Reviewer: Hershrunkenplaything Signed [Report This]
Date: September 16 2018 5:21 AM Title: Flirting With Danger

Fantastic writing so far. I really enjoy both the plot of the story and the phenomenal level of detail and perspective in your sex scenes. I love that you have use both the girls and the tiniest points of view.

Author's Response:

Thanks! It is always gratifying to hear someone enjoys my jumbled collection of words. :)

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed [Report This]
Date: August 25 2018 5:47 AM Title: Flirting With Danger

This has been an incredibly entertaining arc of this excellent tale. I've loved following Stan as he did almost everything right (he is after all, not a professional at such adventures) and still wound up tiny.  So, in a sense, he has been sidelined as he will no longer be able to provide the action in that way.  What form will his and Oliver's tale take now?

 

We were with him all along, crossing our fingers and sometimes yelling at the screen as we got scenes of cunning, excitement and suspense. Amazing storytelling. Variations on urban fantasy and tough guy fiction. All fascinating and compelling with great dialogue delivered by characters you really care about.

 

But now it feels like a cycle of the story is ending. Or, to make it even more addictive, has multiple endings. We have the sad endings of Stan's shrinking and failure to protect Kent, who has already endured so much trauma and tragedy in his life, and the happy ending of Deacon and Cady exploring the possibilities of their situation with loving care and affection.

 

And Deacon and Cady have been side characters, mostly, so far, but you've made their story so sweet and entrancing that you really want to see them find happiness. They seem to be off to a grand start in a scene that has both lightness and passion. Plus, just their little bit of love play provides a stark contrast to the Megs, highlighting the danger that Kent is in.

 

Thank you for your wonderful work Duggernaut. It has been a great read and it really has me eager to see what comes next.

 

Peace

 

 

pix

Author's Response:

Much appreciated Pix. More coming sooner than later...

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 24 2018 5:59 PM Title: Flirting With Danger

Hmm. It’s one thing to have Deacon take the lead, but imagine if Cady took control. This is setting up for some nice action coming up. I can’t wait!

I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Sometimes it's fun when they share the awkwardness