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Reviewer: billyevil Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 03 2007 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 1

Very well done man. I think your stories are fun and capture the fantasy just perfect. You've done a great job with it all and I look forward to whatever is next on your mind. Thank you!

Reviewer: Jay Signed [Report This]
Date: April 03 2007 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 1

I like the style and tone of this one. You have improved on providing greater detail and communication between the characters here.

 I'd like to see her humiliate him at her nyloned feet some more before deciding to simply, but slowy and cruely, crush him between her toes with plenty of description thrown in. Good job and keep up the good work



Author's Response:

thanks for the input you may have just swayed my mind on how to finish the next part.

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