[Report This]Date: October 25 2016 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 2
Doing nice, so far. I like the giant stuff to mix it up and hope it explores that some more (ifyouknowwhatimean), and definitely digging the smaller paragraphs with small chapters. Makes it a lot more appealing. My only personal drawback is that there is only one giant I have in mind that it doesn't appear to be turning out as, but to each his own.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. I guess the shorter paragraphs came out of me trying to avoid superflous details. I just started getting to writing on this again and i'm hoping to get the thrid chapter done over the course of the next few days. I think it's going to be a bit tricker to write than the other chapters for a certain reason I won't reveal (spoilers!).
And yeah, this story is kind of singular in it's catigorization (mostly vore). Once I'm satisfied with my progress here I have thoughts of writing shorts for the Class of Giantess series starring the character I contributed (Jeremy Whistler). Those should be a bit more varied than this one, which might fall on some points you enjoy.
If you have any further comments/concerns don't bother PMing me, I don't seem to get any emails from this site.