[Report This]Date: January 22 2021 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 42 - The Struggles Above and Below
Wow, I saw the story had been updated and I got really excited. But then I was even more suprised to see there were a slew of chapters I haven't read yet! I added the story to my favoirtes so I don't miss out on future updates (I always forget to do that).
Anyways, this chapter I read tonight, was nothing short of phenomenal. You write the story at a pace that I envy. The bit in Jessica's room from the perspective of the tiny group was amazing. And the scene as her foot came down and crushe dthem into the carpet was... genius; perfect discription, great pace, great flow... your writing style made me feel like I was really there.
Well, I've got some catching up to do. But it's extremely hard with this story... I never make it too far before I lose it. One of my favs on the site. Thanks for updating it!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the input, I really like when people comment on my style, it helps me make more chapter like that. Let me know how you like the other chapters you read!