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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: December 24 2016 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 1

@midnight,

Aw. I was hoping to spend the holidays with Amy. Now I can only see her after the holidays. Well, I guess it would have been too good to be true. Haha.

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 24 2016 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 1

Merry Christmas everybody!  Hope you'll all have a wonderful holiday season and a happy New Year too.  I'll be back sometime after the madness is over.  ;`)

Reviewer: Js23 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 21 2016 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 1

What about Amy finding a way to "wear"
Billy around when she has to get back to everyday work?

Author's Response:

Humm, ...possibility.  That's been done before, though, and I think that Amy will be just a 'bit' more, ...creative?

Reviewer: Blacklion077 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 10 2016 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great story man I love where its going



Author's Response:

Thanks!  ;`)

Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 05 2016 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 1

Nice first chapter! Ought to be interesting to see how Billy, with his extreme social anxiety, survives the situations he'll soon face.



Author's Response:

Thank's Spooky!  

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01 2016 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 1

Much appreciated. I just want to see more of the doctor looking at him. I am sure he is scared of her and her immensess.
Like to see Amy visit. She belittles the little guy.
The daughter can be forceful.
Thanks,
Dieel

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01 2016 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great first chapter.
Later,
Diesel

Reviewer: SoleWriter Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2016 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

Nice! That peaked my interest and looking forward to your story's future. I enjoy your writing style. Keep it up!

Author's Response:

Thanks, man!  Appreciate the interest, ...hopefully, this will continue to grow with each chapter.  I'll add a few more tags as it goes along...

Reviewer: The Shrunken Scholar Signed [Report This]
Date: September 25 2016 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 1

Well I'm very interested to see where this story goes. The detail and all the thoughts going through his head were great. Looking forward to more!

Author's Response:

Thanks, this will be quite a long, drawn out process, as the story goes...

 

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