Date: December 03 2016 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction - Early Morning
Just read the most recent update. I'm really loving this story. There's so much you can do with it.
Love the idea of tiny cities and civilizations suddenly appearing in a house full of young women. Enjoying the floor scenes but also love when they appear on different furniture and things.
Great job crafting the characters, I do appreciate when an author attempts that on here. Puts some substance behind the smut. And it's a great way to build up to the crushing.
I'm particular to Jessica, she's been the cruelest thus far and the part about her plucking skyscrapers was to die for.
Hopefully some of the other ladies turn evil as well. Would be awesome if by the end they're all sitting in chairs with the cities at their feet. Demanding pedicures and food and other tasks, teasing and crushing them. That's what I'd love to see.
Anyway thanks for the hard work! Please keep it up, there is so much you can do with it!
Author's Response:
I really appreciate the support!
[Report This]Date: November 08 2016 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction - Early Morning
I actually created an account to leave this review....
This has some really great potential and I appreciate the changes in perspective. I really like the personalities you've gone with for the various women and look forward to you continuing this one!
-TV
Author's Response:
Thank you for making an account and leaving a review, I really enjoy the feedback
[Report This]Date: October 18 2016 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction - Early Morning
Excellent so far. I like the characters and the descriptions are nice. All the characters are very different which opens up a lot of interaction in the story, and the giantess content so far is great as well. Keep it up!
Date: October 18 2016 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction - Early Morning
Nice! It's a pretty good start. I think the massive variances from centimeter tall people to basically miniature landscapes will help you to keep it interesting in the long run. It's got potential, and I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes!
[Report This]Date: October 16 2016 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction - Early Morning
Seems interesting enough, though the English needs a little work - tenses shouldn't change in the middle of a sentence, for one thing. I've seen worse in that department though, and I am eager to see how this turns out :)
Author's Response: I hope the story has elevated your interest over time, I realize all of my grammar mistakes, but I felt too deep into he writing to want to make a significant change.
The later chapters definitely have more solid English haha
[Report This]Date: October 16 2016 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction - Early Morning
The plot device is a little weird (stuff randomly popping into existence or being transported and changed from elsewhere), but I like how it's potentially set up for multiple sizes and different kinds of possible interactions.
Author's Response: I hope the story has developed to your liking! Originally I was going to explain why the random things would just pop up out of existence, I still might do that as an epilogue when I wrap up the story, we’ll see.