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Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 13 2017 8:09 AM Title: Late Night Date ~ con't

Hot dang this is awesome! My two favorite characters are Amy and Angela! Please continue both - I'm at the edge of my seat and check for new chapter everyday.

Author's Response:

Thank's for taking the time to leave a review. Much appreciated! There'll be more of Amy and Angel - a lot more! ;`)

Reviewer: licktoy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 10 2017 3:37 PM Title: 'Squashed'

These last two chapters were very delicious.

I loved when Maxine said Tom is ok and encouraged Amy to sit on him again.

I am looking forward how his dream turns into reality - he will get probably more than he dreamed.



Author's Response:

Oh, yes.  He's in for it, now!  ;`)

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: July 10 2017 12:50 AM Title: 'Squashed'

Very cool.

Author's Response:

Thank's, Dee! 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 09 2017 5:45 PM Title: 'Squashed'

How odd. 3 of my favorite authors decide to post a chapter today. Well, looks like it's going to be a fun day.

Wait, so these last chapters never happened? It was all a dream? Funny part is that its sort of the type of dream that I would have too.

Since it's all a dream, it's kinda difficult to review the rest becuase what happened, didn't actually happen.

Let's talk about this dream then. It was hot. Classic ending was a death. Being surrounded by Amy's flesh seems intoxicating. Literally a wet dream, just a different type.

So, Tom pinched Amy's pussy and Amy goes berserk. Lol. I thought maybe Amy wouldn't feel much but I guess she felt it becuase of how sensitive her privates are.

Honestly, I forgot he was taped down this chapter. Another mention or two of his entrapment would have made the picture in my head more vivid.

Also, another part of me was hoping this wasn't a dream, so that way, a great transition could be his punishment which is to tie him up and put him in her panties.

In Tom's dream, he had an arm free. Well, I'm sure the reality is Tom bound up nice and tight. Amy has her experience with Billy to give herself ideas.

Well, since "nothing happened" to Tom, maybe we can get something real soon. Lol.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Haha, Yeah right, Sure Tom. So, you're saying that you didn't get into that? "*.*" Hell Man, I had to throw you a ringer, and when she really does rape him, it'll give him something to dream about - for real... 

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: July 09 2017 2:39 AM Title: A Late Night Date

Very cool and fun. Loved Maxine's teasing him in the car. The shirt pocket ride was glorious and well described. This is fun.
Will Suzie return?

Author's Response:

Oh yeah, Suzie is going crazy looking for her missing husband, ...she might have a bit of a shock though when she finally does find him...

 

Reviewer: Nothingness Signed [Report This]
Date: July 06 2017 9:25 AM Title: A Late Night Date

The way Thomas saw Amy's beauty made me shake my head laughing. "Wolves in Sheep's Clothing." Is pretty much the best way to describe her but now that I think about it, a lot of the other ladies fit that quote too. Your description on Amy's hairstyle was top-notch, really had me more enarmored with the gorgous blonde. I also found Amy's eagerness to get her hands on Tom when she answered the door to let Maxine in quite frightening. It was a nice touch to show just how much she wanted to use the little man to sate her sexual needs. I gotta say midnightwriter85, with the way your story is going, you'll probably earn the "New World Order" tag.



Author's Response:

Haha, yeah. ...But, hey - aren't they all? (wolves in sheep's clothing) ;`)  Hm, maybe,  I shoulda added that 'NWO Tag'... 

Thank's Nothingness.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 05 2017 10:49 AM Title: A Late Night Date

I was panicking for a second becuase none of my favorite authors were posting for the last 5 days. Glad you broke that streak. I was getting anxious.

Wow! Holy Amy!

This woman cannot dissapoint me. Even the parts where she is just talking to Tom sends me chills. When she gets physical, my eyes just start getting bigger, and this is only the beginning. This is a great warmup chapter.

When you mentioned "Amy's parking space", I thought you meant that Maxine was in the parking lot where they work and she found Amy's car. Then Maxine started talking about Tom falling sleep on the seat and someone might sit on him. I was connecting some dots and I was thinking that Maxine was going to put Tom on Amy's driver seat so Amy would sit on him.

Maxine brings up a great point about Amy being on of those ladies that love that dominant fetish. Sometimes I wonder that if society didn't care much about male dominance, maybe more women could express their dominant side in a relationship. Part of me thinks that a dominant female isn't that rare and it's just media trying to use powerful guys as a cover.

