Date: April 18 2018 7:23 PM Title: Venus Flytrap
Stan the improvising man...Carol knows more about Stan than she admits. Careful Stan... Don't be fooled...
Author's Response:
He's Stan-tastic!!!
[Report This]Date: April 13 2018 9:09 PM Title: Venus Flytrap
Okay, I really love that Stan’s original plan with bands fell by the wayside. It was a great plan, but that has such a ring of truth about it. And adapting a new plan, his improvising on the fly, gives the story such energy. Great work!
I am a little curious if Carol’s flirting is a result of real interest (whatever that means for one of the Megs,) the information network Stan describes ...or Cady phoning her while Deacon stepped out to talk to Stan???
Loving the dramatic tension. So awesome, Duggernaut.
Peace
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Author's Response:
Could be any number of possibilities as to Carol's interest, feigned or otherwise....
Date: April 13 2018 1:18 PM Title: Venus Flytrap
Stan missed his calling as a detective.
Author's Response:
Cary's review summed it up. Stan is the man, but will he be in time?
[Report This]Date: April 13 2018 7:52 AM Title: Venus Flytrap
"There's a Stan who leads a life of danger. To every girl he meets, he stays a stranger. With every move he makes, another chance he takes. The odds are he won't be full-size, tomorrow."
"Secret Agent Stan! Secret Agent Stan. She's given you her number...and soon she'll take your height."
With deepest apologies to Johnny Rivers.
Author's Response:
Nicely done!