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Reviewer: bobbyman910 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 17 2019 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 1

I am really excited to see more of this story in the near future. Do you have an ETA for the next chapter?

Author's Response:

work is crazy right now but hopefully will calm down soon. If I had to guess I'd say no later than the end of Aug.

Reviewer: Sereum Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27 2019 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 1

Your back! Amazing story and good humor. I laughed when it cut to lizard brain repeating those six words over and over.  Really love the detail to the thought process of the characters especially when Yagaritte is thinking to herself what she wants to do to Edovan.  Made it seem like she's gonna try and eat him one day or see just how much of his body she can fit in her mouth. Looking foward to the next update



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed it!  to be honest I was really nervous about writing this completely on my own. My newest writing partner got deployed overseas and hasnt been able to maintain any regular contact, and I've never written IOHH comepletely on my own, but with help and encouragment from dear freinds and my freindship with a certain real life giantess I decided if it was ever going to continue I would have to do it on my own xD I promise it won't be so long till next update. I'm already working on it!

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: July 03 2017 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

Do you play skyrim? YES, for years!

Do you mod? no, official extensions only; might be related to the fact that I've been playing on a PS3 (now PS4)

What if that crazy, custom, bouncy, busty, nearly nude world you made through combining all those mods - wait, are you trying to convince me to buy the PC version as well? I'm trying to get out of it (but you would never tell by looking...)

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Anyway, the story up to chapter 5 looks great; from then on... dunno, I'll go back to reading as soon as I'm done writing this comment :D

Author's Response:

hahaha  You would be surprised at what shenanigans you can get up to on the Xbox One as well.  Go see my tumbler if you want a taste xD  Glad to have you along! Now go back and keep reading..you got while to go to get caught up xD

Reviewer: Calahonda Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 19 2017 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 1

I really can't see what connects her to Edovan and where this is leading. Can understand Staan's feelings I guess. Curious where Yagaritte will fit in. Still by far the best story on the site, MM!



Author's Response:

Getting back to Yagaritte soon, I promise!  And all will be revealed in time xD sooo many secrets..lol Really appreciate your feedback Calahonda!  I always pass it on to my writing partner to inspire her <3

 

 

Reviewer: Who cares Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11 2017 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is hands down the best thing I've found on this site.



Author's Response:

That is incredibly kind of you xD  I know we aren't the best thing by any means, but I'd wager to say we scratched a very specific itch for you?  If you are like me you have very specific tastes, when an author or artist comes along that hits that exact spot its like the heavens opened and angels sang XD part of the reason I strted doing Daz and Writing was to put out there more of the kinda stuff I really wanted to see xD So thanks for your support and I'll just promise that you aint seen nothin yet xD

Reviewer: J_O_H_N_J2002 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10 2017 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 1

Nice plot! Thank you. 



Author's Response:

Thanks!  

Reviewer: Calahonda Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07 2017 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 1

...... but why do I have the feeling that I already know Eydva?



Author's Response:

because you have already met her xDDD  and NO it's not Edo xD

Reviewer: Calahonda Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07 2017 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow MM! You took your time but with result! Excellent chapters. I cannot help feeling sorry for Eydva and I am curious how Staan ends up with Edovan. Look forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you stuck around!  I prmise it wont be so long till next one xD   musta rewrote that fight 20 times XD

Reviewer: Calahonda Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02 2017 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 1

Just reread your story, MM. Makes me even more curious about what is going to happen next. And most of all, it makes me wonder even more what  the hell Yagaritte whispered in his ear! Any plans for an update?



Author's Response:

almost ready to post.. shooting for sunday!

Reviewer: Jbaron Signed [Report This]
Date: January 19 2017 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 1

A fantastic story and I am so eager to see what will happend next. I hope we all don't need to wait to long. : )



Author's Response:

lots of surprises twists and turns to come ..and MAOR ladies to meet!

Reviewer: Calahonda Signed [Report This]
Date: January 17 2017 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 1

Can we expect another update, MM? It would be a loss to see your story stranded!