You mention the Stockholm syndrome and what's interesting is that I actually think I might have that if I get captured by a beautiful lady. Most giantess stories that I write/read are about a giantess capturing a shrunken guy. That capture feeling just embodies that dominant side that I like seeing in a woman. (But I don't want this Tom to enjoy it. Hehe.)

Yeah, Amy is definately kinky. First thing she does is tape me down to the table and decides to sit on me. That so freakin hot! I can't wait for Amy to use all of her little bondage devices to tie Tom up and use him.

I totally agree with Amy, a fetish within a fetish. I would watch videos under giantess and then narrow it down to panties. So many giantess videos consist of vore, feet and boob crush. The panties are my fetish for giantess and I love the scenes where they simply drop the tiny down her pants and she relishes the feeling of him squirming down there. Man, I need to meet a real life Amy. ;)

Amazing! That one paragraph where Amy, (or maybe Maxine) was describing the feeling of a tiny in their panties. I would to see more sexy thoughts like that from Amy like what she plans to do with him.

I like how you mentioned Amy as a young mother when she opened the door. I always have believed that young moms are both hot and have the ideal sexy body that I like. They have those wide hips to compliment their narrow waist and with such a wide set of hips, you can only imagine the cavernous pussy that lies in between. I bet Amy's is ready for its next meal.

I also remember in your Bob's ultimate experience stories, I loved the chapters with his mother in law. Although she was a bit more gentle that I expected, I enjoyed how she kept him in her panties too.

Interesting that Amy was wearing soemthing so casual. Makes me think that she didn't want Maxine to know how much of ravenous vixen she really is. We know Maxine is aware of Amy's dominant nature, but I think Amy has some tricks that Maxine still has not learned yet. Sweatpants and a loose shirt. Yep, Amy is just downplaying her excitement. Once Maxine is gone, I imagine the sexy outfits to appear: pantyhose, extra small panties, lingerie, leggings, and yoga pants. Probably even more than that. You could never know with Amy.

I so love the teasing that Amy did when Tom was in Maxine's pocket. Her baby voice with a hint of flirting was super sexy!

When Maxine entered the room, Amy locked the door. That sounds hot. Amy locking doors so no escape. I hope Amy locks her bedroom door also.

That was a long time for Amy to squat over Tom. I bet she was giving him a sneak peak of his home for the future. I also like how Maxine was saying crush him. Almost feels like a threesome.

What an opening play by Amy. Her first impression was outstanding!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

  Yeah, it was kinda tough getting this one out. I had to work a lot of last week, and I only had about an hour each evening to write. The chapter had to be re-written 'three times' before I thought that it was going in the right direction for Mr. Thomas. It seems that you've picked up on nearly all of my little 'Tid-bits' (although, I have a very long list of 'Treats') the timing and situation has to fit perfectly, though, before using most of them. -you can't just throw a certain type person into any situation, it has to fit their particular perspective.  Yeah, I think that too, A lot more women are willing to be the sexual aggressor - if given the chance; the quiet type 'librarian' or the cute little girl that works the cash registrar at walmart - it really has a lot to do with their past relationships, if they ever get to explore that certain pleasure of being the one 'On Top'.

  Creating Amy as a dominant natural beauty, would seem odd though, (to most readers) thinking that a beautiful woman would never need to be dominant in order to get into a relationship with anyone, ...although, in those rare cases, she actually wants (Needs) to be the Fem-Dom... she craves being in complete control.

  I'm trying to focus on the slow, sublety - an excrusiatingly slow build up has a much more powerful effect, creating a moment within the box, a blurry wave of slow motion that allows you to temporarily escape into the story. Hopefully, I can get it right! ;`)  Thanks for the input Tom!

 

Reviewer: licktoy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2017 3:41 PM Title: 'All-Nighter'

Very nice background chapter.

I guess Melanie is too tired when she comes home. So maybe she will just put or hang him somewhere. Or give him some special task while sleeping. 

Sometime in the future she could secretly tape him under Susie's table. So that he would helplesly forced to look into the crotch of his wife the whole day. :)



Author's Response:

Oh, Man! That's a great idea. 'Soooo, close - and yet, unable to get to her! His only hope, just out of reach... 

Reviewer: Nothingness Signed [Report This]
Date: July 01 2017 8:54 AM Title: 'All-Nighter'

R.I.P Jeffrey...



