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Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: August 17 2017 8:29 PM Title: The Cost of Betrayal

After Edith and Vesper complete their inquisition, it will be time to take the wax impression of Oliver.  I'm still very curious what purpose the replicas of the Omega victims serve.  It has to be more than just a keepsake to commemorate their brief existence.  I think it's something darker and more sinister...



Author's Response:

Honestly the was casting were supposed to be effigies of the sacrices the women have made more than mementos of the lives they've stolen. But who knows right?

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 17 2017 11:32 AM Title: The Cost of Betrayal

I knew it; I knew it; I knew it!

Cerys is a dirty double-crosser.

Author's Response:

Scorpion and the frog. If a snake bites you is the snake evil or just living up to its nature?

Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: August 17 2017 9:55 AM Title: The Cost of Betrayal

Great chapter.  I was hoping to hear a little more taunting from Vesper and a little more rage directed to her by Oliver. Hopefully Cerys' will release Cam before the damage becomes permanent.  Oliver will never willingly betray Stan.. 

 



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Thanks just a little insight into the other side of things. Wait for it because Oliver has a few things to say...but then so does Edith 

Reviewer: Vul Signed [Report This]
Date: August 16 2017 9:45 PM Title: The Cost of Betrayal

Dang still was hopping to see more of cam. 



Author's Response:

Hey Vul Thanks for the read and review. I'm leaving Cams fate in doubt for the next little while. Is Cerys evil or is she going to help? That is the question I want to leave hanging especially because we are in the same unknowing place as Oliver. Patience though all will be revealed.

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2017 5:51 PM Title: The Cost of Betrayal

"Okay, we changed the rules and didn't tell you.  So now we're going to punish you for not following the rules you didn't know about."  Yep, this story is set in California fer sher.

Not that I feel one bit of sympathy for Cerys.  But poor Oliver. 

I still have no faith in Harmony. 

And now Oliver is going to be expected to betray Stan.  Edith the psycho is going to go full spanish inquisition. 

A real good look at how tiwsted these slimies are.

Thanks Duggernaut, you've done it again.

pix



Author's Response:

Hey Pix thanks for the review. Shit and fan have come together and there are so many ways this could go... BTW you havent seen slimy yet.

Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: August 13 2017 6:43 PM Title: Stand and Deliver!

When it comes to Stan's fate, we've kind of been ignoring the elephant in the room.  The abductions and ultimate disappearances of Omega sons works for only one reason.  The biological father has been removed as a threat and the Omega mothers understand the process and look the other way knowing full well the fate of their sons.  No police report or involvement exists because everyone that could cause trouble for the sisters is an accomplice to the crime (except of course the hapless victim).  In the case of Oliver, yes, his biological father has disappeared, (another Omega victim?) the monkey wrench in the works is that Oliver has a surrogate father in Stan.  Stan is concerned for Oliver’s wellbeing and therefore must be removed from the equation to maintain the status quo for the sisters.  Stan's fate has always been sealed regarding Oliver.  Take that Stan is also the son of an Omega that evaded the sisters due to the death of his mother and it's a done deal.  The sisters must take Stan and Samantha has always known this.  Perhaps this plot was the sister’s way of resolving a lost opportunity. Samantha is with Stan because he is the "one that got away" from the sisters.  His relationship with Samantha is a sham and he has no idea…

Reviewer: Vul Signed [Report This]
Date: August 12 2017 11:05 PM Title: Friends until the End

Dang always felt cam was more of the main character, enjoyed fallowing his part of the story more than ovliver. Also been wanting to comment there seemed ot be a odd drop of the juicy details after the story got so far, or just kind glosses over expecting the reader to know what happened. Just my opionon.

But dang wanted to see more happing to cam, would of been interesting to see his mother visit if not just for his sister, or for him to see what kind of monster she was back in the day. Even thought more with his sister might of been interesting. I dont supose stan is going to make her puke him up in thee future...

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 10 2017 8:55 PM Title: Stand and Deliver!

WHOA! That has got to be the narrowest escape anyone has ever had from these girls. Stan definitely has GL-worthy will power.

P.S.---Happy 401st review, Dug!

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 10 2017 12:01 PM Title: Stand and Deliver!

Damn!  Suspenseful chapter!  With Stan as our POV character, you can smell the evil coming off the ‘Megs.
And he escaped their clutches!  Stan is da’ man!
If this were just some action piece, this chapter wouldn’t amount to much for our side.  But Viewed as a horror piece, this was a pretty awesome win for the good guys.
Stan knows there’s something extraordinary going on.  He’ll know to be cautious when dealing with the harpy house.  He’s seen how pretty they are, but after this, they won’t have a lot of luck using it to distract him.  He knows to look up stairs.  Since he’s concerned about poison, he’ll never drink anything they hand him. Plus, Edith mentioned Samantha, that should help him avoid the most dangerous pitfall in his path.
I am a bit concerned about how long Edith’s attack will affect him.  Will he get back to Deacon and wind up tiny?
But then was it an attack?  Was that all Stan’s danger sense going off so hard it made him ill?   Or something else entirely?

