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Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: October 21 2017 3:39 PM Title: Idle Hands

Where are you Duggernaut?  We miss you!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 04 2017 11:18 PM Title: Idle Hands

My man, Stan! Right now, he kind of reminds me of Stewart Granger in "Scaramouche."

Winging it, for the most part. Though, for him, it works far better than most other men's elaborate preconceived plans.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 04 2017 8:31 PM Title: Idle Hands

Stan thinking and acting fast. I like it. I still would've went with the cop though. She is too hot to pass up.

Cady is still suspicious to me, so I'm glad Deacon didn't give up the code to her.

Not sure how this Carol is going to help, but I guess soemthing is about to go down soon. I wonder what or who.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 04 2017 6:49 PM Title: Idle Hands

Okay, it's official: Stan is The Man with the plan.

He's asking the right questions and harboring a healthy paranoia.  Good for him.  But he's not paralyzed by fear.  He's gutsy and decisive.  Every chapter he's in he steals the show. 

And I've always been suspicious of this "Carol."  Too good a spot to pick up local gossip and such...

So, does this mean Cady is on the side of the angels?  Acting as an unwitting agent?  Is that why she set off Stan's danger sense?  If so, it's really pretty impressive.  Hopefully he can learn to read it quickly. 

Great read Duggernaut.  You just keep delivering with this story.  Suspense and intrigue really make this a great work.  Awesome stuff.

Thanks

pix

Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: September 26 2017 6:27 PM Title: Mother is the name for God...

I wanted to say how enjoyable the chapter was.  More and more, Cerys' statements made to Oliver seem to be true.  There seems to be a separatist segment within the Omegas, they do have a weeping stone and apparently, Samantha is storing the life energy from the reaping of other poor saps to try to restore Oliver. Interesting.  So, wow, Samantha is a Frost... possibly even the daughter of the Queen bitch herself.  I wonder if that's the reason Edith gave Oliver a little slack during his interrogation. It sounds like Stan could be in serious jeopardy from old Edith.  Hopefully he takes the advice given to keep clear. Now... On to Cam's fate... don’t let us down Cerys…



Author's Response:

Thanks! It does seem to lend some credence to Cerys' statement, but...  What is Oliver is actually Edith's grandson, there because her family pride is on the line

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2017 12:58 AM Title: Mother is the name for God...

Well the first half of this chapter made less sense than most of Carycomics jokes. :)

The second half was brilliant. A classic drama situation. Stan, strong minded and willing to try anything to get what he wants. Then Sam, who has been holding this secret in might have cost her Stan's life and she is not only sobbing about Charley and Oliver, but now for Stan too.

Is she Mrs. Frosts daughter? That makes Oliver much more important. So is he her grandson???? This chapter made more questions than answers.

I'm going to stare at my door now until a leggy brunette knocks on it.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Oooh double burn, given the age disparity between Edith and Sam, the relationship might be more distant, but given the reaping anything is possible. Talk about an over protective mother...

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2017 8:59 PM Title: Mother is the name for God...

This damn good.  Though I’m really with Stan on this one.  If Oliver gets done in, he’s probably gonna wedge the doors shut and douse the place in gasoline.  Burn Sersei Burn.

Just because Sam and Tomi  aren’t in with the Edith crowd doesn’t redeem them one bit.  Just because they do something different with the power they steal doesn’t make them good people.  And just because Sam doesn’t want to loose Stan or Oliver doesn’t make her one bit more worth while. 

And damn!  I gotta agree with Shrinkmeister.  This don’t mean Cerys was telling the truth. 

But lets imagine that there is an group of rogue ‘megs...how does that help Oliver?  He’s gonna get the Cam treatment big time...all the psychos are gonna go at him in high gear because their time with him will be limited.  He’s in a tough spot and the clock is ticking. 

And this is the first we’ve seen of a weeping stone...wait...did Sam say her name was Frost?  Gaaahhh....that explains so much....and raises so many more questions...damn...still totally hooked, Duggernaut.  You tell the most addicting stories. 
Thanks...I think.

Peace

pix



Author's Response:

"Rise up, gather round, rock this place to the ground, burn it up, let's go for broke, watch the night go up in smoke!"

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2017 7:52 PM Title: Mother is the name for God...

