If I was a character in this story, it's easily Deacon. I love he was in awe of Sersei and her naked body.

This was a great chapter becuase it's fun to see someone who enjoys being tiny. Now this was just a tease. I wonder if Deacon will be more afraid of more excited when the real fun starts.

As for who gets to keep Deacon, my vote is have Sersei give Deacon to Brooklyn since she lost Cam. Then Brooklyn can keep Deacon without sharing him with anyone. Deacon might actually enjoy his new life.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

That Stan is a crafty one.  If he can catch Sersei off guard, there should be no reason why he cannot rescue Oliver and Deacon. Would he be brash enough to take Sersei too? If he sees the Weeping stone, will he know its importance and to take it with him?  Hopefully Samantha will offer him some guidance.  I'm looking forward to Deacon's reaction to his new reality.  That was a nice touch with the unlocked door reference you friendly, trusting Canadian, you...

A few things stand out to me regarding this chapter... Sabina's reference to "Goddess"... Could she be referring to the entity that grants the power that makes all of the Omega evilness possible?  We know from previous chapters, that Omega sons are "offerings" to a deity of sorts.  Next is the cruelty and inhumanity of Grandma Crawford and Sersei.  They know that Deacon is not the son of an Omega and is not deserving of the fate dealt him, but rather than sympathize for the boy, they exude in gleefulness and satisfaction, relishing Deacon's circumstance.  It is truly disturbing.  A new victim, a former person whose humanity and future has been robbed.  A toy that they don't have to share with anyone and who will be theirs until they kill him.  What's with Sersei and "all she had been through recently"... Oh yeah, she lead her brother to the sisters like a lamb to the slaughter.  The poor girl, I hope she recovers.  Of course, the best spin on these events is knowing that Stan is on his way, ready to kick ass.  If he can find the weeping stone, with Samantha's help, there may be hope for our protagonists...

Okay, maybe it was a typo, maybe it was because of the swoon, but I liked that Sabina is such a shallow creep that she thought Sabina was Eleanor’s daughter and not her granddaughter.  Great out of touch moment. 

So all the inner circle members can harvest someone without a weeping stone.  But does that include selected sons?  I would have to conclude the answer is yes, considering how Sabina seemed to think his heritage was irrelevant.  Of course, that could be the swoon talking again.

And what is this awakening thing?  It can’t be good if the Omega’s are doing it.  And storing energy in the stone is something both the Omega’s and the resistance do.  Is that a sigh they’re working toward the same end? 

Alright, what is this business with “it was good to see Sersei happy given all she’d been through recently?”  Really?  Oliver was on the run for his life and super sleezy Sersei just missed some sleep.  Her grandma’s deranged.  Or maybe there’s something we missed...did she get a pimple, a hang nail...did she find out she’s gonna have to wait extra long for the next season of Game Of Thrones?  Shallow spoiled scum....hrmph.  God I hate it when Sersei’s happy.

So many clues and questions...you really know how to hook your audience Duggernaut.  Thanks for sharing this.

Peace


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PS...did you just leave Sersei alone in the house with a weeping stone?

Hoo Yah! 500 reviews!

A great, entertaining story and lots of great attention from great fans!

But...really...over a hundred chapters and still...Sersei hasn’t even been nibbled on by a demon weasel... how long do you expect me to endure?

Seriously, Duggernaut, thanks for a yarn that shows how awesome the size genre can be.

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And Oliver's hunt for the mythical creature known as Sersei's humanity continues...

Was it ever stated that Deacon was the son of an Omega?  If he is not the descendent of a sister, what happens when his family engages law enforcement and reports him missing? Of course, we know the sisters have infiltrated the local police, and will stymie any real investigation but it’s hard to believe that any parent of a missing person wouldn't move heaven and earth to find their missing child. This opens a new can of worms, unless of course his mother was an Omega.  If that’s the case, then never mind…

100 chapters of awesome!  That is amazing!

There has been so much to love in this story.  A slow character build has lead to so many plots and adventures going on....and all of it rich and thoughtful storytelling. 

I’m really enjoying how Oliver is trying to connect with Sersei and there’s just not enough human there to make that link with.  When he say’s “I’m concerned for a member of my family.” all she hears is wuh wuhwuh, wuh wuh wuhwuh.  (Charlie Brown Teacher voice...hee hee...)

It’s really encouraging to see Deacon trying to step up and do something for the cause, but I’m sorta stuck on his motivations.  Is he trying to impress Cady?  Is he just longing for adventure? Both?  Like everyone in this story, he’s an interesting and complex character and rather charms the audience into caring about him.  Now that he’s fallen into the clutches of the Megs will we see him go through some miserable transformation like we have Cam?  It’s like all the fun has been crushed in Cam’s soul, it would be a shame to see that fate befall Deacon.

So much turmoil and drama and suspense and mystery....great work Duggernaut.

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Hooooooo-whee! A hundred chapters in a row?! Who would've thought it? Yet, despite that longevity, the Omega Pis are obviously as strong as ever. Imagine it!
Shrinking poor Deacon while making it seem like a drug-induced hallucination.

I wonder what Stan and Cady are going to do?

Author's Response:

I know right. It would have been so much easy to have started at 100 instead of 1. The Stan/Cady thing will be revealed soon enough.

Down periscope... Dive! Dive! Dive!