Date: May 10 2018 12:22 PM Title: Precious Little Memories
Nice chapter... Sersei almost seems human in her relationship and interactions with Oliver. That is, until she and Oliver interact with the other sisters on their way to the shower. How she briefly shares Oliver with the guilt torn Harmony, not sure if she wants Oliver for her own pleasure or the pain weighing on her as she contemplates the life stolen from Oliver and potentially her young brother in the near future. I would have enjoyed hearing Sersei chastise Harmony to not to talk or try to establish any kind of rapport with Oliver or any of the other "cigarette butts", further dehumanizing Oliver and the rest. It should be interesting to see how Grandma Crawford reacts to Oliver when Sersei pays her visit. Who knows, maybe Grandma Crawford will borrow Oliver for her own bath... OK, I’m gonna try to that visual out of my mind…
Author's Response:
You mentioned grandma and all of a sudden the rent scene from the movie kingpin popped into my head...sweet jesus...the next chapter focuses on harmony so some of your questions will be addressed.
Date: May 10 2018 5:40 AM Title: Precious Little Memories
Seriously, though: I compliment you on your continuing to be creative while remaining true to the general rule about _NOT_ depicting interactions with juvenile giantesses under age 16!
A rule that seems to be getting increasingly ignored. :-(
Author's Response:
I havent read too many other stories of late and if the trend is indeed swinging toward an aqualung type site...might be time to pick my stories and go...
[Report This]Date: May 10 2018 5:34 AM Title: Precious Little Memories
Oh, crap! I was hoping the title of the next chapter would be "Shower Power."
But, I'm willing to settle for "Bath Man (Na-na-na-na-na-na-na-na)!
Author's Response:
Nice! Na na na. Bath to the future? To hell and bath? Bathdraft?
[Report This]Date: May 09 2018 5:28 PM Title: Precious Little Memories
Seeing Stan in action as a classic tough guy is amazing in this genre.
And everyone is rooting for him. What a great character.
Oliver is proving to be a great character as a POV in Sersei’s clutches. Literally. His romantic gambit pulls you in and makes you really care about him. At least I do.
The thing is, that this current chapter inspires so many questions in light of the last chapter. If Sam’s actions have destroyed Stan’s relationship with her, can they pull together to help Oliver? I have a feeling that he’s going to need both of them before his trials are over. Is Stan going to make sufficient waves that there’s another attempt to interrogate Oliver? Will wooing Sersei do him any good if that happens?
Seeing Harmony again is interesting...seems she’s still having warring feelings. Lots of these creatures have had them before seems likely. And most of them are incapable of making the right choice. Harmony’s shock at the truth might lean her toward guilt, but it leading to action seems like a narrow chance.
This story gets more intriguing...more suspenseful ... more ... more ... awesome! with every chapter. You really know how to turn up the heat in every way Duggernaut.
Thanks for sharing this and happy writing.
Peace
pix
Author's Response:
It has been a harrowing journey this far for our intrepid albeit diminutive hero but you raise some interesting points...how will this little (forgive the pun) drama play out?