[Report This]Date: January 09 2017 4:37 PM Title: A New Attitude
Welcome back :-)
I like how Amy's personality evolves. She is not abusive but she is getting more and more dominant.
I think it was a nice moment when she told Billy she could give him to Jazzy. Although I would not probably enjoy another chapter with Jazzy I liked how she demonstrated her power. She knows how Billy is terrified by Jazzy and if she decides to give him to her he would be probably whimpering and begging her not to do so.
However I think Amy should use this weapon wisely and not in every occasion because then it will be not so effective. Maybe she could find also some other punishments he would be truly feared.
I also liked several other moments. E.g. how she considers him a thing. Then when she openly tells her D/s fantasies and also when she is getting more demanding telling him she wants he is her little slave doing everything what she tells.
I would love to see Billy is sexually aroused when Amy treats him like her little slave. Then she could ask him if he enjoys to be her obedient slave. And he could look down and say yes.
The level of detail is excellent.
Author's Response:
Thank's Licktoy! Yeh, I agree that using the 'idle threat' of - giving Billy back to her young daughter, could be easily 'overdone'. And, that repeating it more than once would kill its effectiveness. Maybe, she will find some other ways to persuade him into doing her bidding, without too much, extra effort... ;`)
[Report This]Date: January 08 2017 11:19 PM Title: A New Attitude
Yay! You are back and happy New Year.
I loved the length of this chapter. It felt like a movie that was part of a trilogy. I surely enjoyed the detail from the toes, bath, and finally the massage part.
When Billy was on her foot in the beginning, it reminded me of an amusement park ride. Going up, then down, left right, and even underwater! Even sexier when he was floating above her pussy.
Then the shower scene. I liked how she stood over him and showered, allowing the water to cascade over his body.
One thing that I like but have no idea why is when Amy left him in the tub and Billy knew that he needed her help to get him out. It brought a new meaning of helplessness.
The threat of giving him to Jazzy felt out of place. I didn't really think of that as a threat. I think getting tied up and shoved in her ass is a much more scary threat and sexier too.
Another idea is that Billy thinks Amy is too much for him and he attempts to escape, but Amy catches him all the time. She says that he is all hers and that he belongs to her. "No running Billy. You are stuck with me now" she giggles. (I love Amy's giggles.)
Ooooh! Amy could keep Billy in the front of her panties to prevent him from escaping. I also hope Billy becomes fearful of her pussy soon. She can't have him enjoying it, only Amy deserves the pleasure.
I liked it when she told her fantasy right in front of Billy. I liked his fearful response. I would like to see more of this.
The massage scene was good. Kinda funny too. Slipping and falling in her cheeks. Love the detail with the lotion and the heat of her body. I know Amy enjoys Billy in her sensitive parts.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank's Tom. And Happy New Year to you, too!
I really appreciate your input, you pointed out something that nearly slipped past me. I didn't want to lose Amy's dominant edge in this chapter, and I wanted to reinforce the fact that she is so extremely beautiful, too. But, I almost gave away her edge when - 'Billy states, that he wanted to push his face into her pussy' - almost making it as if he no longer feared her...
I'll try and repair that in the following chapter, ...in fact, I already have. Thanks again for pointing that out, I would have missed that without your review.