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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 25 2018 7:17 AM Title: Two Peas ina Pod

It would seem that Deacon
Is a doing a little peekin'
At a place that works
Like a sexual beacon.

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 20 2018 10:17 PM Title: Two Peas ina Pod

Okay, this is not because I don’t like Sersei...though, I don’t like Sersei a lot...a lot...but I don’t think that Deacon is truly that enamored with ol’ weasel snax. 

First, he’s got a nice thing going with Caddy.  To all of a sudden decide that the sweet, smart girl he’s been sharing an adventure with can just be brushed off to the side in favor of the blonde kidnaper of a friend he was willing to take risks for to aid...that’s supremely fickle.  And does that strike any of you as the real Deacon?

It doesn’t ring true to me.

Remember Thomasin’s comment about “the power of the stone working on him as well as her that made her feel this way?”  What we’re seeing is the effect of the weeping stone on a normal person and not a selected son.  Remember how Oliver just couldn’t follow a single clue or even stay suspicious when Cam went missing?  It’s the stone guiding him and all the other victims to their doom.  With a regular person, it becomes a sort of “love spell” that works in way more subtle ways on a son.

Ah, but I hear you saying “Sabina didn’t use a stone to harvest Deacon.”  Well, she wasn’t holding one when she did.  But that doesn’t mean she wasn’t channeling the power of the stone to perform her vicious miracle. 

Perhaps that’s how Edith does it too.  Summoning the power as long as she has the keeping of a stone.  Perhaps all their powers are defined aspects of a stone’s power.

Gee Duggernaut, thanks for making the mystery even more unbearable.  Keep up the awesome work.

And since I can’t resist a good romance...Sersei stinx...Deacon and Caddy 4 ever...

Peace

pix

Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: July 20 2018 8:26 AM Title: Two Peas ina Pod

Deacon's awe and amazement is understandable, especially in Sersei's naked presence.  He actually seems to be enjoying himself but does not yet grasp his rung on the totem pole.  Deacon does not understand that he is no longer a person, only a toy to be used.  Nor does he realize the permanence of his circumstances and that there is no going back and he probably has a very short amount of time to live.  When he has been battered and bruised by Sersei and the others, he will better understand his place and his outlook will be different.  So, go ahead Deacon, dive in and enjoy the rest of your brief existence.  I'm greatly looking forward the confrontation between Stan and Sersei and of course, the ramifications that will follow.  Great stuff!!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2018 5:55 PM Title: Two Peas ina Pod

If I was a character in this story, it's easily Deacon. I love he was in awe of Sersei and her naked body.

This was a great chapter becuase it's fun to see someone who enjoys being tiny. Now this was just a tease. I wonder if Deacon will be more afraid of more excited when the real fun starts.

As for who gets to keep Deacon, my vote is have Sersei give Deacon to Brooklyn since she lost Cam. Then Brooklyn can keep Deacon without sharing him with anyone. Deacon might actually enjoy his new life.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

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