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Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19 2018 7:41 AM Title: Disharmony

The biggest clue to the future of the story in this chapter is the name Stanhope. Break it down.



Author's Response:

Perhaps some foreshadowing...or simply a clever misdirection

Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16 2018 9:30 PM Title: Disharmony

There are some interesting clues dropped in this chapter.  Who was Mildred Stanhope?  Who was her male child?  Is it possible he could be Stan? We find out that Agatha Hall held such a high position in the cult that she was close to on par with the old bag Edith.  We also see that Edith is capable of plain old cold-blooded murder.  Now that we know that Agatha participated with Edith in the reaping of Mildred, it's a good bet that she knows the spells required to perform the rituals.  Is this the way out for Cam and Oliver?



Author's Response:

The pieces of the puzzle are starting to come together but is it enough to break the cycle? 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 16 2018 1:35 AM Title: Disharmony

Alright Acacia. I hear you. You want to tie someone up and have your way with him. Well, I'm all yours.

My goodness. Reading/listening to a hot woman plan what she will do to a tiny is sometimes hotter than the act itself.

This is a great way for me to get interested in an Omega Pi girl with all these ladies in this story.

By the way, where is Vesper? Haven't seen her in a year or soemthing. I would love to see her have her way with Oliver.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Seems we have found another lovely to tempt you Tom. The question becomes whether or not she will get the chance to live out her wishes. 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 15 2018 8:20 PM Title: Disharmony

For some strange reason, I just had a mental image of Oliver Scotch-taped to a bouncing rubber ball while Harmony is dressed like a rhythmic gymnast.

I gotta stop watching Olympic Channel.

Author's Response:

Thanks goodness then you weren't watching badminton...

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