Reviewer: licktoy Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05 2017 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 1

@Tom: It seems you cannot wait to go to Amy :-) And yes it would be very nice if there is a little submissive man owned by a demanding dominant woman who would call him my licking toy ;-)

Maxine has several cages with little men on the shelf. These men are probably her patients so she knows a lot of details and secretes about them.

So she could answer Angela something like:

"Of course Angela, I knew you would like it and it will be beneficial for your therapy too. But I have another little one which will better fit your needs - specially for you."

... and while talking with Angela she can nonchalantly take Tom, puts his hands down and bind a lace all around his body except the head. Angela could find the whole scene very arousing ...

 

Author's Response:

Okay, LT!  You're In!  

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04 2017 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 1

This was one of my favorite chapters. Trying to imagine what it's like to be nude and kneeling on her open palm. The shame, the fear of being in front of this beautiful Giantess. Then to be in her grip. So helpless.
Loved it,
Diesel

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: June 02 2017 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 1

Ok, this time I'm going to calm down a bit.

First, I should have realized you put a tbc in the end notes last chapter. I guess I forgot about it after all this time since the last chapter.

Second, I love the detail you put into this scene. Most authors can't relive an entire scene again becuase they feel that they have run out of ideas. However, you used Tom's perspective to keep it a bit interesting. (Still felt repetitive though.)

Lastly, I know you have a plan with the next few chapters, so even if I don't like it, I feel like it is a setup to make me enjoy something a lot more in the later chapters.

Author's Response:

  I've been working on another project that has taken up alot of my time here lately.  I didn't really feel good about this chapter either, ...it was pretty slow going - I had a much larger chapter already written, and finished (Last week) and I somehow lost most of it in the editing process, ...then, when I started to begin again, I had to stop and go back to work on a prior arrangement, (it's hard sometimes when you have an extended contract w/ a company that wants you to be on call) got to pay the bills!  

  I wanted to do this chapter from Angela's perspective. She was terrified of the whole idea at first, and she wanted nothing to do with it, ...at all!  And, I was trying to create a situation where she was overcoming her fears. Her basic instinct to shy away from this tiny person, suddenly forced to touch him and then awakening something much more revealing... about herself. 

  Next chapter will be another slow one, as well, so get ready for more of sweet Angela!  Lol!  Although, don't be to quick to form an impression of her just yet, ...she might surprise you! 

  Thanks for the honest input, Tom.  And, don't worry I'm not offended by anything to do with the story, your suggestions mean alot, and I really look forward to getting your opinion!  

  Next chapter should be out by Thursday, Hopefully! ...if I'm not distracted again...

  Thank's Tom!  

 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23 2017 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

To view the word count of each chapter:

First, you click on any chapter. Then at the top of the page, there should be a link for "table of contents". If you click that, it will show each chapter and a word count as well as how many reviews each chapter got. (I'm using mobile, so I'm not sure if it's the same on the computer.)

Author's Response:

Ah, Okay!  I never knew that!  Oh Yeah, if you can check it on your phone, I'm sure that it'll work on the PC.  Thank's Tom!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18 2017 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, for some reason I thought that was a real person becuase of how carefully one girl was playing with him and how cruel the other one was.

Oh yeah, it was Amy. That's why she wanted to go ask Maxine for a tiny again. In that case, how did Angela come up with tiny humans as her first suggestion?

What?!! I'm way off my prediction? I thought it was kinda clear with Angela's appointment coming up and then Tom is still in Maxine's purse and after that's settled down, Maxine goes back home and we learn about Billy, no? Hmm. I guess there are more surprises coming up. (Hopefully, ones I would like.)

What do you mean that Tom going to Amy won't work out? It's perfect! Lol, you described it beautifully a few chapters ago. Tom was checking her out in the office, Amy saw tiny Tom and wanted him too, Amy wanted to punish him, and Tom deserved it since he was going to jail.

You have no idea how much I want Amy to have Tom. (Ok, you probably do.) Its just the way she was dominating Billy was arguably the best stuff I read on this site and the mere thought of Tom being kept by this lovely, sexy, naughty woman is the dream and ever since that chapter where Maxine told Tom his future, I was already making fantasies of both of them together forever. I mean, a story of Amy with her little Tom could have some potential.

You bolded the word "think". I'm trying to think of ways that Tom could think of being given to Amy but actually given to someone else. Is Tom going to a Victoria Secret store and being sewn to a tiny pink lace pair of panties that Amy will one day buy? Will Tom be given to some random woman who puts him inside a dildo and gives to to Amy? I don't why I'm ending this all with Amy, I just hope that by what you are saying that if Tom doesn't go to Amy directly, then perhaps another woman will give Tom to Amy later.

