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Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: September 26 2017 6:27 PM Title: Mother is the name for God...

I wanted to say how enjoyable the chapter was.  More and more, Cerys' statements made to Oliver seem to be true.  There seems to be a separatist segment within the Omegas, they do have a weeping stone and apparently, Samantha is storing the life energy from the reaping of other poor saps to try to restore Oliver. Interesting.  So, wow, Samantha is a Frost... possibly even the daughter of the Queen bitch herself.  I wonder if that's the reason Edith gave Oliver a little slack during his interrogation. It sounds like Stan could be in serious jeopardy from old Edith.  Hopefully he takes the advice given to keep clear. Now... On to Cam's fate... don’t let us down Cerys…



Author's Response:

Thanks! It does seem to lend some credence to Cerys' statement, but...  What is Oliver is actually Edith's grandson, there because her family pride is on the line

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2017 12:58 AM Title: Mother is the name for God...

Well the first half of this chapter made less sense than most of Carycomics jokes. :)

The second half was brilliant. A classic drama situation. Stan, strong minded and willing to try anything to get what he wants. Then Sam, who has been holding this secret in might have cost her Stan's life and she is not only sobbing about Charley and Oliver, but now for Stan too.

Is she Mrs. Frosts daughter? That makes Oliver much more important. So is he her grandson???? This chapter made more questions than answers.

I'm going to stare at my door now until a leggy brunette knocks on it.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Oooh double burn, given the age disparity between Edith and Sam, the relationship might be more distant, but given the reaping anything is possible. Talk about an over protective mother...

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2017 8:59 PM Title: Mother is the name for God...

This damn good.  Though I’m really with Stan on this one.  If Oliver gets done in, he’s probably gonna wedge the doors shut and douse the place in gasoline.  Burn Sersei Burn.

Just because Sam and Tomi  aren’t in with the Edith crowd doesn’t redeem them one bit.  Just because they do something different with the power they steal doesn’t make them good people.  And just because Sam doesn’t want to loose Stan or Oliver doesn’t make her one bit more worth while. 

And damn!  I gotta agree with Shrinkmeister.  This don’t mean Cerys was telling the truth. 

But lets imagine that there is an group of rogue ‘megs...how does that help Oliver?  He’s gonna get the Cam treatment big time...all the psychos are gonna go at him in high gear because their time with him will be limited.  He’s in a tough spot and the clock is ticking. 

And this is the first we’ve seen of a weeping stone...wait...did Sam say her name was Frost?  Gaaahhh....that explains so much....and raises so many more questions...damn...still totally hooked, Duggernaut.  You tell the most addicting stories. 
Thanks...I think.

Peace

pix



Author's Response:

"Rise up, gather round, rock this place to the ground, burn it up, let's go for broke, watch the night go up in smoke!"

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2017 7:52 PM Title: Mother is the name for God...

Hmmmmmm! Maybe Cerys (the one who devoured Cam) wasn't lying, entirely. Maybe she was telling the truth about their being a dissident movement within this Community.

She's simply not one of them.

Author's Response:

Maybe not entirely, or just giving up enough to make it seem plausible...maybe

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