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Reviewer: Bronzehawkz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 24 2021 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

If a magical genie gave me three wishes, one of my wishes would be to revive DaiOnna from the dead.

Before this series I really couldn't understand or like these massive, epic length giantess stories. If I was going to read an erotica you can be damn sure it was only going to be 5k words max.

But this series quickly won me over and opened up pandora's box for me, as now I kind of prefer these longer giantess size excursions, given they hit the right sweet spots just as DaiOnna did for me. The wider cast of characters allow for more possible scenarios and emotions, and the length lets you get truly familiar to these characters which somehow makes each scenario hotter and more erotic as the characters start to feel less 2D.

You'll have your favorites, I know I damn sure do (I love Amanda Prodowsky so much...), but for me at least I ended up just loving following the different tinies and their struggles and captivity in DaiOnna's story.

As much as I want to find that buried genies lamp and revive this series, I don't think that's going to happen, so instead I'm going to shout up to the heavens my burning desire to see this continued and hope that somehow results in a miracle revival.

Reviewer: GTS_man Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07 2018 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 1

PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY...... It’s so good!!!

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Date: January 02 2018 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: licktoy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 17 2017 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 1

@midnight

I hope you are doing well. We really miss your story I hope you continue soon.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27 2017 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 1

@licktoy,

For me no, but for my character Tom, yes. While I enjoy it, he might be scared of this punishment. Also, Amy knows how to use her panties as a punishment that will make little Tom begin to fear her underwear. His fantasy will be a nightmare.

Reviewer: licktoy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27 2017 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 1

@TomSpeedy:

The whole day in her panties - would that be really a punishment for you? ;-)

Reviewer: neorodent Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: July 24 2017 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 1

Starts off excellent with fleshed out characters acting like people yet at some point the author's dick takes the reins and it goes down the predictable path of every woman wanting to cram their pussies full of tinies (because that's how women are obviously).  If your boner does not require suspension of disbelief, then you will enjoy this as it is well written in terms of description.  However, if you require believable characters then you are in for a disappointment as it devolves into 99% of shrink fiction (ie set in an alternate paralell universe where 99% of women are sadistic microphiles).



Author's Response:

Thanks for the props! 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 22 2017 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 1

@Nothingness,

Actually that's Twilia, not Twinkie. I got confused too.

Reviewer: licktoy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 16 2017 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 1

@midnight

I would not be afraid to spread this story among multiple characters. I think, having multiple characters gives you a flexibility to incorporate various ideas. Also characters can share their plot. E.g. Maxine and Amy can meet and have fun with Tom and Bill together. Or Angela can humiliate Dennis in front of Maxine ;-)

This is my favorite story and I think the best just starts. So I hope it will not end soon.



Author's Response:

Yes, I have to agree. The chapters aren't really so long, that anyone reading the completed story (all in one sitting) shouldn't find it too difficult to follow, I mean - there's only seven or eight female characters and just a handful of male ones, ...I think I'll just continue the same way, for now. 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 15 2017 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 1

@midnight,

Well, I like what you did with your story "bobs ultimate experience".

You included the parts with Jim and Bob in the same chapter. One half for one tiny, and the second half for another. I think 3 would be too much, unless the chapter is super long that you have enough of some plot for each character.

Yes, the main character is Billy and he should get some attention soon. So you could insert a transition (ex. Meanwhile) or just draw a line -------- and continue from there.

I think different stories might be too much and the wait between each story might be a lot more too.

Like I said, I suggest the one half strategy like you did with your past stories.

Author's Response:

Yeah, I guess you're right. I didn't really want to split everything up though, I think that I'll just continue the same way.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: June 22 2017 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hmm. The girl from the video is definately something special, but I don't think she has caught my eye like she did to you. Personally, Im not a fan of twerking either.

Also, I was surprised you recommended me a video that wasn't a giantess video. Now those types of videos are awesome in my opinion. If it has a giantess putting soemthing in her panties, instant favorite.

Author's Response:

...did you see the first one that comes up, if so...skim down through all of them, 'Renegade's' - she has several! There's one where she is on her knees on the bed, (Stuffed animals all around) She's facing you, and she's got a tiny 'Micro-sized' thong - barely covering just the basics, ...and, she does her thing in slow motion!  It's mindblowing! ;`)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: June 18 2017 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 1

I got the rubber bands idea from a story on writing.com, but Thomthumb has the best use of it that I read recently. It was his "Marriage to a giantes" story and honestly, I memorized the chapter. The main guy's wife's sister mistakened him for some other guy and he was wrapped in rubber bands. The fact that she didn't know it was him was sexy.

I read all the Duggernaut stories and he has influenced me a lot, and I think I influence him as well.

Actually, I don't think I remember any stories from tinyone234 so I guess I can check his stuff out.

