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Reviewer: combine45 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 21 2016 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 3

Wow, This story pushes all the right buttons for a gentle type romance for me. Enorad is so perfectly innocent and vulnerable I couldn't help feeling sorry for him when Yagaritte asked if he had hold for a room or food. She is also right up my alley as a rough and sultry and yet kind hearted strong woman. I cant wait to see her push more of his buttons teasing him and us the readers. I will eagerly anticipate each chapter for the plot and your descriptive steamy scenes of the women.



Author's Response:

We love that you are responding to that because at its core we are trying to write a love story between to very different people xD We love the sexy times, but eventually they will have to leave the Boar behind and ehad out to adventure, and hopefully by then you will care enough about the characters to want to know what happens to them <3

Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 21 2016 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 3

You're a gifted writer. I admire those who can write authentic stories set in history. I suppose this is more Tolkienesque Fantasy than history, but still, very impressive. Reminds me of Terra by lancealot501.

I'm really not sure how Edovan is going to explain his way out of this one. He's going to have to do something big to make it up to Yagaritte. He's a good elf, but he causes SO much trouble for himself. My hope is that he finds a way to participate in her adventure today, and she finds a way to forgive the overly curious little bastard. Either way, looking forward to the next chapter!!



Author's Response:

There's going to be some punishment involved xD Hard labor of a sort. But you know Edovan. He's going to try his hardest xD

 

Can't tell you how gratifying it is that people are gettig into the story and the characters the same as we are. We feel in love with all of them ( even B) so we hope you will too!

Reviewer: Scarlett Signed [Report This]
Date: October 20 2016 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 3

Aww. Things certainly spiraled out of control there. :( Edovan shouldn't be snooping about in other people's stuff like that! Especially when said stuff is locked up. Actually it seemed unnaturally reckless to do what he did. Like the sort of thing one would do in a place where they felt complete safety and privacy. He was in an acquaintance's room naked. Certainly the wrong time and place for that! Bad Edo!

Author's Response:

lol Yeah he's incredibly intelligent, but lacks a lot of common sense.  He's young though and the girls at the Boar are going to have PLENTY to teach him. Plus Yagaritte if she gets over her mad xD  She's LOADED with common sense!

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