beverly poking fun of the girl's breast size. Attitude and what is said are things I really enjoy with stories like these.
I like how you have made a wide range of unique characters, I feel the general theme of the story is the movement toward ending rampages. Something tells me Bev is one rampage away from Zeke breaking down on her. I could totally buy into the idea of her crossing her fingers and telling him she is done, only to sneak out at night or something. Tiffany on the other hand, I halfway expected her mom to make her join her on a rampage, which she would discover Thomas was influencing her daughter, but maybe she doesn't care so long as Tiffany is happy. Tiffany could by her own go back to rampaging if the next meeting ends in disaster I feel. Lastly I think there is no giants because the giantesses need the tiny men to have children, but they can only give birth to girls. It would explain why the cultures are basically the same.
Thanks for taking your time to leave a review, Gtslover. Glad to hear you like the little things in the story. I feel like thye character's attitudes and a few arguments here and there gives a story some spice so I make it an effort to add those things when it's appropriate.
That really does sound like something Beverly would do and yeah, Sophie can always turn the tides on Thomas's efforts in changing Tiffany. You make some really excellent points here!
I do plan on explaining more about the giantesses and whether giant males exist or not but man, you really broke down a lot of things. Makes me happy to know so much people are involved in the story. Thanks again for the review.
Date: January 31 2018 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 20
WHOO! I thought you'd abandoned this story! I'm super happy to see it back! The dream sequence with Zeke was probably my favorite part of the chapter just because of how plausible it was. I'll give her credit tho, Beverly isn't really a good person imo but she DOES care about Zeke. Anyway the rest of the chapter was okay, I liked the bit with Cecillia where she talks about how they use things invented by tinies and enjoy their culture but still kill them. REALLY powerful words she gave there! It's really funny seeing her contrast in how she treats other giantesses vs how she treats tinies. She's all cutesy, nice girl with tinies but is a snobby prick to any giantess, even those that don't kill tinies! It makes for funny moments imo!
As for Tiffany, well she's attached to Thomas and basically will do almost anything to keep him happy at this point. I can see this backfiring if he pushes his luck but the fact that he came back to her even tho he had a way out speaks volumes, he definitely won alot of points with Tiff methinks. I'm glad this is back, I'm hoping for more updates soon!
Author's Response: Haha! Yeah. It really has been a long time. Don't worry though, I had no intentions of abandoning the story. Life got in the way at one point and when I actually did get free time again, it was serious writer's block and a sense of insecurities about my writing. Still, not a day past when I couldn't help but think about the story and what I wanted to happen. Looking back at you and everyone else's reviews gave me courage to keep writing. Cecilia is a unique character. It's night and day with her when it comes to giantesses and tinies, respectively. I guess what makes it interesting is how she's not only huge, at least compared to the smaller folks, but has an seemingly infinite amount of money yet is ridiculously loving to the smaller population. Her words about the hypocrisy her kind displays is pretty much like an activist. The concept of her treating the smaller race better than her own kind is pretty funny now that you mentioned it. ;p Beverly is a lost cause as far as I'm concern. Her sadist nature though has been dragging Zeke down which as we can see is playing on his mental state. You're right about Thomas. Let's hope he doesn't overly use the influence he's been having on Tiffany. As for Tiffany, I do have some ideas to make her stand out more. One of those ideas might shock you all but who knows what the future tells, how the story might unfold and what is expected next. As for updates, I will tell you all if there will be another hiatus. I had my work schedule managed to be more reasonable so I don't believe there will be another delay, at least not as big as this one. Thank you for your reviews as always, geeman. I always look forward to your thoughts and opinions :)
Date: January 31 2018 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 1
Im kind of confused as to whether giant men exists in this world. Thomas makes it seem like they don’t, but then in chapter 19 when Trisha is talking about Gwen’s crush on this Jeremy person, she says: "Gwen, I see the way you look at the dear when your mom invites him and his parents.” This seems to imply that Jeremy and his parents are people who have an equal social standing to Gwen and her parents, which would mean they can’t be tinies, they must be giants.
Thank you for pointing out the mistake. The real chapter 15 has been uploaded. I can definitely see the comparison to this Enju to Tiffany. The confusion will be cleared eventually. That's all I can say.
Date: January 30 2018 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 20
Glad to see this story is back! I remember reading it a long while back and thought it was fun. I like how all the different characters have moral compasses that point to how they should treat tinies!
Def giving this a follow since I hadn't already!
Thank you, johnrussi. Your praise is much appreciated. I look forward, like so many others, to more chapters of Puberty as well.