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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: August 05 2018 6:21 AM Title: Stand Offish

Ah! I had to re-read this chapter a third time to see how he latched on to the thingie. Your subtlety of detail is sometimes _too_ good!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 30 2018 7:58 PM Title: Stand Offish

@Sm: But, thus far, only the venerable-in-age leaders of the cult seem able to shrink guys just by telepathically linking up with it! All the younger weeyotches seem to require physical contact with it to make use of that mass-to-energy factor. Which raises the question...

Where on her naked personage was Sersei wearing her stone? ;-)

Author's Response:

After taking Deacon, Sabina enjoyed a swoon and subsequently left her weeping stone unattended, which Stan pocketed after handling it...

Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: July 29 2018 4:45 PM Title: Stand Offish

CC.... I'm pretty sure from prior chapters, it was the weeping stone that was the catalyst that converted the victim's mass to energy and then absorbed that life energy. We also have Stan's account of the sensations of holding the stone.  I think it's a good bet that the weeping stone is behind Stan's change in size.

 

Btw Has anyone else noticed the increase in the number of stories that involve college girls and sororities?  Imitation is the sincerest form of flattery...



Author's Response:

Correct about the stone. Who doesn't love college girls?

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 28 2018 2:53 PM Title: Stand Offish

Uh-oh! It looks like just their odorless pheromones can shrink males they haven't had carnal intimacy with.

Author's Response:

Stan handled the 'forgotten' weeping stone...

Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27 2018 2:16 PM Title: Stand Offish

Stan should know not to pick up strange rocks in the home of omegas.  The question would seem to be will he put two and two together and get the stone out of his pocket and if he does will he continue to shrink down to Oliver's size.  Sounds like Stan got the short end of this deal...



Author's Response:

Or should we say he got a LITTLE flustered in the heat of the moment...

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 26 2018 8:58 PM Title: Stand Offish

This chapter was just weird!

Stan enters and all the doors are unlocked! The on to the main house and also the door to Sersei's room. It seemed like someone wanted Stan to enter.

Then there is the glowing rock which could explain the shrinking, but it's still a mystery. He was able to hold and it felt hot and cold at the same time. The tingling reminded me of when Mrs Frost touched him. (Or was it a different lady.)

Then Stan was able to threaten Sersei with a knife! I never seen a Omega girl cower down to someone not from the sorority before. Also, Sersei easily gave them up. I thought she would have some spell underway.

Then Stan was able to escape? I am surprised. He might the only one to enter the house and escape. The Omega Pi house is one of those places that your friends tell you that "if you enter, you will never come back out".

If Stan shrinks, then Cady will have 3 little guys all to herself. Interesting. Also, I bet storytime will be fantastic once they find a safe place. I can't wait for Oliver to reveal his tales and adventures. You know Deacon will be excited.

Haha! Then Sersei was upset and got a hold of the license plate. But Stan is smart. He will probably find a new ride.

The good news is that since Sersei has the number of the license plate, maybe we will see that sexy cop back again!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Weird can be good...sometimes...

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