Date: April 20 2017 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 22
Author's Response:
The slumber party did get a bit crazy with regards to the invasion of Eli's privacy and dignity. One would hope it's an isolated event. But they're all young and they'll make mistakes. Unfortunately it's easy for humans to take advantage of premies and without self restraint or guidance, what could've just been a one-off can grow into a more habitual thing, until they're always imposing their will on the premie. Maybe Eli's seen this and wants to fight it. Maybe not. We'll see. Indeed. One has to wonder if they're corrupting him by indulging in binding and other methods too much. His mom's just not around enough (or concerned enough?) to intervene. Perhaps Premoria is what he needs to save himself.
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Thanks for these answers. I totally agree with you and the fact that you show a perfect understanding of human behaviour and the possible development makes the story so interesting.
It is more interesting when friendly people do these believable acts and the transitions, rather than just your one dimensional evil giantess and one dimensional brainless shrunken character. These stories aren't interesting or creepy at all.
The nuances in this story are excellent. Through the lines you can feel that they're not at ease and if they realistically continue with it how you explain in the interview, the consequences are going to be interesting.
It gets easier and easier, before one of them begins to feel uncomfortable about it. It could be if someone mention something that makes them think or the slow clues that Eli is changing in something and they can't get him back on track. Even at that age, that feeling of uneasyness that something isn't right will gradually come after a period. Tensions in that group begin to rise
Like your renders too. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: April 20 2017 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 22
Is Eli not human? - in your last response you referrenced that 'Humans' don't respect Priemies, i.e. humiliation, dominance, etc.
...or, was that just a brain fart? L.O.L. ;`)
still waiting for Premoria, ...Can't wait!
Author's Response:
You should get to see (some of) Premoria in the next chapter. :)
As for Eli, he's a premie. Most don't consider premies to be fully human because of their biological differences (size, requiring premie powder to aid digestion, taste, susceptibility to binding, etc.). However, like any label, there are those who consider premies to be entirely human. Their voice simply isn't status quo, yet.
[Report This]Date: April 19 2017 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 22
@foreignkanto. Premoria maybe will have problems, so I agree. So maybe he must not go there. We can forgive Parker for letting Haley have her way this time, but if she doesn't intervene the next times, than she isn't good girlfriend material. He needs someone who can put him on track again. Increase his selfworth and confidance.
Somebody has to save him from that harmful situation he is in. Haley is a bad influence on his sisters. I can understand why she is doing it, humiliating Eli because that is one person she can do that to. Maybe releasing her frustrations what is been done to her. The difference between Winter and Haley/Ally is that Winter has no intention to harm him that way, but Ally and Hayley do.
The mother doesn't do a good job either.
Will be interesting to see how this plays out. Good writhing still.
Author's Response:
The slumber party did get a bit crazy with regards to the invasion of Eli's privacy and dignity. One would hope it's an isolated event. But they're all young and they'll make mistakes. Unfortunately it's easy for humans to take advantage of premies and without self restraint or guidance, what could've just been a one-off can grow into a more habitual thing, until they're always imposing their will on the premie.
Maybe Eli's seen this and wants to fight it. Maybe not. We'll see.
[Report This]Date: April 19 2017 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 22
In this chapter we see that he must go there. They are ruïning his personality. Haley is the worst and obviously jealous of his life. With these binding actions his free will steadely disappear and with it his talents, spirit and humanity. Haley is a bad influence on them and a one parent household isn't ideal. Moms sees to little to intercept this development.
Good stuff in this chapter if it is meant as something negative and he has to fight his way to freedom. But It would also be interesting to see that they slowly are ruïning him and when they are a little older they discover that his free will is almost completely gone and that he stopped doing most things he likes and he easely does what they want. But the satisfaction of it would be totally gone for the sisters and others when that sinks in. If Eli has the strength he must voice that quickly before it is to late.
I wonder where this goes.
Author's Response:
Indeed. One has to wonder if they're corrupting him by indulging in binding and other methods too much. His mom's just not around enough (or concerned enough?) to intervene.
Perhaps Premoria is what he needs to save himself.
Date: April 19 2017 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 22
It's back! I was starting to get worried it would never return. It really is my favorite story right now, well, tied with The Freshman. I read through all of Splinter's Edge in like a weekend, and I liked that one too, goes places I didn't expect from it
As for this chapter, it was pretty good. Glad to see Eli finally accepted Parker as his girlfriend again in a non-bound state. And that's a dirty little trick Winter is pulling. Although something tells me Parker and Haley will be the ones to convince Eli not to go to Premoria. Not that I would want him to go, he belongs with Parker. Anyway, happy to see this story return and hope it gets back to more regular updates!
Author's Response:
A weekend? Wow, you're a fast reader!
Winter is indeed pulling a dirty trick. Quite a mischievous streak. Hopefully it doesn't get her (or him) into too much trouble.