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Reviewer: MacroGod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 19 2018 9:06 PM Title: The Impossible Dream

I'm so freakin in love with this story and this universe! I can't wait for the next update! :D



Author's Response:

Thanks again and I'm glad you're enjoying it. Hope to have something new soon.

Reviewer: Bigdawg K Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 13 2018 4:49 PM Title: The Impossible Dream

Good Chapter!  Carrycommic thinks Gaia and Hecate both very protective of ALL children.  My view is a bit different my bet is either Hera like or Athena like.  The one you would figure being most beneficail to the girls at O Pi would be the most likely to hide them.  Hera is all about faithfulness beteewn partners... The guys are in the most part doing that, the girls...

If the goddess returns I don't think anyone initally is going to be in a good way with her, though what her 'boys' have gone through and what her 'girls' have done for their own selfish purposes, well any of the four goddesses listed would likely pity the boys and make life intresting for the girls.  but all this is speculation, the plot is being built, the story being told and we will see what happens.  Thank you for another great chapter!



Author's Response:

Yes the pose described was based off Athena imagery with a dash of Selene for color. Is it real or all in his head? Some residue left by the stone? If real, how will she be? Fun stuff ahead

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 13 2018 9:49 AM Title: The Impossible Dream

Weird! A vision of Mother Earth Incarnate conflated with Hecate?

Author's Response:

Athena Selene amalgam for inspired imagery but much much older.

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 12 2018 8:11 PM Title: The Impossible Dream

That was strange...trippy.   

I’ve read lots of dream sequences before.  Lots of them.  But I’ve never gotten to the end of a dream sequence and felt like I had just had an intense dream.  I didn’t read this scene, I experienced it.  Brilliant and beautiful writing.

Thanks Duggernaut

pix



Author's Response:

Hey thanks for the great review and feedback. 

Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: December 12 2018 7:05 PM Title: The Impossible Dream

I am impressed.  The visuals in this chapter just blew me away.  Honestly, one of the best written chapers I have read on this site ever.  Was this dream profetic?  A vision of things to come?  The goddess herself?  



Author's Response:

Thanks for the awesome feedback. You raise an interesting question in that was this something external or just some constructive of a weary mind.

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