Author's Response:

writing a little more every day!  I promise we are still working on it, just trying not to rush make the story as good as we can.  Things are about to get much more "complicated" and adventurous..lol and that's a different challenge from sexy tiimes XD  tho there will be plenty more of those too!  They follow Edo where ever he goes XD

 

 

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2017 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 1

Woke up a bit early on christmas morning and decided to read this story, after seeing it a few times on the most recent page. I dismissed it because I usually don't really like a fantasy setting but...

HOLY SHIT! I was not prepared for this. This story is so extremely good its ridiculous!
It could just be a lack of sleep, but some moments made me so emotional I nearly cried. 

I should probably give some feedback about the story because it's a review, but judging by your writing skills, there is clearly nothing I could teach you.

Thank you for sharing your skill with you by writing!



Author's Response:

It makes us both very happy that you enjoyed the story so much!  That is what is all about after all..giving you a chance to escape and share our fantasy world with us xD I promise we will keep at it till it is done! I have some epic plans ahead xD  Thanks again and I hope we do you right!

Reviewer: Calahonda Signed [Report This]
Date: December 25 2016 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

That,s veey kind but you don' have to convert just for me. It's my limitation, isn't it? By the way, suppose your last chapter was someone's fantasy, whose would it be? Edovan's or Mavka's?



Author's Response:

hahaha that's a good question!  Given the nature of their connection..it would depend a lot on how close they are to each other.  If close it prolly starts as hers and ends up being both?  She has that affect on him <3  But I don't think Edovan would ever "conciously" go down that road if she's not close by to influence.  We actually made this just for fun, and as personal treat for me to share with you, but we toyed with the idea of making it a Mavka/edovan shared dream at some point before we decided to just post it for christmas as is XD  But don't worry, we will definitely be "exploring" this territory further in the real story! Her desire for him and his for her and  the nature of it is completely tied to who/what both of them are, and all will be revealed in good time!

Reviewer: Calahonda Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 25 2016 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 1

And what a treat it is, MM & Co! Excellent chapter but I'm glad you pointed out that it did not happen. It makes me even more look forward to see the poor guy reunited with Yagaritte. She's the one he is in love with after all. I look forward to the next chapter although I still can't get used to.the damn inches....;) 



Author's Response:

lol you want heights in centimeter's/meters too?  we can do that!  I'm excited to get them back together too!  He's got few thigns to take care of first but its coming!

Reviewer: Calahonda Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 24 2016 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 1

Can we expect another chapter this weekend, MM? 



Author's Response:

It Christmas, and you have been very good, so  I'm posting special holiday  treat right now!

Reviewer: Calahonda Signed [Report This]
Date: December 19 2016 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

Another good chapter MM, though a bit shorter than we are used to! I'm curious to see how Bernadette intends to compete with Mav and Yag!

Reviewer: Calahonda Signed [Report This]
Date: December 14 2016 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 1

And it appears to be a mystery what Yagaritte did to/with his staff! It can serve only one purpose, if you ask me.... :) 

Reviewer: Calahonda Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 13 2016 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

Glad to see the story continue. You make me very curious about what she whispered in his ear! And who belongs the ring to he found in the laundry room? I look forward to see Edo and Yagaritte reunited, and what she plans to do with him... Another well written chapter and can't.wait for the next one!



Author's Response:

It might be a bit before we found about those two things..but Y and E will be reunited soon, I promise. She's been a busy bee, but all her hard work has been leading up to this XD  As for the staff, we will fiind out when Edo finds out XD  Thanks again for the support and the feedback Calahonda.  I forward everything you guys comment to my partner and I thinks she looks forward to hearing from you guys as much as you look forward tor eading the next installment! I know I do.. See you this weekend with the next Chapter!

Reviewer: Calahonda Signed [Report This]
Date: December 08 2016 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

Would be a loss to see this story stranded!



Author's Response:

still writing!  not stranded..lol  should be ready to post again this weekend.  my partner is in retail hell right now so I just need her to finish the vignette and then we can go straight to all the stuff I've written next xD

 

Reviewer: Tyrantking-7777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 04 2016 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 1

I love this! I am a huge fan of the elder scrolls series, and to see it in other areas of my life, ones where a good story and writing/proportions, is all to hard to find for me, is very refreshing. Keep up all of the good work!

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