Author's Response:

Rolling - In - Pussy.  Oh Yeah!  ;`)

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: June 29 2017 4:55 PM Title: 'All-Nighter'

Poor Jeffrey. Ms. Kershaw has him good. Being in that tube has to be tough. Painful and a bad air quality. Suzie soooo close, yet so far. Very exciting. Loved hearing how he was captured.
Thanks,
Diesel

Author's Response:

Lol!  Yes, that would be some 'bad ass' air quality!  I hope Melanie poked a few air holes in the rubber cork, ...I forgot to ask her about that, ...oh well, there must be a little bit of air inside that long tube. And, I doubt that she makes him stay in there for too long...anyway - she probably lets him out at night. ;`)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 29 2017 9:33 AM Title: 'All-Nighter'

I actually liked this background story. You do a great job at adding depth to characters.

So Jeffrey and Pete were the janitors and Pete got lucky of the two by being taken by Twinkie. Jefffey, on the other hand had to suffer with Melanie.

So Jeffrey was Susie's husband, before Melanie captured him. I wonder how Jeffrey is going to escape and meet Suzie while being shrunken. That should be fun.

Well, I think I know who will be involved with the next chapter, so I'm very excited to say that I absolutely can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

  Yea, Jeff's in some serious trouble, for the time being... It's amazing that he has survived for all this time, ...being the captive of this dominant 'Power hungry'- female lawyer - who is always used to being in complete control...  and Jeff being shrunken down to only four inches tall!  woohoo yeah, I'll bet he is ready to escape from this situation the very first chance that he gets!

 

Reviewer: Captain Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 26 2017 8:06 PM Title: Angela Awakens ~ con't

Nice exotic chapter. It sort of feels like this filler, but it's good filler. This story is godly especially the first couple of chapters. So, I hope for more development on Billy's side. I would like more Maxine and Diana, but that story arc might be over.



Author's Response:

  Thank's Captain, Billy Little, is the main focal point of the tale, while Maxine is decievingly leading him to believe that she is actually trying to help him , by searching for a way to get him back to normal, ...her daughter, Diana is his saving grace - in this situation, and she actually does care about him.  The side stories are meant to revolve around that central part - showing what is taking place behind the scenes - while Billy is completely oblivious...  

  More and more people are going to become involved in this, as Maxine becomes totally obcessed with this fantastic idea, ...I can't say anyomre without giving anything away, so...

 

Reviewer: licktoy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 25 2017 1:14 PM Title: Angela Awakens ~ con't

This chapter was delicious!

I also loved the scene as poor Denny finally slipped down between her butt cheeks dropping into her slick puddle of cum :-) What did he see when he opened his eyes when laying there on his back? ;-)

And then when he was rolling down into the mattress depression created by her ass - well the Einstein was right; the heavy objects bend the space creating so the gravity power :-)

The last scene as Angela forcefully masturbates and squashes the cock of helplessly pinned Denny is terrific!

I imagine she brings him close to the orgasm and then stops. She tells Denny there is a strict rule in her house, that he is never allowed to cum without her permission. And if he ever breaks this rule he will be severely punished. Then she teases him more and asks if he wants to cum. Denny begs her to let him cum. But she just tells him "No, you may not". Then the real fun foe Angela just begins. She continues to stimulate him. And horrified Denny close to cumming whimpers and begs her to stop. Angela enjoys the whole scene and cruelly mocks poor Denny. Finally she gives him a little flick into his groin and stops the stimulating. 

This chapter was simply fantastic!



Author's Response:

  Thank's LT!  As soon as I read your review, I realized that I should have drawn out the discriptions a bit more during that time that he spent down between her legs! Damn, the view from there, could have really added to this chapter...  I might have to go back and add some more detail to that specific scene.  I must admit, that I did spend a great deal of time on this one, ...but, I could have spread it out a lot longer without too much extra effort.

  Next chapter, we'll jump back to the lady Lawyers and find out what's happening with those two hapless Janitors... then, after that, I think we'll see whats happening with Tom and Amy, then...maybe, back to Billy Little for a little while, before switching again, and coming back around to Angela and her little pet.  

   ...Denny's in big trouble with Angela Cooper, she's a highly quaified R.N. Nurse, and her knowledge of the human body is almost as good as a actual Doctor's would be, and she has the ability to know just how much a person can take... And, she's really enjoying herself with this tiny little man, so... at this point, he really has no idea how much trouble he's really in for!  ;`)

 

Reviewer: Nothingness Signed [Report This]
Date: June 25 2017 12:00 PM Title: Angela Awakens

Damn! Angela beat the hell out of a biker?! Again, I love the power and dominace the women in this story possess. Might I add that you do a great job potraying the shrunken men's perspectives when dealing with there giant mistresses. It makes me think that you yourself been shrunken by a lovely lady yourself and lived lol.