As for other Thomthumb stories, his "Shrunken ones" story is gold to me. The giantess "Laura" is by far my absolute favorite giantess on this site. Her ravenous hunger for sex and fun is outstanding as well as her desire to tease and have fun.

Rubber bands, tape, string, glue, bandaids, are all great tools for bondage.

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: June 16 2017 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 1

Poor Billy Little. So he's afraid of women and he doesn't like being in a small cage. Boy, did he pick the wrong fears or what. I envy him though. Being small would be very interesting if the right person gets you. If it's the wrong person, well.

Author's Response:

Thank's Dee!

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12 2017 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

Jeffrey and Suzie greatly appreciate it.

Author's Response:

Cool!

Reviewer: licktoy Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12 2017 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 1

Another alternative could be if Suzie is Maxine's sister.

But in case the giantess does not have to name Suzie (if it is ok for Diesel) then other alternative would be that Jeff would belong to Melanie - I smell she has an interesting personality too.



Author's Response:

Ah yes, so many choices! '`)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11 2017 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

Melanie could have taken more than 1 tiny for herself. Maybe she had some physical tests and only 1 passed. Melanie was about to execute the losers but Twinkie made her let them go. One of them was Jeffrey.

Maybe Melanie took Jeffrey, but Twinkie knew him so she let him free.

Or Twinkie got Jeffrey, thought he was cute and being her pet felt wrong so she let him go.

Melanie could have made a bet with Maxine and Melanie won, earning Jeffrey. Maxine actually liked Jeffrey and wanted him. Twinkie broke the fight and kept him for herself, but since she wasn't that into jefffery, she became forgetful and lost him.

Jeffry and his friends were chilling by the store. They have been shrunken by a while but we're happy that they found each other. The lawyers spot them, but Jeffrey was the only one to escape.

Jeffery had a roomate named Tom. Tom saw a gorgeous woman running toward them. She stopped at a bench to catch a breather, and spotted Tom. Tom raised his hands, ready to be picked up. Jeffrey watched from a distance. He thought Tom was crazy. Jeffery saw what looked like Tom talking to the woman. After a few minutes, she placed Tom inside the front of her workout shorts and kept on running. Jeffrey felt jealous and wanted a hot woman too. Then he saw Suzie.

Suzie sees the lawyers and she spots a tiny guy stuck in the glass necklace. He looks like he is calling for help. Suzie confronts the lawyer and reluctantly hands him over. The guy tells Suzie thank you and she takes him home with her. Meanwhile, the lawyer had a spare guy.

Jeffrey was in love with 40 yr old women. He saw the lawyers but noticed that they held tiny guys captive. He ran and found Suzie hoping she would be different.

Melanie was playing with Jeffrey and accidently drops him. She shrugs, knowing that she could get another. Jeffery runs away but a little girl finds him. Jeffrey demands that the little girl hands him to her older sister. The little girl says that's her mom and gives Jeffrey to her mom anyway. Suzie receives Jeffery with a sadistic smile on her face which scares Jeffrey.

Thought you might want more lawyer ideas.

Also, yes! I'm ready for Tom to be devoured by Amy! Of course, we know he won't be devoured in her mouth. :)

Author's Response:

   Isn't it strange, how at first, you would think that there weren't really too many ways to go with this, but then after really letting the imagination take over, ...there are a multitude of variations that could actually take place!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11 2017 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 1

Alright. So we got a chapter for Diesel coming up. Let's see. He wants to be called Jeffrey and his prefered giantess is to be called Suzie. She is a little over 40 and loves to wear high heels, especially pumps. (Black is her favorite color.)

We could have Jeffrey be in one of the cages and Maxine accidently bumps that cage on the floor and it creates a small opening for Jeffery to escape. Suzie meanwhile is taking her daughter to Maxine's office for some medical stuff and Jeffrey wants to get her attention. He approaches her black pumps and hits them as hard as he can trying to get her attention. She sees him and keeps him.

We could have him be initially with a lawyer, but from what I remember, this lawyers kept this tinies in check and I don't see them losing them. Unless, maybe one of them trips and that necklace holding a tiny Jeffrey will fall out of her cleavage and break, freeing Jeffrey. He is currently in a parking lot where the lawyer trips, and she can't find him becuase he blends in with the pavement. Jeffrey runs to hide and once the coast is clear he ventures out. Then, out of nowhere, this high heel steps right in front of Jeffrey causing him to jump and that jump is noticeable to the woman who happens to be Suzie.

Maybe Maxine wants to play with Tom, but she accidently takes Jeffrey. Jeffrey is very obedient, calling Maxine ma'am very often and this brings a smile to her face. Maxine decides to reward one of her coworkers with such a reliable tiny man and she gives him to Suzie as a gift for her to keep.

