Date: April 28 2018 12:18 PM Title: Down for the Kent
Hah... you have to love Stan's style... just clocking Kent to knock a little sense into him. Kent could prove to be a very useful ally for Stan as he digs deeper into the disappearances of the Omega victims. How will Stan balance Kent's safety with his need to learn Oliver's whereabouts and solve this mystery? The sisters, with their mystery wrist bands have truly marked what is theirs. As others have said, who knows what is going on here and what these bands capabilities are. It should be interesting to see what measures Stan will take to remove the them... if it's even possible. Spooky 'Meg magic!
I'm Looking forward to Stan and Sam. Stan has seen enough to know if Sam tries bs him about what the sisters are up to. Will he believe the truth if Sam breaks down and tells him?
Author's Response:
Stan and Sam is going to be an interesting dialogue. How much more of her BS will he stoamch before he calls her on it. Next chapter should be telling...
[Report This]Date: April 27 2018 11:53 PM Title: Down for the Kent
There is a reason why most colleges are mostly filled with women now. The men get outsmarted by the women and are forced to serve them.
These bands are basically these girls branding these young men. These "bands" are "brands" stuck on these guys and they have no idea. They mix their attention from girls as something positive. Makes you wonder why no one has questioned why girls just randomly attached themselves to these boys.
Now that Stan knows a little more about these pink wristbands, it makes the ones he bought at that store almost worthless. Especially if there is actual technology within the real wristbands.
Imagine a microphone, tracker, and sensor built into each wristband so these girls of Omega Pi can hunt down each guy much more easily.
Once you get marked with a wristband, you can't them off, silly men. You just became branded by these lovely ladies, and became "Property of Omega Pi".
This is what Stan just thought and his mind wanders about how deep these sorority has changed this university. The risk has escalated and Stan just got a taste of the true power of Omega Pi.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
All of a sudden, we've peeked behind the curtain only to find there is no wizard, just a clever sorceress pulling all the strings. Is Stan up to the challenge or will he shrink away from the pressure?
[Report This]Date: April 26 2018 9:03 PM Title: Down for the Kent
Suitably ominous cliff-hanger. What more need be said?
Author's Response:
Yep
Date: April 26 2018 6:19 PM Title: Down for the Kent
Stan and Sam? He'll know everything next chapter.
Author's Response:
Cue the dramatic music...
[Report This]Date: April 26 2018 5:50 PM Title: Down for the Kent
Oh wow...I was wondering what would happen if they tried that. Maybe Oliver and Cam could have removed one or two...but damn! That just sends a chill up my spine.
Great horror moment...and so subtle.
I also have to mention the really cool chemistry between Stan and Kent. They don’t quite jell the way Stan and Deacon did. Stan is delightfully coarse and Kent comes off as out of his league. Nice characterizations.
It also lets us see some magic... evil, creepy ‘Meg magic. Ick!
The real magic is your craft Duggernaut. Once again you’ve given us a great chapter that draws us in...waiting for the next chapter.
Thank you and happy creating
pix
Author's Response:
Shit just got real and things are only picking up speed.