Date: February 07 2018 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 20
Great writing, as usual. However, I can't wait to get back to the battles lizard brain fights on a more sexual level. Perhaps Mountains will somehow seek Edo for more pleasurable pursuits. Now that would be amazing. :)
Either way, looking forward to next chapter.
AHAHAHAHAHA...might be sooner than you think xDDD
Thanks Spooky! I'm waiting on you too ; )
Date: December 10 2017 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 18
There are times that I wake up randomly at night just to check if there is an update of this story. It feels like receiving an awesome gift on Christmas morning every time there's a new chapter. I seriously can't wait for the EPIC showdown between mountains and Edovan! That's one fight I would love to have front row seats to watch!
Again words can't describe how amazing this story is and how each chapter shows all the hard work both of you put into it!
Hope all is well for both of you and can't wait for the next chapter!
Thanks so much for the high praise! it helps to keep me motivated for sure! Things have been conspiring against me lately.. but I persevere!
The big fight is done and then some! but only the raw undedited form. so I'm busy trying to find someone to help me edit it because its hard to do your own stuff xD As soon as its preentable I'll post. if you know anyone or wanna help with that let me know! I did post the raw stuff on the story tumblr in my bio..because why the hell not..no one reads it over there anyway xD
Date: October 31 2017 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 19
I discovered this story when it already had ~15 chapters, so no matter how fast you write you'll never go as fast as my 1st time reading it! bwahahahaha!
(seriously, it's good to have you back)
haha thanks! its good to be back! this next bit may take a bit longer xD Important stuff coming up!
Date: October 31 2017 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 19
Uh, oh! Something tells me she's not going to like the way she looks. But then again, she could always just use her newfound power to 'persuade' the one she wants.
Yeah She's in for a big surprise..but poor Eydva has even more drama heading her way. She's about to get run over by the lore bus xD
Date: October 21 2017 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 18
Haha, I somehow knew it would be 'her' at the end there. Luckily the guild isn't allowed to 'kill', or else Edo would be heading toward an early grave. Nice development of plot in this chapter though I do miss his brothel 'adventures'. :)
On a side note, glad to hear you've recovered somewhat from the hurricane. Definitely good to get those creative juices flowing again...healthy for the mind. Welcome back!
We will definitely return to the Boar! that's home sweet home for Edo. The guild is just his workplace xD I'm glad to get back to it too! speaking of .. I hope you return to your "Evening" series. it was really starting to heat up xD I miss you on DA!
Date: September 29 2017 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 17
Just want to say this is such an amazing story. The world that you and your partner created is just mind blowing. I also just want to say that rarely I've come across a story where I can read it again and again and still not get tired of it. This is definitely a one of a kind story. I can't wait for the next chapter!!
thank you so much! We're so glad your digging it! were polishing up the enxt chapter right now.. it's totaly written andn we are just tweaking it so hope to post very soon!
Date: July 13 2017 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 17
After playing Skyrim for I forgot how many years, Lami (OLD Lami??) & that **** dog are basically the first things I recognized from the game - weird I never noticed the Boar...
More seriously, BRAVO!
LOL Clavicus of course can take any form he wants, but I kinda figured he wanted Eydva to know who he was..since her deal is not your every day average deal XD But we are glad you liked it! More soon! Thanks for the feedback! as we get deep into the story there is going to be more and more lore revealed and incorporated XD
Date: July 03 2017 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 17
Ack, can't wait for next chapter. What's going to happen to Eydva?? Hopefully the pain is short lived. Of course, I'm also anticipating the return to Edo's story.
ALL shall be revealed in the very next Eydva installment, which I am working on right now. Spoiler alert.. It is not full of happiness and fluffy bunnies but instead is going to tie a LOT of storylines together. But the real good news is my partner is working on Edo's next sexy times, and they are just around the corner!
Date: July 03 2017 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
Do you play skyrim? YES, for years!
Do you mod? no, official extensions only; might be related to the fact that I've been playing on a PS3 (now PS4)
What if that crazy, custom, bouncy, busty, nearly nude world you made through combining all those mods - wait, are you trying to convince me to buy the PC version as well? I'm trying to get out of it (but you would never tell by looking...)
Anyway, the story up to chapter 5 looks great; from then on... dunno, I'll go back to reading as soon as I'm done writing this comment :D
hahaha You would be surprised at what shenanigans you can get up to on the Xbox One as well. Go see my tumbler if you want a taste xD Glad to have you along! Now go back and keep reading..you got while to go to get caught up xD
Date: May 19 2017 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
I really can't see what connects her to Edovan and where this is leading. Can understand Staan's feelings I guess. Curious where Yagaritte will fit in. Still by far the best story on the site, MM!
Getting back to Yagaritte soon, I promise! And all will be revealed in time xD sooo many secrets..lol Really appreciate your feedback Calahonda! I always pass it on to my writing partner to inspire her <3
Date: May 11 2017 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is hands down the best thing I've found on this site.
That is incredibly kind of you xD I know we aren't the best thing by any means, but I'd wager to say we scratched a very specific itch for you? If you are like me you have very specific tastes, when an author or artist comes along that hits that exact spot its like the heavens opened and angels sang XD part of the reason I strted doing Daz and Writing was to put out there more of the kinda stuff I really wanted to see xD So thanks for your support and I'll just promise that you aint seen nothin yet xD
Date: May 08 2017 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 14
I meant to comment on the fight. I was thinking about it later while making dinner. Basically, unlike most fight scenes in books, I had no idea who was going to win! You used the POV of the male, so I kinda figured he'd win, but you surprised me! Plus, the fight itself was very well written. I could easily picture most of the moves in my head while reading. So, all in all, congrats on an extremely well written chapter.
so glad to hear that! That is exactly what I was going for. There's a reason I went with his perspective. That is one of the the things we plan to do throughout the series is give you a LOT of different perspectives, and not always from the good guys xD We hope it pulls you further into the world we are creating! Thanks for thre great feedback!
Date: May 07 2017 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow MM! You took your time but with result! Excellent chapters. I cannot help feeling sorry for Eydva and I am curious how Staan ends up with Edovan. Look forward to the next chapter!
I'm glad you stuck around! I prmise it wont be so long till next one xD musta rewrote that fight 20 times XD
Date: April 02 2017 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
Just reread your story, MM. Makes me even more curious about what is going to happen next. And most of all, it makes me wonder even more what the hell Yagaritte whispered in his ear! Any plans for an update?
almost ready to post.. shooting for sunday!
Date: January 17 2017 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
Can we expect another update, MM? It would be a loss to see your story stranded!
writing a little more every day! I promise we are still working on it, just trying not to rush make the story as good as we can. Things are about to get much more "complicated" and adventurous..lol and that's a different challenge from sexy tiimes XD tho there will be plenty more of those too! They follow Edo where ever he goes XD
Date: January 03 2017 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
Woke up a bit early on christmas morning and decided to read this story, after seeing it a few times on the most recent page. I dismissed it because I usually don't really like a fantasy setting but...
HOLY SHIT! I was not prepared for this. This story is so extremely good its ridiculous!
It could just be a lack of sleep, but some moments made me so emotional I nearly cried.
I should probably give some feedback about the story because it's a review, but judging by your writing skills, there is clearly nothing I could teach you.
Thank you for sharing your skill with you by writing!
It makes us both very happy that you enjoyed the story so much! That is what is all about after all..giving you a chance to escape and share our fantasy world with us xD I promise we will keep at it till it is done! I have some epic plans ahead xD Thanks again and I hope we do you right!