Date: November 13 2016 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Another Day at the Office
'Oily residue from the asshole's kiss' is a combination of words I never thought I would ever in my life read
[Report This]Date: November 12 2016 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Ready for Work
I love this story so much. it's so kinky and sexy! I loved the first few foot/shoe related chapters they were so hot! Then the bike ride, tiny Sara being pressed into Krystal's sweaty ass was so hot. then the shower scene then Jeanne pleasuring herself with Sara. This last chapter with Jeanne tormenting Sara with her sweaty asshole is exquisite!
More foot/feet/shoe, asshole, pussy or nipple scenes please! love them !
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it so far!
Ass and pussy are a definite, feet will likely return.
Date: November 11 2016 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Ready for Work
So awesome!! Would love to see Jeanne play around with Sara in her mouth. Keep it up!
Author's Response:
I will keep this in mind. It's not part of my evil plan, but I might alter said plan.
Date: November 11 2016 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Ready for Work
Not a rocket scientist. But maybe a aeronautical engineer?
Great stuff, hax. Are you sure you need me to write for you?
Author's Response:
LOL.
you don't *have* to...but it is pretty great. :P
Date: November 10 2016 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Feet on the Ground
Non a huge fan of unaware myself but just the awarest chapter with Jeanne was awesome. I will keep a close eye on this one now tho 🙂
[Report This]Date: November 09 2016 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Feet on the Ground
I quite enjoyed this story. Normally I don't enjoy foot stuff, but for this story I did.
I havn't seen any good unaware stuff recently either. Keep this up.
Though I still don't like odor, I have to mentally edit that out.
Author's Response:
Foot isn't really my thing either to be honest, but it felt fitting for the story. The unaware will be returning in a cpuple of chapters, i have one penned but it's out of sequence, so patience!
As for the odor, there will be a few that dont have it, but you noght not enjoy the next chapter or two, fair warning.
Date: November 09 2016 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Stuck in the Middle
I'm actually enjoying the non-unaware aspects of this story! So if you want to continue with that, just know you have a fan of it here :)
Author's Response:
Glad you like it! The next 3-4 chapters will be mostly aware (depends on if Jeanne misplaces Sara or not), so more is coming!
[Report This]Date: November 09 2016 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Stuck in the Middle
would love to see her stick up the "bug" into her ass, great story so far, keep it up
Author's Response:
Then you are gonna love the next few chapters.
Date: November 08 2016 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Welcome to Hell
Oooooh man. Getting really good here. Well done, hax!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Hoping the change in formatting is helpful for readability.
[Report This]Date: November 08 2016 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Feet on the Ground
Love this story! Was hoping she was going to end up lost in a pubic forest at some point, but perhaps in the futrure unaware chapter...
Author's Response:
That's one chapter I haven't even started yet, as I'm debating whether it would be more fun aware or not. It will probably happen though in a future chapter.
Date: November 05 2016 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Waterboarding
Glad to see another chapter on this one. Definately one of my favourite stories already.
I'm excited to see where you go next with it.
I'd think it best to keep Krystal unaware for the entire story. Any discovery or aware interactions can be done with Jeanne and it still leaves you the opportunity to explore unaware situations with Krystal whenever you like.
My 2 cents.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: It's starting to turn out that Krystal will be unaware for a majority of the story (not sure yet how I plan to end it all yet, so it may be the entire story).
Date: November 04 2016 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Feet on the Ground
Still can't think of anything unpetty. Formatting could use some work, but again, its a nitpick. Hope to see aware soon!
Author's Response:
the next chapters have a change to the format, partly due to a change in the pace. Should make for a more fluid reading.
Date: November 04 2016 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Feet on the Ground
Hey there! Just be came a member here, and took a particular liking to your style of writing. Excellent story so far! I am looking forward to Sara's unaware status ending soon though...going to make for some entertaining content if she is forced back into some butt or feet situations again! Absolutely in love with the plot so far, keep it up!
Author's Response:
Butts i can guarantee will return, i already have a chunk of that chapter written! Feet are also likely, dont have anything written for it yet though.
[Report This]Date: November 04 2016 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Feet on the Ground
Please keep it Unaware! There seems to be a shortage of good, well thought out Unaware stories and I must say, your work is great. The detail is great and it is all very grammatically correct. Thank you for an amazing story so far.
My only wish is for it to stay unaware, but that is ultimately your decision.
Author's Response:
I plan to have a few more chapters that have some unaware in them (I have like 3 partially finished chapters thay take place relatively soon), but there will be aware soon.
[Report This]Date: November 03 2016 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Under the Sea(t)
Just finished reading this one, really nice! The lastest chapters were my favorite. The combination of butt, unaware and sweat was a direct hit towards my weak points. Hope to see more.
Author's Response:
Thank you! There is a little more of that action in the next chapter, and it'll be back down the road (might be aware though at that point, we'll see).
[Report This]Date: November 01 2016 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Under the Sea(t)
I am liking where this is going. I love the feebleness of it all. I hope to read more, very shortly!
Date: October 22 2016 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Feet on the Ground
This story is fanatastic! You've got a great style to your writing.
Unaware is my personal favourite, when you throw some butt stuff in to the story too it's a guaranteed winner.
Thanks for this one!
Author's Response:
Why thank you! There doesn't seem to be enough unaware butt out there, so I figured I could try to fill the void (no pun intended).
Date: October 21 2016 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Feet on the Ground
Great stuff! Looking forward to the bike ride!
Date: October 20 2016 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Butt Why
UNAWARE+BUTT=GOD
I loved it, please continue writing.
Author's Response:
well, then you are going to love the next chapter. :D
Date: October 18 2016 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Feet on the Ground
Great chapter. Loved it.
Later,
Diesel