Reviewer: gui_8 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 17 2021 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 1

Do you intend to write and render again? I miss your work. Definitely one of my favorite GTS artists.

Reviewer: littless Signed [Report This]
Date: July 07 2017 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 1

Thanks for picking this up again. I know how hard it is. Some of the stories are like "I need my fix!"; and this is one of them. I eagerly await the next chapter. Keep it up.

Author's Response:

Thank you, littless! I've written the next chapter but it doesn't feel write, so I'm holding off on posting it. Unfortuntaely the entire story is on hold. But I'm writing another story on my DA account at the moment.

Reviewer: eaterjolly Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11 2017 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 1

I wanna start before my review, any good music recommendz? More experimental the better.

Go take a moment to think, then read the rest after linking 'em xP Greatly Appreciated!

Now onward into the expanse.. This is the first g/t related tale I've been able to live with a chapter, much less the entirety. I'm talking many winters ago. I'm gonna be very forward. I see you deconstructing and subverting the colloquial canon of g/t relationships. Key elements pushing towards the dynamic of the original lilliputia, however to the apprehension of almost every human character. The story offers sympathetic treatment of the topic of gynophobia, masking it as gigantophobia. And, in addition to all that, does an expose on the dangers of psychological malpractice which enables emotionally abusive behaviors and the gradual destruction of one's sense of self (a.k.a. free will).
This is a marvelous work of influence on society in general, and makes me proud to have considered myself a part of the g/t community. I'm done flattering a swear xD I did dry heave a bit at them eating 'hotdogs' (offends my vegetarian sensibilities to imagine that kinda stuff). Not a matter of preference I make my praise, but merely recognizing the good.

I'll say though you've set yourself a tall order to really bring home the lesson of abusing hypnosis, but I think you can maybe bring out the water works by falling back on that seen of almost-rape at just the right moment when emotions are already very piqued. Perhaps also pokes from Parker's remorse of abusing it, or others. Bring these semi-sad moments back to the reader in quick succession after the melancholy's already there, and pop EXPLODE! I believe in ya, just please don't ignore it and let devoted readers write it off as nothing, when it's clearly not.

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You really should go to Sizecon. This community really could use your influence. Anywayz, look forward to checking ur recommendz. Pota-toe Chip-Chip Fruity Cheerioes~!

Author's Response:

Experimental? I'm not sure what that is, but I'd be interested in knowing your favorite(s). Feel free to email.

My favorite music can be depressing so I shy from recommending it. Songs like Damien Rice's 9 crimes https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cgqOSCgc8xc and Concrete Blonde's Tomorrow Wendy https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NCwIHwSt8RU. They make me *feel* and I never grow tired of them. Perhaps it's similar to what you mentioned in your review...a desire to experience an explosion of emotion. Well, those two songs do it for me. Again, I don't recommend them and I certainly listen to less sorrowful stuff, but they're a couple of my true favs.

I like reading your analysis. Since I suffer from depression myself, I feel perhaps some of that bleeds into the story. It's odd when I hear dark words like 'melancholy' and 'destruction' from reviewers since this story doesn't strike me as particularily dark/sad. Yet. It certainly has the potential of progressing in that direction. I'm kinda hoping it doesn't, but since I discovery write, it's hard to know what will happen.

Sizecon...wow, such a thing exists. Interesting. I tend to avoid social situations, but thanks for recommending and ty for the review!

Reviewer: RandomStoriesHQ Signed [Report This]
Date: February 14 2017 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 1

Another great chapter! I like Hayley, and her influence on Eli's acceptance as a Premie- I can definitely see her as the instructor for when he learns the ropes of his new size, especially coming to terms with living away from Premoria for the time being. 

I'm still not that keen about using binding as a form of discipline (I mean, they're already shrunk, so why grant everyone even more power over them), but I've started to see it as a good thing in other situations, so long as the premie permits it. All in all, I'm loving how this story progresses! Great job :)

Author's Response:

Thanks, Random! Haley appears to be helping Eli get acclimated to his new life, at least in the latter part of the chapter.

Reviewer: unknown1 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07 2017 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 1

The story is good so far I have to say but I think at this point, regression then back together then binding and more stewing... it would almost be better for him to either just get with Parker or break up at this point it feels like.

Author's Response:

He doesn't seem too happy with Parker. And he does do a lot of stewing. Then again, it's only been a few days since he talked to Parker and she did kinda drop a bombshell on him. :)

Reviewer: rricci Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04 2017 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 1

OOPS!  Sorry, SpookyTaco!  My bad!  Why didn't I see it??? 

Author's Response:

It's all good. :)

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed [Report This]
Date: February 02 2017 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 1

@White Wolf. I do find the concept of shrinking/size difference interesting. For the rest I agree with you an everything. I could not have explained it better. Alas, many people post to much nonsense that stories like these can be overlooked easy here.

 

Here the link of another story with subtle feelings.

http://www.giantessworld.net/viewstory.php?sid=5452

Author's Response:

I read that story. Good stuff. Too bad the author stopped writing it.

Then again, I abandon stories all the time. :)

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed [Report This]
Date: January 27 2017 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

Yeh, I'm trying to keep it realistic. There's plenty of crush/vore/sexualize/enslave content out there, and sure, some of that stuff MAY happen if real life if someone shrunk, but it's just as conceivable (if not moreso) that folks would behave like rational people.

That being said, there's still plenty of fertile ground for conflict, drama and character evolution.

Totally agree with you. I don't touch these crush and vore stories with those one dimensional characters.

Author's Response:

Crush and vore have their place. I actually found a recent interest in vore and wrote my second Fyth story using the trope. However, I agree with you on character dimensionality. Give me a character who black/white evil/good, a character who is real, and I'll enjoy the story 10x more. With soft vore, that's possible. With hard vore and crush, it's also possible but far more difficult to pull off. I'd still have trouble reading the latter two simply because it's not my preference, but I'd venture to say the readers who do enjoy such darker stories would enjoy them more when the character falls more into the 'gray' area.

Reviewer: SmallLeo Signed [Report This]
Date: November 14 2016 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

I was scrolling through most recent and found this gem right here! Cant wait to see how parker reacts to the latest shrinking bout if he can even remember her properly :b

Author's Response:

Well the latest chapter (12) shows a bit of her...reaction (and his). :)

Reviewer: RandomStoriesHQ Signed [Report This]
Date: October 30 2016 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, this chapter was a little creepy for me, with Eli forgetting his age. It's a concept I hadn't even thought about before; man, the realism in the story is incredible. I do hope Eli comes to his senses in the next chapter though, at least before they visit Parker's family. I don't know how I feel about everyone babying him so much, even in his confused state. If anything, I hope meeting Parker's dad teaches him how to be more independent as a premie. Which brings me to a question that's been nagging at me for a while now-- where did the name premie even come from? Does it symbolise shrinking?
Great chapter as always!

Author's Response:

Yeh, I think Eli will come to his senses, it's just hard to say when and for how long before the next shrinking episode.

Premoria came first, the name of the largest community in the country for those affected by the shrink gene. The name premie derived from Premoria. Initially, some groups found it offensive, much like the words 'midget' or 'handicapped'. They argued it was too similar to the word preemie, i.e., a premature baby. And indeed, the two words have similar spellings and identical pronunciations. Over time, the label of premie stuck, mostly from lack of any other 'politically correct' word rising to take its place. Some are still offended by it, but most are not.