So damn much awesome, but so damn many questions!

All I can say is: We’re not worthy!  We’re not worthy!

Thanks Duggernaut.

pix

PS 400th review!  Superfan!

Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10 2017 8:58 AM Title: Stand and Deliver!

TS... It appears that mere mortal men can't stop these monsters.  It's going to take someone on the inside to take action.  Time for Cerys, Harmony and Samantha to do the right thing...

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 10 2017 1:31 AM Title: Stand and Deliver!

This chapter pissed me off. These girls are running a kidnapping sex slave dungeon and they want to call the police on Stan? For what, intruding?

It bothers me that if the police do show up, Stan is the one most likely to be arrested. I really felt for Stan. He just wants to see his little boy and they are lying through their teeth and he can sense it.

I also did not like angry side of Brooklyn. She just lost a sex toy and is complaining like she lost everything and is now taking her anger out on Stan.

Also, what kind of bs was that magic that Frost had? I mean, some magic is ok, but when they can use with ease, it just feels hopeless for the heroes to win. I was rooting for Stan, but a simple touch to the chest makes him weak.

It feels that the Omega Pi girls have too much power. Edith Frsot probably has other powers to, such as locating Oliver and stuff which makes and epic journey by Oliver, worthless.

You got to give me some hope to bank on Duggernaut. Deacon is weak, Stan been spelled, Cam and Oliver shrunk. None of these guys can handle one Omega Pi girl now.

It sure seems like it's all downhill and I wonder how will the story progress. I can't wait foe the next chapter!

Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: August 09 2017 6:15 PM Title: Stand and Deliver!

Well, that was interesting! So, the stories about Edith appear to be true.  She seems to have abilities far greater than the sisters or Vesper.  Stan's aggressiveness was no match for Edith's Jedi mind tricks.  You have to love it, Edith was prepared to take Stan right then and there with a glass of good night juice and if his instincts hadn't motivated him to escape, we'd be reading about "little Stan".  Edith did this all on her own without the weeping stones, without the alter and the rest of the girls chanting and looking on.  She also did it without Stan's consent, where that was previously part of the ritual.  The victims all unknowingly consenting to be taken.  Now admittedly, she didn't harvest him, but it was close.  I see Stan having a heart to heart with Deacon and company to strategize and learn more about the Omegas and possibly even attempt to discuss the sisters with Samantha as well.  He knows there is something definitely wrong and he's not letting this go; especially with Oliver still missing.  Great stuff as always, keep it coming!

Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: August 06 2017 5:05 PM Title: Friends until the End

Assuming that Cerys delivers Oliver to Sersei as promised, I'm looking forward to their initial conversation when Oliver is handed over by Cerys. If we work from the standpoint that Cam really is in Cerys' belly (hopefully to be expelled before he is digested alive or runs out of air) it should be interesting to hear Sersei's acceptance of the murder of her brother and her nonchalant attitude regarding Cam's death.  The talk might go something like "Oliver, really, it's not a big deal.  We do this kind of thing all the time.  Think about it, this was both his and your destiny.  There never was another purpose for your pointless lives.  You were specifically conceived, raised and groomed exactly for this purpose. I mean, come on, it's not like the both of you are even people.  You are just things..."

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 04 2017 4:49 AM Title: Friends until the End

Before we dive into this chapter... what about Stan? Didn't Allie tell Brooklyn to get dressed and look pretty to seduce Stan? Now Brooklyn is knocking on Cery's door. So I wonder which even happened first?

So I just read the chapter and then the reviews. Duggernaut likes to trick his readers and setup plot twists. To me, this is a classic Duggernaut move. He is making us believe that Cerys swallowed Cam becuase of how to story pinned her as the vore artist.

However, we already have hints about Cery's knowing about Oliver's and Cam's families meaning that there is more to Cery's than just girl swallowing boys every day.

I'm pretty sure that Cerys has a reputation for swallowing these tinies so the sisters believe that the tinies disappeared. Cerys said the same thing to Oliver about helping him escape. She doesn't specify how she will smuggle him out and that is the key. She knew that if she told them that she will swallow them, they will refuse and make the whole situation worse.

Cerys then barfs back up each tiny and sets them free somehow, not sure where but at least free of the Omega Pi house. Who knew that the ticker to escaping was to be swallowed by Cerys.

Also, she has experience swallowing tiny body before so that's why she did it effortlessly and also under pressure, just seconds before opening the door to Brooklyn. Cery's is confident with her plan and since the sisters believe in Cerys as a swallower, I'm sure they would believe her this time too.

Now let's look at Oliver's situation. See, I for one believe that Oliver is in a worse position than Cameron. Oliver is about to go through his own version of Cam's torture. Now will it be sexy or cruel? I hope it's mostly sexy. I doubt Sersei will match Brroklyn, but we will see.

