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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 13 2018 5:16 PM Title: Submariner

Wow. This is a new level of submersion. Inside her pussy and also under the water.

Love how eager Sersei is with Oliver. She doesn't care about any person at the front door, and of her sisters, just her and Oliver. She enjoys every moment with him and wants to make it last forever.

Sersei is catching up to Brooklyn in terms of sexual domination. I doubt she will reach that level, but it's nice to see this side of Sersei.

Although I miss Brooklyn, where is Vesper!? She was the best at flirting with Oliver in this story and I'm absolutely anxious for Vesper to find some time with Oliver at his new size. I can picture Vesper tying up Oliver and then she starts flirting. Or more like she sexily suggests ideas that she might do to him. If you are running out of ideas Duggernaut, a transition to Vesper would be fresh and interesting.

Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Appreciate the reminder not to forget Vesper... ;)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2018 10:24 AM Title: What Big Eyes You Have

Hmmm! It appears Grandma Eleanor is one of those masochists who prefers brutal honesty to diplomatic schmoozing. As for Proavia Sabina? Something tells me Deacon is about to become her "adopted pet."

Author's Response:

Hmmm..

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2018 6:17 AM Title: What Big Eyes You Have

Oh my gosh!  This story has everything!  Intrigue, suspense, horror, mystery, humor, drama...and lots of sexy!  Plus the best SM protagonist (hopefully hero) ever up against a gallery of the most vile villainesses ever.

Gawd! I love it when Oliver tells one of them off!  Too bad it’s wasted...there’s not enough human in there for it to have any effect.  But I still love it.

And what the hell is going on with Deacon??? 

It’s amazing the weight that all the plot threads carry...it’s like there are no sub-plots, but the story is a mosaic of parallel events that hook you...pulling you along to the next chapter.

Look, Duggernaut, I can live with one chapter a week...but the edge of my seat is not that comfortable...just sayin’.

Peace

pix



Author's Response:

Doing what I can to keep delivering...all good things are worth waiting for... :)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2018 8:02 PM Title: Sweet Temptation

Yeah, I imagine this anti-vore clique would have to guard against reversion by their newest recruits. Sort of like the GTS version of AA!

Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: June 02 2018 9:40 AM Title: Sweet Temptation

So… Thomasin was is still an active Omega and was at Oliver's reaping.  The question remains, who is orchestrating the resistance and is recruiting girls like Thomasin?  In who's house are Cam and Agnes sheltered?  The cat and mouse between the giantess and Cam was well done... his fear palpable.  Looking forward to fun at Grandma's house and who else may be visiting besides Sersei and our diminutive hero...



Author's Response:

The resistance is still attached to Omega, a la Sam attending another harvest as they struggle to bolster their ranks to fight the greater body of the sorority. Next chapter . . . What Big Eyes You Have

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2018 2:43 AM Title: Sweet Temptation

I completely forgot who Agnes was. Glad you titled the chapter where you introduced her.

I also forgot that Cam is in this "rescue" facility.

Thomasin? I swear Duggernaut, you find the randomest names to name your characters. I like her attitude though and I'm anxious to see what she might do next.

I do miss Brooklyn with Cam. She was a goddess. None of these new characters will ever match her.

Lots of plot recently, so this chapter hinted at some fun later on. Looking forward to it.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Interesting girls deserve interesting names... :)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 25 2018 8:44 PM Title: I've had all I can Stand!

To paraphrase Lewis Carroll...things are getting seriouser and seriouser! Nor can I blame Stan for being both puzzled and frustrated. I, too, got almost all the coded message except for the squirrel part. I can only guess that it might be Deacon's way of saying "nut-eating vermin."

Author's Response:

Squirrel was the code word Deacon and Stan shared toidentify themselves to one another, just the word, context is irrelevant.

Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25 2018 11:52 AM Title: I've had all I can Stand!

So... We see Stan's role in all of this... The one that got away....  Deacon and Cady may be in a LITTLE trouble if that is old Edith... 



Author's Response:

The one that eluded the sisters for so long and who has now put himself squarely in their sights. Did we ever really find out which side Cady was on?

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19 2018 7:41 AM Title: Disharmony

The biggest clue to the future of the story in this chapter is the name Stanhope. Break it down.



Author's Response:

Perhaps some foreshadowing...or simply a clever misdirection

Reviewer: Glaazius Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17 2018 9:21 AM Title: First Time Away From Home

Although I am more of the micro/nano size stories, I just keep coming back to this one.
Very well written and an easy read, its making you eager for more.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for taking the time to check this one out and leave a review. I appreciate the comments and hope to keep you coming back to see how this all plays out in the end.

Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16 2018 9:30 PM Title: Disharmony

There are some interesting clues dropped in this chapter.  Who was Mildred Stanhope?  Who was her male child?  Is it possible he could be Stan? We find out that Agatha Hall held such a high position in the cult that she was close to on par with the old bag Edith.  We also see that Edith is capable of plain old cold-blooded murder.  Now that we know that Agatha participated with Edith in the reaping of Mildred, it's a good bet that she knows the spells required to perform the rituals.  Is this the way out for Cam and Oliver?