Usually I'm pretty good with patience, but this story is so darn great that I keep checking for updates/responses and it's driving me crazy! I love it!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

  Yeah, you'll just have to wait and see...  lotta idea's Tom! Be careful what you wish for, if Amy actually gets her hands on Tom, she's going to do things that would make a New York Hooker blush!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09 2017 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 1

As for a background or a broader picture, you could include a small segment about Maxine realizing that these chemicals may have affected more than just Billy. She can then go over causes in her head and test the chemicals herself to confirm it.

Or Maxine just connects the chemicals she uses on Tom and the cat to the chemicals that the janitors used.

For a bigger picture, I think Maxine will try experimenting with Billy, trying to find a way to perhaps normalize him? Amy could still be that fun character that has her way with a tiny while she helps Maxine find a cure. Maybe Amy is also trying to stall Maxine so she gets more time to have fun.

The main focus I believe is on Billy, so Maxine can work with him to find a solution. As they work together, they form a special relationship.

Then Amy shows up here and there, and in my opinion, is the star of this show. She can offer Maxine tips on having fun and relieving stress that they both may endure. Maxine appreciates Amy's help and decides to let Amy keep a tiny while they both continue to find a solution.

Maxine is driven by the thought of making a ground breaking discovery. Of course, she doesn't want to go public until she knows how to reenlarge someone first. Amy on the other hand is taking advantage of having a tiny for her own desires and tries to convince Maxine that instead of working on enlarging them, they should find ways of making the tiny guys more durable and pleasureable and make money of that idea.

Just a few ideas I thought of. I'm trying to fit in the fun with also the main story behind the shrinking.

Author's Response:

Yes, that's pretty much the jist of it.  Only, I was going to have Maxine working on a way to shrink more and more people (instead of attempting to actually help Billy) But, since you mention it, it would make more sense that she would decieve him into believing that she was actually trying to help him, and trying to return him to normal, - And, all the while, she's shrinking more victims with the chemicals.  

Amy simply loves the idea, and is willing to help her shrink everyone down - she wants to be a giantess!  The idea of Billy and Maxine forming a bond is great!  I like that... concider that done!  Thanks Tom!  You just gave me some extra ideas that really helped! I feel Re-energized now! ;`)

 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01 2017 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh no. Not Diane and Joyce. After having all these steamy chapters with Amy, I don't want to go back to those two characters. Maybe it's just me, but wow, Amy is so amazing that I want to be with her forever.

Tiny Bill and Tiny Tom. I wonder who gets who and what happens next. I'm so excited!

Author's Response:

Maybe, you should read the story summary again... there will be something happen between Ms. Cooper and Thomas Speedman, that will shine a light on the very dark and violent - revenge - from the standpoint of the abused getting her chance to regain a bit of empowerment.  Tom, on the other hand, will suffer for his past deeds at the hands of a very inventive giantess.  It'll be short and sweet, though, not a long part in the story.  I wanted to use it as a brief depiction of what the possibilities could be from a much different perspective.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: April 14 2017 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 1

Well being attached to her panties is my favorite activity for a giantess to do and also this is my favorite position for Billy to be in.

When Amy is at home, she could do anything she wants. I prefer this entrapment in the panties especially for travel or simply being in the public. He can't escape and she can feel him all day. Also, no one will know that Amy is carrying a little passenger with her.

I used to write a lot of chapters on various websites with women carrying panties with different styles. Some guys are tied up, some get shoved inside and the panties seal the exit, some are gagged so they are forced to breathe in her scent, and some are rubbed constantly into their clit during the day by their giantess only to remind them what he will be looking forward to that night.

Another guy shrunken?!! Hmm. Well, now that Maxine has discovered a way to shrink, it seems like she may find a new toy. Question is who? A patient? A friend? Annoying neighbor? Could be anyone.

Also, Maxine has relished the feeling of Billy and wants to feel that sensation again. Perhaps if Maxine gets another guy, then Amy could keep Billy. After all, Amy has wrapped Billy around her finger and he is afraid of her and I like it.

