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Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 19 2017 5:10 PM Title: Into the Storm

Yep, I hate it when Sersei’s happy. 

I find it interesting she’s not comparing him to any previous victims.  I would expect some rudeness like that from her.

Poor Oliver, he’s really summoning inner reserves of strength and self control to get through this.  It’s admirable, even though he’s being deceptive.  So turnabout really must be fair play.  I hope he finds a way to hurt her, really hurt her, on every level.  She has this picture of herself as loveable, but it’s only a reaction to her public mask.  The real her is tacky, monsterous, abysmal and greasy.  I would love for her to be forced to see herself as she truly is.

I have an idea, how about when Oliver goes deep inside her he finds some demon weasel eggs...little guys who just need a little help to get out of their shells and start chewing their way out of a certain psycho.  Yum yum.

Great chapter Duggernaut.  Thanks for my latest dose of reasons to hate Sersei.  It must have a recommended weekly allowance, cuz I find I’m craving more. 

pix



Author's Response:

Weasel eggs? Sweet innocent Sersei is beyond such things, delicate misunderstood flower she is. come now, why such hostility for her?

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 18 2017 8:21 PM Title: Into the Storm

Wow.... I miss the days when a sex scene lasted an entire chapter. Lately, I have been reading stories that just cut all the juicy stuff out.

One example:
She took the little man and player with him before she shoved him inside her. He tried to fight back but he was no match to her. Soon, she screamed with delight as her tiny lover gave her a powerful orgasm. She took him out and licked him clean.

Or another example:
She brought him to her love hole. She put him inside her and she came. She cleaned him up afterward.

Now this would make me said.

I'm glad you make these scenes so detailed and add personal behaviors the correspond to each character. I can feel Oliver's struggle as well as Sersei's desire and we see Sersei's desire is too strong.

If these sex scenes are this good, I can't wait to read about Oliver's sexy adventures with all these women.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Hmm, I hope this restores your faith that there can still be some wild and crazy fun in the genre. :)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18 2017 8:16 PM Title: Into the Storm

And Sersei definitely has a LOT of surface for Oliver to scratch!*

*Sorry; couldn't resist.

Author's Response:

Yep

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