Author's Response:

The pieces of the puzzle are starting to come together but is it enough to break the cycle? 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 16 2018 1:35 AM Title: Disharmony

Alright Acacia. I hear you. You want to tie someone up and have your way with him. Well, I'm all yours.

My goodness. Reading/listening to a hot woman plan what she will do to a tiny is sometimes hotter than the act itself.

This is a great way for me to get interested in an Omega Pi girl with all these ladies in this story.

By the way, where is Vesper? Haven't seen her in a year or soemthing. I would love to see her have her way with Oliver.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Seems we have found another lovely to tempt you Tom. The question becomes whether or not she will get the chance to live out her wishes. 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 15 2018 8:20 PM Title: Disharmony

For some strange reason, I just had a mental image of Oliver Scotch-taped to a bouncing rubber ball while Harmony is dressed like a rhythmic gymnast.

I gotta stop watching Olympic Channel.

Author's Response:

Thanks goodness then you weren't watching badminton...

Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10 2018 12:22 PM Title: Precious Little Memories

Nice chapter... Sersei almost seems human in her relationship and interactions with Oliver.  That is, until she and Oliver interact with the other sisters on their way to the shower.  How she briefly shares Oliver with the guilt torn Harmony, not sure if she wants Oliver for her own pleasure or the pain weighing on her as she contemplates the life stolen from Oliver and potentially her young brother in the near future.  I would have enjoyed hearing Sersei chastise Harmony to not to talk or try to establish any kind of rapport with Oliver or any of the other "cigarette butts", further dehumanizing Oliver and the rest.  It should be interesting to see how Grandma Crawford reacts to Oliver when Sersei pays her visit.  Who knows, maybe Grandma Crawford will borrow Oliver for her own bath... OK, I’m gonna try to that visual out of my mind…



Author's Response:

You mentioned grandma and all of a sudden the rent scene from the movie kingpin popped into my head...sweet jesus...the next chapter focuses on harmony so some of your questions will be addressed.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10 2018 5:40 AM Title: Precious Little Memories

Seriously, though: I compliment you on your continuing to be creative while remaining true to the general rule about _NOT_ depicting interactions with juvenile giantesses under age 16!

A rule that seems to be getting increasingly ignored. :-(

Author's Response:

I havent read too many other stories of late and if the trend is indeed swinging toward an aqualung type site...might be time to pick my stories and go...

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 10 2018 5:34 AM Title: Precious Little Memories

Oh, crap! I was hoping the title of the next chapter would be "Shower Power."

But, I'm willing to settle for "Bath Man (Na-na-na-na-na-na-na-na)!

Author's Response:

Nice! Na na na. Bath to the future? To hell and bath? Bathdraft? 

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 09 2018 5:28 PM Title: Precious Little Memories

Seeing Stan in action as a classic tough guy is amazing in this genre. 

And everyone is rooting for him.  What a great character.

Oliver is proving to be a great character as a POV in Sersei’s clutches.  Literally.  His romantic gambit pulls you in and makes you really care about him.  At least I do.

The thing is, that this current chapter inspires so many questions in light of the last chapter.  If Sam’s actions have destroyed Stan’s relationship with her, can they pull together to help Oliver?  I have a feeling that he’s going to need both of them before his trials are over.  Is Stan going to make sufficient waves that there’s another attempt to interrogate Oliver?  Will wooing Sersei do him any good if that happens? 

Seeing Harmony again is interesting...seems she’s still having warring feelings.  Lots of these creatures have had them before seems likely.  And most of them are incapable of making the right choice.  Harmony’s shock at the truth might lean her toward guilt, but it leading to action seems like a narrow chance. 

This story gets more intriguing...more suspenseful ... more ... more ... awesome!  with every chapter.  You really know how to turn up the heat in every way Duggernaut.

Thanks for sharing this and happy writing.

Peace


pix



Author's Response:

It has been a harrowing journey this far for our intrepid albeit diminutive hero but you raise some interesting points...how will this little (forgive the pun) drama play out?

Reviewer: lord_ne Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2018 11:10 PM Title: First Time Away From Home

Aside from the excellent fanservice, this story has enough drama and mystery to carry it on its own.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and props on the story!

Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03 2018 12:04 PM Title: Coming Clean

Interesting... I didn't think that Sam would spill the beans about the sisters.  Stan has heard the truth about the Omegas from an Omega... That's a first... Will Sam arrive to explain in greater detail before Kent's little party?  Sam's response to the bands being removed from Kent was as if the significance of this act was profound.  What events has Stan set in motion?



Author's Response:

You may be absolutely right we have no idea what dominos have begun to fall...

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03 2018 11:18 AM Title: Coming Clean

So toluene destroyed the wristbands? This suggests that Omega Pi magic can be defeated by mundane means. Or that it wasn't truly magical. I'm going to make a note of this for later.



Author's Response:

Didn't destroy them but made them malleable enough to at least slip off. Maybe they're not as all knowing as they think they are.. 

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