Plot twist: Maxine approaches Amy's house and finds a guy peeping through Amy's window. Maxine shrinks the guy, but she can't find his shrunken form. Maxine visits Amy, and later leaves, but the random guy makes into the house since he was interested in Amy. He watches Amy set her panties down and he notices that she is talking to her panties and he is confused. Amy takes the panties in her hand to the bathroom and decides to take a shower leaving the panties on the sink counter. The random guy (let's name him Tom) approaches the sink and somehow the panties fall. Tom looks at Amy in case she noticed. She didn't. He breathed a sigh of relief. Suddenly Tom was tackled down and his vision went black. Tom woke up and saw that a guy was looking at him. "Hi, I'm Billy. I'm sorry, but I can't stand that woman anymore. Hopefully, you can distract her while I escape. Good luck." Tom was at a loss of words. Literally. He had soemthing tied to his mouth, he couldn't speak. "What did Billy mean?" He thought. Tom tried to move but realized he was stuck. His wrists and ankles tied up to some type of cloth. Then Tom smelled something. It was vaguely familiar. Reminded him of a girl he liked. That's when Tom realized the smell and he connected the dots. He was on a pair of panties which Billy was previously attached to. "How could I be this stupid?" He grumbled. "Was this woman going to wear him like she did with Billy?" Tom did not want to find out. Hopefully she realizes that it's a different person in her panties. As if on cue, Amy steps out of the shower and looks toward Tom. "Oh Billy, I got special treat for you today!" Tom wanted to cry out and tell her it wasn't Billy, but a tiny murmur only came out. Amy snatched the panties, barely even looking at Tom. She carried him in her hand and deposited the panties on her bed with the panties on top, so she couldn't see him. But he could hear every word. "Today Billy, I want you to join me at the gym!" Amy said while giggling. Tom's muffled groans couldn't be heard. "We are going to have so much fun together. Im going to do stretches, and you will motivate me. I can ride that excercise bike and you can feel my weight on you. Would you like that Billy? Amy poked her panties watching the figure squirm to her enjoyment. "Ooh, I know just the thing to wear today, my new yoga pants! They are so tight! I told my friend it wouldn't fit me but she told me I looked great. Oh, I bet they would feel very snug on me and pull you into me. I know you enjoy being pressed against me Billy. I can force you right in.. there... and. ..work... your tiny body to my pleasure. Mm mhm, I need you now Billy." Amy took the panties and put her legs through the leg holes. Tom can't believe this is really happening. He just wanted a peak and now he is going face first against her vagina. Amy was so eager to feel Billy against her that she didn't realize it wasn't Billy at all. She pulled the panties up, tugging an extra bit on her shapely hips and lettting the straps settle below her waist. Amy makes one final tug sending shivers of delight as she feels a tiny body squirm down below. Amy lowered her hand began pressing on Tom's back. "Ohh Billy. I'm keeping you forever Billy. You make me feel so good. I'm not taking you out for a long time like I did earlier today." Amy took her yoga pants and put them on. Now this was a struggle. After a few minutes, she finally wiggled them around her butt and felt the pants compress her body and tighten around her. She could feel the tiny figure wedged up in her panties and she loved it. Tom was freaking out. He couldn't move, speak, or even think about any hope. She was already getting wet! He was trapped in this woman's panties and he feared this was only beginning. Amy loved the struggling she felt and squeezed her legs together savoring the tingling she felt. She was so turned on! She ran to her car, each step giving her pleasure and was just getting used to it, until she sat down in the driver seat. That's what did it. The contractions of bending her body sent Tom's bound body embedded within her vagina and if it weren't for the bindings, Tom would have been sucked inside her. It was too much for Amy and she orgasmed all over Tom. Tom regretted for ever spying on Amy and hoped it would stop. Unluckily for Tom, for Amy it was just the beginning.

Author's Response:

  You're really into this bondage thing aren't you?  Ha! Yea! ;`)  I like it too, however, not with a crazy dominatrix.  She has to be a real sweety.  - Like Amy or Diana -  Joyce, not so much...

The sensation of being completely trapped and so close to her enormous body, knowing that one false move on her part and you could easily wind up getting squashed, ...the underlying fear of being so completely dependent on this giant woman, ...yea, I like it too!

Reviewer: licktoy Signed [Report This]
Date: February 25 2017 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is a fantastic story. Please do not give it up.

Author's Response:

I just had a bunch of crap happening all at the same time, and I had to put this on the back burner for a while.  I'll keep at it and try and refocus my efforts.  I'm glad you're enjoying this little tale, ...it's one that I have always wanted to do but just never really had the insightfulness to pull it out.  Although, I might get a few chapters ahead and then have to drop out for a time - I'll definitely return to it as soon as possible! 

Thank's again LickToy!  ;`)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: January 16 2017 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hmm. I guess I underestimated Billy's size. No worries. At least he still fits in those panties. :)

Yeah, the position of his legs don't matter that much to me. I'm glad that you seemed to like everything else.

Looks like Amy is going to have some fun soon.

Author's Response:

Yeah, No big deal, Tom.  I just like to keep things in their right perspective.  I just finished re-reading Thom Thumb's story, 'A Night with  Shannon'   Damn, I love the way he wrote that story.  There are so many elements wrapped up within that short - 6- Chapter tale!  I've read it about five times now, ...and, even though I know what is about to happen, ...it still makes my spine tingle every time!