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Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: January 26 2017 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 13

Cool

Reviewer: SoinaGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2017 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 13

See, I'd want a sister who would care as much as that, but on the otherhand, she's slightly insane so yeah. Basically completely insane. But great chapter.

Author's Response:

How does it go: There's a thin line between insanity and genius. Or something like that. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: foreignkanto Signed [Report This]
Date: January 23 2017 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 13

Kinda dissapointed we don't get to see more shrinking with Parker. But I can't wait to see her with Eli at this size. Hopefully his sisters didn't do anything to end his relationship with her while he was in dysphoria.



Author's Response:

Surely they wouldn't do that, would they? Thanks for the comments!

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2017 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 13

You are doing great. If I was that age, I would completely feel that way too. You point out exactly what is so scary.
That people don't see you as you were anymore. The rotten feeling I would get is that I would release my anger at the family. Not because I hate them, because out of self protection and pride. But at the same time I would feel bad to attack the people who want to take care of me. If I was in his shoes, I want to see as little as possible of my family, friends and only interact in person with Parker. So many things are taken away from you. My privacy is the most important thing to me and to have 3 overpowering/overbearing familiy members is too much. Freedom is so important to me.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the reviews! Eli has a lot of adjusting to do, but then again, so does his family. Sometimes folks take freedom for granted...until it's lost.

Reviewer: realRS Signed [Report This]
Date: January 23 2017 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 13

Whoa, intense chapter, very well done. Looking forward to seeing what Eli's life is like now.

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Thanks, and same here!

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