Perhaps Suzie is working at the company and is suspicious of Maxine lately. She follows Maxine to the room full of cages and when Maxine is gone, Suzie sneaks in and she looks into a cage and sees a guy named Jeffrey. He looks cute to her, but Jeffrey is scared of her. Suzie is fascinated and takes him out of the cage and holds him. Jeffrey is mentally shifting his pants and Suzie savors the moment. Suzie decides to keep Jeffrey as leverage to blackmail Maxine, but later she finds other uses of Jeffrey and decides to keep him a secret.

These are a few examples that I came up with based off the guidelines from Diesels reviews.

Author's Response:

Hey, Tom!  Appreciate the input a bunch!

   It's really nice to have someone to bounce ideas off of!!!

  Well, since we know very little about Melanie Kershaw and Twila Jackson, that actually allows us to open up more ideas.  From what we 'do' know, Melanie is the dominant one, and Twila, (or. Twinkie) is the gentler one. Jeffery could be the prisoner of either one.  And, Suzie could be one of their secretary's, or maybe their receptionist?

  If Jeffery, is one of Maxine's captives, then he would have also been one of her patients too. So, that would include him in with the same group that you and LT are in, ...I was drifting more toward having Jeffery drawn into a separate branch of the story, - And, at the same time, making use of the 'already setup situation' with Melanie and Twila... ya know?  I mean, it's almost like Melanie was created just for little Jeff!  Lol!  I don't know, we'll see... Next chapter will be a continuation of 'Melancholy Daze' and then, after that - I'm hoping to get back to Thomas Speedman.  Amy's going to devour him alive, ...you know that, right? ;`)  

  Thank's Tom!  

 

 

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10 2017 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 1

Escaping works but it's up to you buddy. Don't ruin your story for me. But if you can do a chapter, it's great. But I am fine either way.

Author's Response:

Thank's Diesel, I appreciate that.  And, all of your reviews, too.  I felt that it was the least I could do, showing you some respect, as well.  So, by creating a little something within the tale to reflect a little of what your own personality has added to it. Sometimes, even a single statement - or a 'one liner' comment, can have an effect on the direction of a scene.  Sooo, with that said, ...look for Suzie to appear somewhere around chapter 55 or 56. ;`)

 

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: June 06 2017 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 1

How about Jeffrey? Maybe a Giantess named Suzie. It can be later in the story if it fits better.
Thanks,
Diesel

Author's Response:

Got it.  Should be in the next chapter, ...or the one after.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05 2017 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 1

@licktoy,

Yep! I absolutley cannot wait to get back to Amy. She oozes sexiness in my eyes. The way she dominated Billy and played with him for days just made me so jealous of him. I wanted to take Billy's place from the moment she laid her hands on him.

Unfortunately, since shrinking is currently fantasy, I feel that this Tom character is the closest I can get and I will experience the fun of Amy through him.

I like that idea about Maxine wrapping Tom in lace except the head like a mummy. It's another form of bondage that I love. Maxine should wrap Tom up as a gift for Amy.

Angela is not that bad, it's just that Amy has been put on this pedestal up for me and unfortunately any other woman just doesn't seem right except Amy.

Yeah, I hope Maxine does say soemthing like that:
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"Hmm. I see that you like Tom. He is just one of many men designed for women like you and me.
In fact, after what I have seen so far, I think I have found the perfect little man, just for you."

Tom looked up at Maxine with a sigh of relief. 'I guess I'm not going home with Angela.'

Maxine grabbed Tom and went back to her office. She took another man from a cell. He looked handsome and had a decent build on him. Tom could tell he had some competition. In fact, he got jealous a bit. 'If this new guy is going to Amy, I would be pissed'.

Maxine took the new guy and Tom back to the room where Angela awaits. She placed on her thigh while she brought the other man out for Angela to see.

"This man, I haven't named him yet, has quite a lot of energy and got a nice body. Not to mention that he has fancied women just like you. As a bonus," Maxine whispered, "he has a great tongue".

Angela felt herself getting wet. Not only was she getting to see one tiny man, but another one and this one looking at her like a goddess. Maxine described him perfectly, her mind racing at possibilities at what to do with him. 'Where should I put him?' Angela asks herself. 'He has a great tongue, no, should I? Oh my, this is naughty of me,' she thought.

"Angela" Maxine called out, interrupting her dream. "How does this mean seem to you? Would you like to hold him?"

"Oh yes"

Maxine lets the man walk onto Angela's hand. He does so with grace, he kneels down in respect.

"What a gentlemen", Angela compliments.

The little man began licking her hand, worshipping her. Angela could feel it. She could feel his little tongue run up and down her palm. It was so small, yet she could feel it. She closed her eyes. Angela began imagining that tongue on other places of her body.