Hmmmmmm! Maybe Cerys (the one who devoured Cam) wasn't lying, entirely. Maybe she was telling the truth about their being a dissident movement within this Community.

She's simply not one of them.

Author's Response:

Maybe not entirely, or just giving up enough to make it seem plausible...maybe

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 19 2017 5:10 PM Title: Into the Storm

Yep, I hate it when Sersei’s happy. 

I find it interesting she’s not comparing him to any previous victims.  I would expect some rudeness like that from her.

Poor Oliver, he’s really summoning inner reserves of strength and self control to get through this.  It’s admirable, even though he’s being deceptive.  So turnabout really must be fair play.  I hope he finds a way to hurt her, really hurt her, on every level.  She has this picture of herself as loveable, but it’s only a reaction to her public mask.  The real her is tacky, monsterous, abysmal and greasy.  I would love for her to be forced to see herself as she truly is.

I have an idea, how about when Oliver goes deep inside her he finds some demon weasel eggs...little guys who just need a little help to get out of their shells and start chewing their way out of a certain psycho.  Yum yum.

Great chapter Duggernaut.  Thanks for my latest dose of reasons to hate Sersei.  It must have a recommended weekly allowance, cuz I find I’m craving more. 

pix



Author's Response:

Weasel eggs? Sweet innocent Sersei is beyond such things, delicate misunderstood flower she is. come now, why such hostility for her?

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 18 2017 8:21 PM Title: Into the Storm

Wow.... I miss the days when a sex scene lasted an entire chapter. Lately, I have been reading stories that just cut all the juicy stuff out.

One example:
She took the little man and player with him before she shoved him inside her. He tried to fight back but he was no match to her. Soon, she screamed with delight as her tiny lover gave her a powerful orgasm. She took him out and licked him clean.

Or another example:
She brought him to her love hole. She put him inside her and she came. She cleaned him up afterward.

Now this would make me said.

I'm glad you make these scenes so detailed and add personal behaviors the correspond to each character. I can feel Oliver's struggle as well as Sersei's desire and we see Sersei's desire is too strong.

If these sex scenes are this good, I can't wait to read about Oliver's sexy adventures with all these women.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Hmm, I hope this restores your faith that there can still be some wild and crazy fun in the genre. :)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18 2017 8:16 PM Title: Into the Storm

And Sersei definitely has a LOT of surface for Oliver to scratch!*

*Sorry; couldn't resist.

Author's Response:

Yep

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 14 2017 12:54 PM Title: Another Gut Wrenching Revelation

Holy Crap! Even the not-so-old-flame who ended his virginity is one of these girls?! Makes me wonder if this conspiracy is spread wider than Sersei's legs.

Author's Response:

How insidious are they? Local? national? International? We are only just beginning to get an understanding...

Reviewer: foreignkanto Signed [Report This]
Date: September 13 2017 7:54 PM Title: Another Gut Wrenching Revelation

Holy shit, his old girlfriend was an Onega too, and he's gonna be a dad?! I love how this just ups his resolve to not let them win. Go Oliver and Stan, you can beat them!

Author's Response:

Oliver is certainly proving himself to be resilient. We'll see how he feels after a night with Sersei though...

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2017 7:13 PM Title: Another Gut Wrenching Revelation

What this makes me wonder is just who is Sersi? 
Harmony doesn’t even know her brother’s fate, but Sersi knows that Oliver made Sara a mother.  Did someone plan on her getting Oliver?  Did they tell her so she could push his buttons?  Or did she go out of her way to develop her own contacts? 

I hope she winds up the best informed morsel in the weasel’s tummy.

And hey, didn't Stan say something nasty about Sara?  Even more proof of his intuition.

Thanks for another great chapter Duggernaut.  It was ponder-iffic.

pix



Author's Response:

good question. how well connected is sersei's family? Stan is the man :)

Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: September 13 2017 7:08 PM Title: Another Gut Wrenching Revelation

Sara's an Omega too?  Dang... that is gut wrenching.  I'm interested to know Oliver's game plan.  How can he hope to beat these monsters?  It's about time for Stan and Samantha to have a discussion about the Omegas...



Author's Response:

So it would seem, unless Sersei is lying, but why would she? The will be a samantha chapter coming soon, more answers along with it.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2017 5:13 PM Title: Another Gut Wrenching Revelation

No way she has a mousetrap on the front of her panties. Do panties even have giantess themes these days? That would be sexy. Imagine a panties with a tiny man on the front with a speech bubble saying "help." I wish.

