Date: December 19 2018 2:20 PM Title: Deacon and Cady Getting Close
Please more
too much is unhealthy hehe(what if Deacon gets stuck deep in Cada womb hehe)
I'm sorry, my english is bad
Author's Response:
Too much of a good thing can be just as bad as not enough.
Date: December 06 2018 12:21 AM Title: Deacon and Cady Getting Close
Nice chapter Dugg... a little intimacy... the calm before the storm perhaps? Always great to read your thoughtful and well-written work. Looking forward to the next installment...
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: December 05 2018 3:51 PM Title: Deacon and Cady Getting Close
As Dr. Seuss might say:
"Thanks for letting us have a little peek-in at Cady and Deacon."
Author's Response:
Green eggs and Stan?
[Report This]Date: December 04 2018 12:34 PM Title: Deacon and Cady Getting Close
Magic. That’s the only word to describe this chapter, magic.
In a narrative of awful, evil creatures controlling things this was an island of beauty and romance.
Sometimes as writers we manage to put magic upon the page. This was lovely and carried a feeling of naturalness and truth. It was beautiful.
You even managed to make Deacon more fun and Cady more sweet...I didn’t think that was possible.
Sometimes in a popular movie it feels like a romance scene or story line is clunkily inserted into the narrative... the sex at sixty formula... and it doesn’t always work. Here it works perfectly. I’m still compelled by events swirling around Oliver, but this was a much needed bit of joy and wonder. Well timed and well done.
Thank you Duggernaut.
Peace
pix
Author's Response:
Thanks Pix, I appreciate the feedback and am overjoyed you enjoyed this latest installment