"I take it you like him better than Tom". Maxine asked, winking at Tom. He glared back up at her in annoyance.

Angela, still entranced by the tiny man serving her, decided to want this man more than anything right now.

"Maxine, I would love to keep this man. Not like a few days that I asked with Tom. I was thinking a bit longer."

"You mean, forever?" Maxine smiled. "Of course, he is yours. Do with him as you please."

Angela didn't say anything. She just beamed a smile and looked down at the tiny man at her hand. There was soemthing special about him.

"I'm going to call you licktoy. How would you like to be my very own personal licking toy?" Angela asked.

Angela knew she didn't have to ask this man's persmisison, but she felt a bit of compassion toward the little fella and wanted to make him comfortable. She knew he would please him. However, she wanted to be fair also.

The man looked up and nodded. Immediately he went back to licking her palm, almost done, as he was nearing her wrist.

"Oh thank you Dr. Maxine!"

"It was a pleasure to have you. I hope this man....um licktoy will provide even more pleasure."

Angela looked down at the tiny man. She now has her own licktoy. Hopefully, he will be the answer to all her problems.

"You're going in my cleavage for now. I am going to have fun with you tonight." Angela said as she slid Licktoy between her round boobs. Licktoy's head stuck out and he began licking his surroundings. "Uh, uh. A little licktoy." She took a finger and pressed down on his little head and slowly he slipped down her cleave until he wasn't visible. She could afford having him spotted on the way home.

By the time Angela reached her car, Licktoy has created quite the slippery environment from the effort he was licking her. Combined with the heat of the sun, she was getting turned on.

Licktoy, felt his body loosen up as the slippery cleavage wasn't able to hold him any longer. He slipped straight down and Angela felt his body slide down her belly toward her legs.

"Going somewhere?" Angela smiled as she saw Licktoy rest on her body.

"Well, you were heading in the right direction because I have a this problem and now is a great time for your help. Who knows licktoy, maybe you will enjoy it." She smiles.

Angela held Licktoy above the waist band of her panties and her other hand pried it open. Licktoy's mouth began salivating at what lies below him.

Angela released her hand and licktoy fell down, and slid right into her groove. She let her waistband snap back and licktoy was pressed firmly into her. He began licking and Angela thought she was about to tremble.

She got into her car before others could see and her seated position made licktoy in a favorable position. Angela turned on the ignition and the car's vibration just added to her sensations she was feeling. This little man was going to changer her life.

Meanwhile, as Angela left her office, Maxine looked down at Thomas Speedman. He looked upset.

"What's wrong sweetie?" She asked.

"I thought I would be with Amy by now, but right now I'm watching this licktoy get taken by a woman he loves and it makes me mad."

"Aw, you are jealous of licktoy!" Maxine exclaimed.

"No, I'm not!" Tom shouted back. "That little guy liked Angela. I didn't. You said I would be taken to Amy by now and I'm still here. What's taking so long?"

"You see Tom. My boss, well, the man who runs my operation of where I distribute the tinies, well, he doesn't want to give you away yet. He wanted to complete Angela's part first. Then it might be your part next." Maxine explained.

"Might be?!?" Tom fired back. "Who is this boss of yours? What's his name? I would love to find him and when I do....I "

"You will what?" Maxine teased.

"I...I will do laps on his face while he sleeps! Yeah, that's what I'm going to do. So tell me his name and take me to him." Tom countered.

Maxine sighed. "Well, Mr. midnightwriter wouldn't be pleased by this."

"Midnightwriter?! That's his name?" Tom burst out laughing. "Hahahahahaahhahaahahahaahah"

Maxine wanted to have the last laugh. "Mr. Speedman, you name suits you for a man who cums faster than a teenage boy."

Tom stopped laughing. "Alright fine. Enough of this abuse."

"Abuse?!" Now Maxine started laughing. "I will show you abuse."

Maxine wrapped Tom with a lace string until only his head was free. Tied up as he was, there is no escape. She took his bound body, lowered it toward hips and watched Tom struggle. Maxine wasn't going to just let Tom sit in her panties. She wanted to feel him. She thrust his body inside her headfirst and she pushed on his feet as far as she could. Maxine pulled up her panties and pantyhose and patted her crotch.

"Tom, if you really want to be with Amy, expect this kind of abuse daily. I know she will love to have you."

Author's Response:

  Holy Crap!  I guess we better get Tiny Thomas over to Amy's place, and fast!  I wouldn't want to be held responsible for his outrage or his dangerous actions caused by the slow progression of this story.  The thought of all of those innocent victims falling to their death, ... at the hands of some crazed fetishist with a high-powered rifle hidden atop the roof of a building somewhere above downtown Manhatten!

  Heh,  whoever said, Tom wasn't modest, ...Now That was the longest review 'EVER!'   ;`) 

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