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Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 08 2017 3:55 AM Title: Protect and Serve

Even though in peril, this is a chapter full of win for Stan. 

I love that he’s listening to his gut, even though he’s teetering on panic.  He’s showing he’s smart enough to not get honey trapped.  He’s not another dummy to fall before a pretty face.  That will make things interesting when he next meets Samantha.

Jill the cop raises some questions.  First and foremost: is she an agent for the Megs, or is she an agent for Edith?   Maybe, Vesper?   How much does the organization share it’s spies and enforcers?  And does Jill know why she’s looking at Stan?  I can understand why the sorority doesn’t know much.  But what about someone like Jill or Vesper?  How much of the big picture do they see?  Does someone like Cady (is she or isn’t she) acting as their agent, innocently, by spreading rumors set Stan off because she grows their power by growing their mystery?

And the mystery deepens...thanks Duggernaut.  Gonna be pondering this for a bit.

pix



Author's Response:

I think we get a chance to see the breadth of the influence this little sorority has... and you're right, Stan's intuition or spidey sense seems to be serving him well

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 07 2017 4:07 AM Title: Protect and Serve

@Carycomic,

Cady is Cadence from the coffee shop. Deacon played his song to her and they met before under a tree and such.

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Back to the chapter.

How come no one mentions the sexy police officer? She was the star of this chapter and I don't recall a single story on this entire website with a sexy police woman as a giantess.

Jill can pull me over, arrest me and cuff me. Then she can put me in her car, take me to her special jail cell in her bedroom and cuff me to her bedposts and then she can use me forever.....

I mean, wow, I was getting tempted like Stan. Except, I might have stuck around and forget about the mission. The temptation would have been too strong. Even though we don't know much about Jill, her dominant behavior, authority and control as a police woman makes her super attractive. I'm thinking of those naughty Halloween costumes...

Someone find me the crime list that the Omega Pi's are sending Jill, and I will fake everything just to get caught by her.

Im not surprised that Jill is working with the Omega Pi sisters. I already guessed this as a possibilty since the Omega Pi girls are hot and should have some influence on the cops nearby.

What I didn't expect was a sexy female cop. I was expecting some policemen who are hypnotized by the Omegas to do their dirty work for them. The girls tease them, and the cops do what they want. However, this new cop was an awesome, sexy twist and I love it! I can't believe I didn't even think of that.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Right about Cady. I think you would even let Jill waterboard you in her own unique way to prove your committment to law and order.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06 2017 9:00 PM Title: Protect and Serve

Hmmmm! Who's this Cady? An Omega Pi pledge who got rejected; or a member of some rival sorority?

Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed [Report This]
Date: September 06 2017 7:33 PM Title: Protect and Serve

Hmmm... I think we all suspected that the Omegas had at least influence with law enforcement... and apparently there is more than simple influence.  It makes one wonder just how far their tentacles reach.  As I've said before, I believe they are embedded in every facet of life that touches or influences the success and functionality of the sorority.  Anything that supports the ongoing replenishment of Omega sons at universities is fostered an anything that threatens the sisters and the harvesting of their victims is eliminated.  Stan is just now beginning to realize just how extensive this conspiracy truly is.  Hopefully, Deacon and company will be of some help to Stan to sort this all out. It should be interesting to see Samantha's response when Stan explains what is happening.  Will she tow the Omega line and cover for her sisters and dismiss Stan’s allegations?  Will she realize Stan must now be dealt with and set him up for the sisters to take him?  Or will she finally break ranks with the Omegas and come clean hoping to save what is left of Oliver? 



Author's Response:

You've known it all along these girls have insinuated themselves into positions of power EVERYWHERE! There will be a samanth chapter coming in the next half dozen or so

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