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Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: July 10 2018 9:30 PM Title: No Stone Unturned

A few things stand out to me regarding this chapter... Sabina's reference to "Goddess"... Could she be referring to the entity that grants the power that makes all of the Omega evilness possible?  We know from previous chapters, that Omega sons are "offerings" to a deity of sorts.  Next is the cruelty and inhumanity of Grandma Crawford and Sersei.  They know that Deacon is not the son of an Omega and is not deserving of the fate dealt him, but rather than sympathize for the boy, they exude in gleefulness and satisfaction, relishing Deacon's circumstance.  It is truly disturbing.  A new victim, a former person whose humanity and future has been robbed.  A toy that they don't have to share with anyone and who will be theirs until they kill him.  What's with Sersei and "all she had been through recently"... Oh yeah, she lead her brother to the sisters like a lamb to the slaughter.  The poor girl, I hope she recovers.  Of course, the best spin on these events is knowing that Stan is on his way, ready to kick ass.  If he can find the weeping stone, with Samantha's help, there may be hope for our protagonists...



Author's Response:

I know, poor Sersei. How she has been able to cope is trulyt a testament to the strength of her character...

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 08 2018 4:07 PM Title: No Stone Unturned

YES! Once again, the villainous mastermind proves overconfident. But, in this case, instead of premature congratulations, we have the mastermind losing a valuable tool/weapon.

One that Stan the Man is sure to find in ch. 103!

Author's Response:

The plot thickens...

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 07 2018 9:27 PM Title: No Stone Unturned

Okay, maybe it was a typo, maybe it was because of the swoon, but I liked that Sabina is such a shallow creep that she thought Sabina was Eleanor’s daughter and not her granddaughter.  Great out of touch moment. 

So all the inner circle members can harvest someone without a weeping stone.  But does that include selected sons?  I would have to conclude the answer is yes, considering how Sabina seemed to think his heritage was irrelevant.  Of course, that could be the swoon talking again.

And what is this awakening thing?  It can’t be good if the Omega’s are doing it.  And storing energy in the stone is something both the Omega’s and the resistance do.  Is that a sigh they’re working toward the same end? 

Alright, what is this business with “it was good to see Sersei happy given all she’d been through recently?”  Really?  Oliver was on the run for his life and super sleezy Sersei just missed some sleep.  Her grandma’s deranged.  Or maybe there’s something we missed...did she get a pimple, a hang nail...did she find out she’s gonna have to wait extra long for the next season of Game Of Thrones?  Shallow spoiled scum....hrmph.  God I hate it when Sersei’s happy.

So many clues and questions...you really know how to hook your audience Duggernaut.  Thanks for sharing this.

Peace


pix

 

PS...did you just leave Sersei alone in the house with a weeping stone?



Author's Response:

It does seem that the Weeping Stone was overlooked does it not?

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 07 2018 9:03 PM Title: No Stone Unturned

No idea how Shrinkmeister even guessed this was Sabina. I don't even remember her. I was hoping it was Vesper who caught him instead.

I don't know. I think we are at that point where there might be too many characters. Perhaps, it's the long breaks between chapters. I'm not sure. I'm just forgetting the characters that don't show up as frequent.

I forgot about Eleanor, and had no idea who Sabina was. Also, what's with this goddess thing. Feels like this story is changing into something else. As if there's another reason to shrink these guys besides the fun for the women.

Deacon give to Sersei? While that seems interesting, this was the perfect chance for Brooklyn to make an appearance. Sersei already has Oliver so I'm not sure where you are going with this.

How did Sabina get that orgasm? Did she just imagine her pleasure, or was that the stone causing it?

While not the best chapter in my opinion, it sure was interesting to see that Deacon is in fact shrunk and we now know that you don't need a tie to the Omega family to be shrunk.

Also, what is the importance of a family keeper? Does that mean Deacon just won't be passed around? Doesn't seem like such a big deal to me.

Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Sorry for the expanding cast of characters...I do love Brooklynn...

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