Date: June 24 2018 9:29 AM Title: Deke
Was it ever stated that Deacon was the son of an Omega? If he is not the descendent of a sister, what happens when his family engages law enforcement and reports him missing? Of course, we know the sisters have infiltrated the local police, and will stymie any real investigation but it’s hard to believe that any parent of a missing person wouldn't move heaven and earth to find their missing child. This opens a new can of worms, unless of course his mother was an Omega. If that’s the case, then never mind…
Author's Response:
I do not believe we ever determined Deacon's ancestry. Interesting questions have now been asked... the answer will soon be revealed.
[Report This]Date: June 21 2018 7:47 PM Title: Deke
are all the guys dumb as a sack of hammers the story is predictable were a guy would love to be in there place but scence they hate it you make it like the evil witch's gotta out smart them at every turn cause a man can't think when she smiles and coo's and he only thing he does is think of is sex please give me break 'there's a lot more you need to be is original instead women sorry I guess witches? are smart and men are 'awe you know' but you do show promise but this story being so long and all makes it boring and makes it hard to read threw
Author's Response:
Lol, thanks
[Report This]Date: June 20 2018 5:42 AM Title: Deke
100 chapters of awesome! That is amazing!
There has been so much to love in this story. A slow character build has lead to so many plots and adventures going on....and all of it rich and thoughtful storytelling.
I’m really enjoying how Oliver is trying to connect with Sersei and there’s just not enough human there to make that link with. When he say’s “I’m concerned for a member of my family.” all she hears is wuh wuhwuh, wuh wuh wuhwuh. (Charlie Brown Teacher voice...hee hee...)
It’s really encouraging to see Deacon trying to step up and do something for the cause, but I’m sorta stuck on his motivations. Is he trying to impress Cady? Is he just longing for adventure? Both? Like everyone in this story, he’s an interesting and complex character and rather charms the audience into caring about him. Now that he’s fallen into the clutches of the Megs will we see him go through some miserable transformation like we have Cam? It’s like all the fun has been crushed in Cam’s soul, it would be a shame to see that fate befall Deacon.
So much turmoil and drama and suspense and mystery....great work Duggernaut.
pix
Author's Response:
Thanks! I appreciate the applause for crafting a story or at least a semblance of a story other than window dressing for the action, though there is some of that too. I think Deacon is trying to be a friend, whilst impressing the girl, two birds, one stone as it were. It will be interesting to see who he reacts to the event...
Date: June 19 2018 11:05 PM Title: Deke
Wow... awesome chapter! Very well written... While she is not specifically identified, I can only assume the mystery woman is Sabina. Obviously, she is not your ever day Omega, she has powers far beyond what Old Edith has displayed thus far. I can only speculate as to her abilities to control time and space and of course to harvest young men at will. She single-handedly took poor Deacon in a heartbeat by just touching him, no ritual, no weeping stones, draining him to nothing. Now, looking forward to the next chapter, how does Cady respond to Deacon's disappearance? Her next move should tell us where her loyalties lie. And more importantly, who will get to play with Deacon? Sabina? Grandma Crawford? Sersei?
The during the harvesting, the whooshing noise in the ears of the omega victims got me wondering where that phenomena was rooted. As I have stated previously in other reviews, the research done about the witchcraft used was apparent. From what I can tell, the sound is referred to in witchcraft as an "ear storm" Such stuff really exists. Your attention to detail continues to surprise Duggernaut. Nicely done.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I think the inference is definitely Sabina and yes she is not one of your run of the mill sorority girls for sure. The devil is in the details...and nobody ever said the devil couldn't be a girl...
[Report This]Date: June 19 2018 8:46 PM Title: Deke
Hooooooo-whee! A hundred chapters in a row?! Who would've thought it? Yet, despite that longevity, the Omega Pis are obviously as strong as ever. Imagine it!
Shrinking poor Deacon while making it seem like a drug-induced hallucination.
I wonder what Stan and Cady are going to do?
Author's Response:
I know right. It would have been so much easy to have started at 100 instead of 1. The Stan/Cady thing will be revealed soon enough.
[Report This]Date: June 19 2018 7:14 PM Title: Deke
Chapter 100! Let's go!
I really like Deacon's character. He reminds me of myself. Not fearing girls thinking "what's the worst that can happen", but when face to face with a woman/girl, he gets nervous.
I was going to comment on how typical of a name is Mr. Bigglesworth compared to other character names, but that was Deacon's idea and not yours. It just shows how bad of a liar Deacon is. Good writing here.
So who is this woman that has the ability to slow time and shift matter? Also, she can absorb energy? This magic seems familiar and I'm too lazy to look at the last 99 chapters to find who it was.
Wait, is Deacon shrunk? That was a great job describing how her lips cover his entire head, her fingers able to wrap around him and such. I think I answered my own question.
I don't know or remember who this woman is, but she sounds sexy and I love how calm yet aggressive she was. She had total control and I can only imagine how she would be as a giantess.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Glad you approve Tom, looks like we've found another lady to capture your fancy for the moment and chapter 100 brings us back to the whole purpose of this type of forum...a little shrinkage.