What if Brooklyn decides to keep Oliver to herself without telling Sersei? All she has to do is say that Cerys found Cam and she has him in her panties and Sersei will believe Brooklyn. Sersei won't check. Not there.

However, I would love to see Deacon get seduced by Brooklyn again, so maybe Oliver is going directly to Sersei this time. So much for the Oliver escape plan. I think Cerys should have found an alternative to helping Oliver. Now this makes me think....

Why didn't Cerys swallow both of them if she wants to help them? She can walk outside and then barf them back out in Deacon's room. Wait, but then there is giant male content. Hmm. Maybe Cerys takes them to Vesper and she grows them back normal.

Speaking of Vesper...where is she?! Remember when Sersei was asking about some special thing which I forgot, but it has something to do with Oliver's soul?

This reminds me of something else. Sersei isn't in the Omega Pi house, is she? She is at her grandma's house and it looks like Brooklyn will get a turn with Oliver first. Hmmm. Like others said lots of probabilities.

Cam is fine. What keeps Cerys strong is that she knows that she is going the right thing and not feeling guilty if she was just eating all little men they get. Yeah, Cam is safe. It's Oliver who we got to worry about.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: August 03 2017 9:34 PM Title: Friends until the End

Oh my gosh that was hard to take.  As I see it there are two possibilities (as everyone else has said).  1... Cerys is the coldest, cruelest, bitch in the house.  That she deserves to agonize in hell for all eternity for her crimes. Or 2... The sisters have a code that doesn't permit them to lie to one another.  To protect Cam, she had to actually swallow him because that is what she will tell them she did to him.  She also needed Oliver to be so horrified and enraged at her act that it would convince the rest of the sisters that Cam is truly gone.  Hopefully, this is the case and she will puke him up, wash him off and hide him some place safe.  Please don't let her kill off Cam. He's been through so much and doesn't deserve this death.

Reviewer: foreignkanto Signed [Report This]
Date: August 03 2017 8:40 PM Title: Friends until the End

The way I see it, there are two options. Either Cerys is actually evil and just deceived Oliver and Cam, or she is actually trying to help. If she is being truthful, she swallowed Cam to make Oliver think she is evil so that he doesn't accidentally reveal that she is helping them when he's with Sersei. If that is the case, she fully intends on vomiting out Cam once she hands Oliver to Sersei.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 03 2017 7:33 PM Title: Friends until the End

Hoo-boy! Either she's going to gag him back up, once she's alone again; or Cerys is hiding Cam under her tongue. Sort of like a Persian rug covering a trap door.

But, whatever's happened to him, I shudder to think what Sersei and Brooklynn are going to do to Oliver!

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 03 2017 6:54 PM Title: Friends until the End

I reallly don't feel like saying I was right.

I also don't feel like hoping Brooklyn will cast some "puke hex" at Cerys (exectp that it might be painful) Cam has been doomed since he was shrunk.  There's a bunch of weirdness swirling around Oliver, that might lead to an oportunity of some sort, I can't say.  But Cam, he stood by his buddy til the end.  I admire his nobility.

Sad turn Duggernaut, well executed.  The shock and suddenness gave it a spooky reality.

 

pix

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 01 2017 2:31 PM Title: The Man with the Plan

Lol! Code word is squirell! There is no way the girls will get that one. Unless, by some odd chance they think "Aw, Tiny Stan looks like a cute squirell! Let's send a pic to Deacon to show him how cute he is" (texting Deacon). "Hey, Deacon. Local singles in your area. It's your local Omega girls that live several feet away. Tap this icon to join is. You can enjoy what little Stan here is getting. Doesn't he look like a wittle squirrell. ;) We would love to play soon.

Otherwise, the code word is all set and I like how cautious Stan is at arriving at this situation. Deacon seems a bit intimidated, but Stan shows no fear as he charges into the house.

Monroe is an Omega Pi girl and now Deacon better watch out. I thought she was innocent but now she is also a seductress. Also, who woukdve thought of Monroe as a stunning gorgeous girl. I thought she was good looking, but Stan saw her as a goddess.

Also, we don't know that the grey haired woman is Mrs. Frost. Could be someone else, probably Mrs frost but we can't gaurenttee it. Also, we don't know what happened between Stan and Mrs Frost when he was a boy. In addition, we see the effects of life being transferred from the shrunken men to women like Mrs. Frost.

Now Allie and Brroklyn are coming down to meet Stan. I bet Stan would fall over for Brooklyn. Ha! These girls are trying to seduce him to get him to do what they want. Stan respects their beauty, but I don't think he will fall into their traps as easily.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: August 01 2017 9:38 AM Title: The Man with the Plan

Stan's actions will dictate if the sisters percieve him to be a threat to the local house and the sorority as a whole.  If Allie, Edith and the rest see him as a danger, how do they respond?  This can't be the first time this kind of situation has played out in the history of the Omegas.  Do the sisters personally take action or maybe there is a protector, someone that takes out any threat. Maybe a call is made to Samantha to call him off.  Stan is a bull dog who has sunk his teeth in and isn't letting go...

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