I don't remember this Sara being mentioned in this story. Is she new? Also, I thought Oliver was a virgin? Hmm.

That last line! What a response by Sersei, implying sex, but also using such an innocent statement. That would excite me too even though I got hit with this whole "life is a lie" stuff.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

She totally did Tom, I swear it. I was watching a movie called the Heartbreak Kid and a girl had a pictured of David Bowie's face on her panties. Next chapter, Oliver and Sersei... I think you know where this is leading...  :)

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 08 2017 3:55 AM Title: Protect and Serve

Even though in peril, this is a chapter full of win for Stan. 

I love that he’s listening to his gut, even though he’s teetering on panic.  He’s showing he’s smart enough to not get honey trapped.  He’s not another dummy to fall before a pretty face.  That will make things interesting when he next meets Samantha.

Jill the cop raises some questions.  First and foremost: is she an agent for the Megs, or is she an agent for Edith?   Maybe, Vesper?   How much does the organization share it’s spies and enforcers?  And does Jill know why she’s looking at Stan?  I can understand why the sorority doesn’t know much.  But what about someone like Jill or Vesper?  How much of the big picture do they see?  Does someone like Cady (is she or isn’t she) acting as their agent, innocently, by spreading rumors set Stan off because she grows their power by growing their mystery?

And the mystery deepens...thanks Duggernaut.  Gonna be pondering this for a bit.

pix



Author's Response:

I think we get a chance to see the breadth of the influence this little sorority has... and you're right, Stan's intuition or spidey sense seems to be serving him well

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 07 2017 4:07 AM Title: Protect and Serve

@Carycomic,

Cady is Cadence from the coffee shop. Deacon played his song to her and they met before under a tree and such.

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Back to the chapter.

How come no one mentions the sexy police officer? She was the star of this chapter and I don't recall a single story on this entire website with a sexy police woman as a giantess.

Jill can pull me over, arrest me and cuff me. Then she can put me in her car, take me to her special jail cell in her bedroom and cuff me to her bedposts and then she can use me forever.....

I mean, wow, I was getting tempted like Stan. Except, I might have stuck around and forget about the mission. The temptation would have been too strong. Even though we don't know much about Jill, her dominant behavior, authority and control as a police woman makes her super attractive. I'm thinking of those naughty Halloween costumes...

Someone find me the crime list that the Omega Pi's are sending Jill, and I will fake everything just to get caught by her.

Im not surprised that Jill is working with the Omega Pi sisters. I already guessed this as a possibilty since the Omega Pi girls are hot and should have some influence on the cops nearby.

What I didn't expect was a sexy female cop. I was expecting some policemen who are hypnotized by the Omegas to do their dirty work for them. The girls tease them, and the cops do what they want. However, this new cop was an awesome, sexy twist and I love it! I can't believe I didn't even think of that.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Right about Cady. I think you would even let Jill waterboard you in her own unique way to prove your committment to law and order.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06 2017 9:00 PM Title: Protect and Serve

Hmmmm! Who's this Cady? An Omega Pi pledge who got rejected; or a member of some rival sorority?

Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: September 06 2017 7:33 PM Title: Protect and Serve

Hmmm... I think we all suspected that the Omegas had at least influence with law enforcement... and apparently there is more than simple influence.  It makes one wonder just how far their tentacles reach.  As I've said before, I believe they are embedded in every facet of life that touches or influences the success and functionality of the sorority.  Anything that supports the ongoing replenishment of Omega sons at universities is fostered an anything that threatens the sisters and the harvesting of their victims is eliminated.  Stan is just now beginning to realize just how extensive this conspiracy truly is.  Hopefully, Deacon and company will be of some help to Stan to sort this all out. It should be interesting to see Samantha's response when Stan explains what is happening.  Will she tow the Omega line and cover for her sisters and dismiss Stan’s allegations?  Will she realize Stan must now be dealt with and set him up for the sisters to take him?  Or will she finally break ranks with the Omegas and come clean hoping to save what is left of Oliver? 



Author's Response:

You've known it all along these girls have insinuated themselves into positions of power EVERYWHERE! There will be a samanth chapter coming in the next half dozen or so

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