Author's Response:

Thank's Man!  Oh Yeah, I wish that  I could actually say it; that I had been there before, shrunken down by a beautiful giantess,  Hoh man, that would be the Ultimate Experience!  ...even if I didn't live to tell about it! Lol!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 24 2017 8:55 PM Title: Angela Awakens ~ con't

Very hot chapter. Seemed like something Amy would do to Tom. Nonstop orgasms and no resistance.

Love the vivid descriptions of what Angela is doing to Dennis. I also love the dialogue and that she tells him that he will be her sex toy forever and that's his new job.

Angela excercised her control over him with her finger on her crotch. No matter what he did, Dennis couldn't stop Angela's fingers probing him.

"After what seemed like endless hours trapped between her huge legs". Amy is going to top this, right? I bet Amy prefers days instead of hours.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

  Lol!  I love it!  Amy and Tom are coming around after the next chapter, I promise!!!  ;`)

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: June 24 2017 12:35 AM Title: Angela Awakens

Wow, love Dennys thoughts early on in the chapter. I guess he knew where he would eventually end up. Giving her pleasure should make the rest of his life easier. He may even learn how to survive the experience better over time.
Enjoyed the holding on to her panties part. You really show what it's like to be small. The good and the bad. It's a dangerous world for a tiny guy.

Author's Response:

Yes, I tend to get carried away sometimes, ... but, I like to focus on the details! ;`) Thank's Dee!

Reviewer: licktoy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 22 2017 10:16 AM Title: Angela Awakens

I loved she masturbated with him inside her panties :-)

The chapter ended in its best and Angela is probably far from giving him a break. His desperate coughing and whining and squirming just intensifies her pleasure. But the erection of his miniature penis will reveal to Angela that her little pet was actually born to serve women like she is. 



Author's Response:

Oh yeah, He's going to become exactly what she wants him to be, ...and, he'll have to learn his place in this gigantic new world.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: June 22 2017 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hmm. The girl from the video is definately something special, but I don't think she has caught my eye like she did to you. Personally, Im not a fan of twerking either.

Also, I was surprised you recommended me a video that wasn't a giantess video. Now those types of videos are awesome in my opinion. If it has a giantess putting soemthing in her panties, instant favorite.

Author's Response:

...did you see the first one that comes up, if so...skim down through all of them, 'Renegade's' - she has several! There's one where she is on her knees on the bed, (Stuffed animals all around) She's facing you, and she's got a tiny 'Micro-sized' thong - barely covering just the basics, ...and, she does her thing in slow motion!  It's mindblowing! ;`)

Reviewer: licktoy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 22 2017 5:33 AM Title: Melancholy Daze -pt.4

Very nice. Terrified and fascinated at the same time. Dennis's natural submissiveness is waking up. I am looking forward to see how Angela will take advantage of that and will push their relationship far beyond his imagination :-) Mentally (almost?) breaking him.

Now, let's see what Amy has in the store for little Tom :-) 

(Note: I have put this comment under incorrect chapter so I deleted it put it again under correct one.)

 



Author's Response:

Thank's LT..  Angela's not done yet, ...this will continue for the next chapter, too.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2017 8:04 PM Title: Angela Awakens

Hmm. I thought this was going to be an Tom chapter. Especially with that smooth transition and cliffhanger last chapter.

Dennis felt safe in her panties last time, but now I'm not so sure. Angela sure knows how to grant his wish and she takes full advantage of it.

The flashback story of Angela getting easily bad tempered felt silly. Lol. The guy said a few words and she starts beating him up.

I like how once Angela wakes up, she drops him back in her panties and plays with him. I guess her body felt horny for Dennis deciding to hide down there.

I also like that last paragraph which describes how helpless Dennis feels while inside her vagina. Being forced in and out and nothing to grab onto. He is at her complete mercy.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks Tom.    Yeh, that fight scene kinda ruined it didn't it?  I might edit that out later, ...Hey man, just found an awesome video on u-tube, you gotta check it out!!!

 * Indica Renegade - 'Sexy Twerk Dance'  This girl is absolutely amazing!  Let me know what you think! ;`)

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